CET-4-writing英语四级作文写作指导.ppt
CET-4,Lisa Sep,2012,Introduction,词汇和语法,四级考试流程,9：00 发答题卡I（写作和快速阅读）9：10 作文考试开始 9：35 发试题册9：40 快速阅读9：55 收答题卡I，准备听力考试10：00 听力考试10：35 仔细阅读11:00 完型填空11：15 翻译11：20 考试结束 收答题卡II和试题册,四级分值划分,Writing：30minutes，107points（15%）Skimming and scanning:15 minutes，70points（10%）Listening comprehension:35minutes，249points（35%）Reading in depth:（包括选词填空和篇章阅读）25 minutes，179points（25%）Cloze:15 minutes，70points（10%）Translation:5 minutes，35points（5%）,精确分数,写作,大学英语教学大纲对英语四级写作部分的要求,能用常见的应用文体完成一般的写作任务，能描述个人经历、事件、观感、情感等，能就一般性话题或提纲在半小时内写出120-180词的短文，内容基本完整、用词恰当，语篇连贯。能在一般或应用写作中使用恰当的写作技能。,评分依据,思想表达：简单化篇章组织：格式化（提出问题，分析问题，解决问题）句法表达：多变化（和翻译难题相同，考生需要熟悉复杂的句子结构）理解“一个英文句子只能有一个谓语动 词”这条基本原则。词汇表达：修饰化,历年真题回顾,07年12月 What Electives to Choose08年6月 Recreational Activities08年12月 Limiting the Use of Disposable Plastic Bags09年6月 Free Admission to Museums09年12月 Creating a Green Campus,10年6月 Due Attention Should Be Given to Spelling10年12月 How Should Parents Help Children to Be Independent?11年6月 Online Shopping11年12月 Nothing Succeeds without a Strong Will 12年6月 On Excessive Packaging,三、写作安排,1.写作安排：（1）构思：大小：篇-段-句-词（-标点符号）（2）写作：小大：（标点）-词-句-段-篇2.按照写作顺序安排写作：I.词：（1）要求：准确、达意（2）着重介绍：连接词a.时间：afterwards;shortly;soon;in the meantime;meanwhile;currently;finally;eventually;ultimately,三、写作安排,b.列举：first;second;third;to start/begin with;then/next/more important;last/finally;for one thing.for another.c.强调：indeed;did/do/does;certainly;merely/only/simply;it is.that.d.转折：however;nevertheless;but;yet;on the other hand;e.总结：in conclusion,to sum up,in short,in brief,in a word,all in all,on the whole,finally,generally speaking,三、写作安排,II.句句式多样、长短句结合、适当引用名句（1）基本句型：SVC:The exam proves very difficult.SV:Everybody laughed.SVO:I want a book.SVOO:Mary lent me her dictionary.SVOC:We made him our spokesman.,三、写作安排,（2）准确引用：One false step will make a great difference.A fall into the pit,a gain in your wit.Beauty without virtue is a rose without fragrance.All that glitters is not gold.Look before you leap.Rome was not built in a day.First things first.,尽量少用简单句（只有一套主谓结构），多使用复杂点的长句子，增加写作句子的难度。E.g.One is that some museums may find it increasingly difficult to run as usual without admission fees,which used to cover a considerable amount of the expenses for the maintenance of the museums.,三、写作安排,III.段1.topic sentence 主题句：（1）主题句的位置：每段第一个句子（2）主题句中关键词：具体例：He can fix a bicycle himself.She tries to improve her looks.（3）主题句含中心思想2.developing sentence 扩展句：（1）主次扩展句（2）列举举例、对比比较、因果分析3.concluding sentence 结尾句：,三、写作安排,IV.篇1.字数、美观、架构2.说服力、洞察力、有意义,写作步骤,1.审题：最重要也必须做的一步。审题的目的就是根据不同体裁确定不同的写作方法。通过审题，我们可以看出四级作文大都是三段式。,写作步骤,2.确定主题句（topic sentence）主题句既能保证你不跑题，又能帮助你制定写作思路。而写主题句最保险的方法就是直接翻译中文提纲,写作步骤,3.组织段落（写作的难点）1）具体办法：确定主题句后，接下来的工作就是展开论述，也就是对主题句进行扩展。最基本的解决办法是扩大词汇量，丰富自己的语法存储。在写作时，语法和词汇都是最基本的。课下多读范文，学一些好的句型，短语或者单词。,写作步骤,2）段落的衔接与连贯（组织篇章段落所必须的）列举法：for example分类法：most of all,besides,moreover因果关系法：比较法：举例法：,写作步骤,3）结尾句，与主题句相呼应，完善一个段落。,写作注意事项,标点：明确标点符号的意义，写作时应用准确，尤其注意逗号的用法（不能连接两个句子。）单词：书写正确，意思符合要求，能准确表达你的意思。注意四级垃圾词汇，尽量用些四级高分词汇和短语。,写作注意事项,句子：主谓结构要完整。1）适当变换句式：用否定句，倒装句，强调句代替一般简单句。2）用一些复杂句式：定语从句，表语从句，主语从句，宾语从句，强调句等等。,写作注意事项,段落：注意段落间句子衔接，使段落内容丰富，句子关系紧密，意思连贯。篇章：书写。内容紧扣主题，注意段落之间衔接。写完后一定要仔细检查，尤其要避免拼写和语法错误。,The Last Suggestion,多看范文，背诵好的单词，短语和句子increasinglya growing number ofPeopleseemtofailtotakeintoaccountthefactthateducationdoesnotendwithgraduation.Remember:One should make use of what he has learned.,Specific notes:,1.Write complete,correct and meaningful sentence.e.g.It is different in our heart of their images.2.Attention to the relations of verbs in the sentence.e.g.Men are always think of their career.3.Attention to the agreement of subject and verb.e.g.She work hard.,4.Avoid run-on sentence(run-on sentence：a sentence that has two main clauses without connecting words or correct punctuation 连写句)e.g.I am a teacher,I work here.5.Attention to There be clausee.g.There are many people cannot afford an apartment in big cities.6.Attention to the correct form of words and part of speech of wordse.g.He did the work very easy.,
