英语短文改错新.ppt

,How to do Proof-reading,一、2014年高考辽宁卷,Dear Jeremy and Alice,Although weve been delighted to have you as neighbors,were hoping to settle something that bothers to us.In a word,your dog-Cleo.Weve called several time about Cleos early morning barking.It is difficult to understanding why she barks every minute shes outside.The early morning barking have been disturbing us as we are often up all night with the baby.Beside,Cleo tends to bark a average of six hours a day.This morning she starts barking even before 5 oclock.That is too much for us,considering how closely the houses are.We appreciate our apologies and good will,but we hope that you can figure a good way of setting the matter.,times,understand,has,Besides,an,started,your,out,close,改错类型统计,多词,1.When he returned to home,he found his wallet was stolen.,2.Regarded as the best in the class,so he was praised at the meeting.,3.This dictionary is cheap enough for me to buy it.,4.He joined in the club last year.,5.You need not to go with me unless you are free now.,He is such honest boy that all of us like him.,He is better one of the two.,She will present at the meeting tomorrow.,We heard the news our team had won.,The population of China is much larger than of Japan.,He asked me not go there.,an,the,be,that,that,to,缺词,I was only four when she passes away.,There are so much that we often share them with our neighbors.,We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at no cost.,If we could show concern to others on need,the world would be a better place to live in.,The fruits are small in size,but juicy and taste.,passed,tasty,many,wonderful,in,错词,主要考点：名词、动词、形容词、副词、代词、冠词、连词与介词。,名词,名词主要考查单数名词和复数名词的错用，形容词错用作名词，名词错用其近义词等。,pictures,information,home,2、On the way up I was busy taking picture since the scenery was so beautiful.,3、He collected some informations about computers.,1、They dont want me to do any work at family.,4、I noticed that the carriage was noise and filled with people.,noisy,动词,1)时态错用（一般过去时与一般 现在时）。,6)非谓语动词：不定式，动名词，and 连接的前后一致，现在分词和过去分词的区别等。,常见错误,2)第三人称单数形式错用。,3)主谓不一致。,4)缺少谓语动词（尤其缺be动词）。,5)语态错用。,1.They will do all they can make sure that I get a good education.,to,visited,5.In front of my house stand a tall tree.,3.I use to play ping-pong a lot in my spare time,but now I am interested in football.,4.What your favourite sport?,2.As we climbed the mountains,we fed monkeys,visiting temples and told stories.,used,is,stands,形容词与副词,主要涉及它们之间的相互误用.,Unfortunately,2.Who works the most careful in your class?,carefully,1、Unfortunate,there are too many people in my family.,代词,1.The Smiths did his best to make me feel at home.,主要考指代是否一致，it用法及定语从句中关系代词的误用等,2.I will never forget the day when we spent together.,their,which,1.As everyone knows its famous mountain.,a,3.What a great progress he has made.,冠词,冠词考查是否使用冠词与冠词相互误用。,2.Suddenly I caught a sight of my English teacher in the crowd.,1、The food was expensive and the service was good.,but,or,when,连词,主要考查各连词误用,特别注意语意和行文逻辑的错误。,2、as if my parents treat me as a visitor and a guest.,3.It was about noon we arrived at the foot of the mountain.,介词,主要涉及到是否多用介词和固定短语搭配中的介词,1.I was so tired that I fell asleep at the moment my head touched the pillow.,2.We practise for three times every week.,短文改错应试策略,1、从篇章着手，理解大意 通读全文，弄清文章的脉络层次、中心思想，把握作者所采用的时态、语态、人称和数的变化。可以先把短文中明显的错误做好标记。,2、通读全文后，以句子为单位进行分析、找出错误，并加以改正。,4.复读全文，检查核对注意修改符号的准确性,3以篇为单位，找句中错误。许多时候，就某一行或某一句单独而言常常难以判断其是否正确，错误何在，而必须以全篇为一整体才可对该句，进而对该行作出判断。,一、2014年高考陕西卷,My father took me out camping for the first time when I was seven.He wanted teach me about animals,insects and trees.My uncles all come along with bows and arrows for hunting.One evening at sunset,we sat by the fire,have our barbecue.Just then a bird was flying over us.My uncles immediate jumped up and shot their arrows on the bird.Neither of the arrows hit the target.Suddenly the arrows was flying down at us from the sky-they were looked like rain!We ran to escape but fortunately no one was injured.That day I didnt learn much about animals,insects or trees,but I learnt a impressive lesson about gravity!,to,having,immediately,at,None,were,and,came,我们的作文与错误,I will have a husband,a daughter.I have many party and club to take part in.3.And I also want to have two babys,one is a girl,another is a boy.,and,parties,clubs,babies,the other,我们的作文与错误,4.Otherwise,it just a dream5.After ten years,I have wife and son6.I will have a admirable job,is,later,a,a,an,In after later,In表示以后，只能用将来,而且接时间段。表示从现在开始一段时间以后，它往往和一般将来时肯定句连用。如：HewillcomebackintendaysImcomingbackinaminute我一会儿就回来。Hewillreachhereintwodays他两天后将到达这里。,In after later,after过去将来都可以用,但接将来时时候只能接时间点表示以过去的某一时间为起点，“过之后”，其后既可接时间点，又可接时间段。但是，如果after用于一般将来时，那么其后应接时间点。如：Heleftthereaftertwooclockthatafternoon那天下午两点以后，他离开了那儿。,In after later,HecamebackaftertenoclockHecamebackaftertendays.Theystartedtogoagainaftertwodays两天以后，他们又走了。Ithinkhellcomehereafterthreeoclock我想他三点钟后将来这儿。,In after later,later放在时间段后面，如，tendayslaterlater指“以后”、“后来”，可以指过去，也可指将来，是副词，常常放在时间段的名词之后。如：ThreedayslaterhegottoBeijingAfterthreedayshegottoBeijing他三天以后到达了北京。,late latter later lately,She was late again yesterday.,See you later.,I can understand the latter part of the story.,I dont like cooking lately.,