新人教版九年级英语第四单元写作指导.ppt
,Unit 4 I used to be afraid of the dark.,Section B Writing,Talking,3a,Write notes about how you have changed in your appearance,personality and hobbies.Then talk with a partner about your changes.,Appearance:tall,short,fat,thin,slim,strong,young,old,straight hair,curly hair,long hair,short hair,a medium body,Talking,Personality:humorous,outgoing,serious,funny,smart,friendly,shy,helpful,quiet,active,brave,unfriendly.hobbies:read cartoon/novel,sing,dance,playfootball/basketball,Talking,What makes a good composition?,Discussion,写作步骤,审题立意定主人称时态用词得当检查修改,写作时,找关键词由词组句组句成段扩句成段,Content,Everything needed included which is related to your view.(内容要完整),Structure,Good beginning and ending(好的开头结尾)Well organized and smoothly developed(结构合理,行文流畅)Proper linking words between sentences（使用恰当的连接词）,练一练,Write sentences by using used to:,1.I/have curly hair/have straight hairI used to have curly hair,but now I have straight hair.2.I/so fat/thinI used to be so fat,but now I am thin.,练一练,Write sentences by using used to:,3.I/shy/outgoing and braveI used to be shy,but now I am outgoing and brave.4.I/read books on martial arts/read books on Western cultureI used to read books on martial arts,but now I read books on Western culture.,练一练,Write sentences by using used to:,1.我过去是走路上学的。I used to go to school on foot/walk to school.2.我过去喜欢跑步，但现在我喜欢打篮球。I used to like running,but now I like playing basketball.,Proper linking words between sentences（连接词）,first,second,third(the most important)firstly,secondly,thirdly(finally),首先，第二，第三,表示举例子：for example 例如Takefor example 以为例such as 比如like 像,表示转折：however(but)然而(但是),表示个人观点：In my view 在我看来In my opinion 我认为As far as I am concerned 就我而言,Write about how you have changed.What did you use to be like?Which change is the most important one,and why?,3b,Try to write threeparagraphs.（总分总）,Paragraph 1:General introduction about the changes in your life.,Paragraph 2:The most important change and how it happened.,Paragraph 3:To express your own ideas,How Ive Changed!My life has changed a lot in the last few years.I used to_.Now Im _.The biggest change in my life was_ _.This is the most important change because_.,How Ive Changed！My life has changed a lot in the past few years.I used to have so much time,but now Im too busy.I always used to get up early and stay in school all day.Before I go to high school,I used to spend lots of time playing games with my friends,but I just dont have the time anymore.In the evening,I used to watch TV or play computer games,but now I have to study.,I love music,and my father used to take me to concerts.But I still really love my present life.The biggest change in my life was Im more busy than before,because I went into high school and I have morehomework.,
