高三英语课件高三英语写作.ppt

English Writing英语书面表达导析,对比类写作,晋江市季延中学 郑小芬,Summary,Usual expressions for contrast:,Years ago there were In the past there used to be Later Now,历年高考书面表达题,对比的两种方式,集中比较逐点比较,Structure,Beginning,Body,Ending,04年春季高考作文：请按照右图的提示写一篇题为“Changes in Our Life”的英语短文,方法指导,Get the information看图作文思路,Changes in communication,变化1,变化2,Changes in entertainment,变化3,Changes in housing conditions,Structure,Beginning,Body,Ending,Here is an essay of a student,If you were the teacher,how would you grade it？Give your reasons,discussion,Changes in Our LifeOver the past twenty years or so,great changes have taken place in our life.Take my family for example.In the past,my mother keep in touch with her friends by waiting letters.They could dial a phone number to make a long distance call to talk with each other.We watch TV in the siting room now instead of listening to the radio as it was in the past.The greatest change is in the living condition.In the past we lived in a very small house where there was few furniture.And the kitchen room,dining room and bed room were in the same room.It was very crowded.But now,we live in a very comfortable house.,学生习作,Try your best to give the reasonable marks.,What are your reasons?,Changes in Our LifeOver the past twenty years or so,great changes have taken place in our life.Take my family for example.In the past,my mother keep in touch with her friends by waiting letters.They could dial a phone number to make a long distance call to talk with each other.We watch TV in the siting room now instead of listening to the radio as it was in the past.The greatest change is in the living condition.In the past we lived in a very small house where there was few furniture.And the kitchen room,dining room and bed room were in the same room.It was very crowded.But now,we live in a very comfortable house.,学生习作,kept,writing,but now,Besides,sitting,they did,little,Thanks to the government,we live a happy life.,16,典型病句,佳句欣赏,习作赏析,范文赏析,写作技巧小结,审题，抓点造句，成文改错，抄正,作业,复习本课要点完成高考A计划P233写作练习背诵精彩范文,Thank you！,for attending,Beginning开头常用句型,Great changes have taken place 发生了巨大变化,2.Things have begun to improve since自从以来，事情有了好转/改善。,对比常用句型：,1used to,but now 2.in the past,but now3.Once,but now4.Things are different now.5.But now,everything has changed.,过渡句可适当变换一些句式：,Another change is Another big change is in the housing conditions.,2.Whats more,/Besides,Whats more,I can go to bed earlier than in the past.,Ending结尾常用句型,In short,changes in our life in the past twenty years have brought us comfort and convenience.In a word,people are enjoying an easier and more convenient lifeWhat a happy life we are living now!,书面表达六步法,书面表达六步法,一、审题,确定基本要素:5W1H,何 时 何 地 何 人 为何 如 何 做 了 何 事,书面表达六步法,二、抓要点,确定主要行为确定对比要领,What changed?（一图一要点）,书面表达六步法,三、扩展成句,形成基本语义单位,Who did what?注意：时态到位 主谓一致,书面表达六步法,四、连句成文,注意：表达到位 过渡词 首尾呼应,书面表达六步法,五、查错改错,要尽量剔除错误,书面表达六步法,六、定稿抄正,卷面不工整扣5分,集中对比,A1B1C1,A2B2C2,集中说明一个对象的诸种特征,逐点比较,A1,C1,B1,C2,B2,A2,一条一条地说明两者的异同,范文赏析,Changes In Our Life,Over the past twenty years or so,great changes have taken place in our life(主题句).Take my family for example(过渡句).My parents contacted others mainly by sending them letters in the past,but now we call long distance at home(对比一).And once my parents listened to the radio for news and other information,but now we watch the news and other programs on TV(对比二).,Another big change is in the housing conditions(过渡句).When they got married about twenty years ago,my parents lived in a small room crowded with furniture,but now we have moved into a big new three-room apartment(对比三).In short,changes in our life in the past twenty years have brought us comfort and convenience(总结句).,范文赏析,右边两幅图是一位美籍华人所看到的中国妇女地位的变化，请你用第一人称的口吻写一篇短文叙述画中的内容(词数：120左右)提示：上图：在旧中国；下图：在新中国。,