科研论文撰写和送审过程中-yangxiongl.ppt

新视野系列研究生课程：科技论文的构思、撰写和发表,生物医学世纪讲坛,科研论文撰写和送审过程中导师和学生间的互动,杨雄里 院士,杨雄里院士63年上海科技大学生物系毕业，63-99年在中国科学院上海生理研究所工作，历任研究实习员、助理研究员、副研究员、研究员、所长。80-82年在日本进修并获获学术博士学位。85-87年先后在美国哈佛大学、贝勒医学院从事合作研究。00年创建复旦大学神经生物学研究所并任所长。神经生物学家。曾任中国生理学会理事长，亚太地区生理学联合会第一副主席。长期从事视觉神经机制的研究，从不同侧面对视网膜中的信息传递的调控在几个层次上进行系统研究并有数项新发现。89年获中科院自然科学一等奖，91年当选为中国科学院院士，01年获何梁何利科技进步奖。98年以来发表SCI论文近40篇，现为Progress in Neurobiology等国内外学术刊物编委或主编。,下周一（10月20日）：汤钊猷院士：医学科研基金申请和论文发表,下周四（10月23日）上午10:30,306教室鲁白教授：How to publish your papers in the top scientific journals,科研论文撰写和送审过程中导师和学生的互动,杨 雄 里,复旦大学神经生物学研究所,本研究室科研论文撰写的程序,导师和学生讨论论文的基本构思、框架、插图；学生说明其实验结果的创新点；决定投寄何种杂志。学生向导师提供与该课题有关的主要综述和原始论文（2030篇）。由学生本人撰写论文的初稿，送交导师。,导师对初稿作出评论；请学生补充实验数据，并提出修改意见，但通常并不立即修改。参考导师评论和修改意见，学生撰写第二稿，送交导师。导师在第二稿基础上进行修改，部分内容完全重写，交回学生，请学生提出修改意见（用不同字体标明），形成第三稿。,本研究室科研论文撰写的程序,导师与学生对第三稿进行讨论后，由导师拟就第四稿，交回学生再评论和修改。对学生的评论和修改意见作认真考虑后，拟就第五稿（半定稿），请学生评论、修改。导师最后定稿（第六稿），并对英文作仔细润色。由学生严格按投寄杂志的要求整理定稿、送审。,本研究室科研论文撰写的程序,杂志主编对送审论文的说明信（cover letter）四种类型,不作任何修改即表示接收。表示接收的意图，但指出需作修改。不明确表示“收”或“拒”。退稿。,From:NeuroReport To:Sent:Wednesday,June 18,2003 6:19 PMSubject:NeuroReport:Decision on Voltage-gated K+channel subunits on cholinergic and dopaminergic amacrine cells 18 Jun 2003 Dear Dr.Yang,Submission no.:NR-D-03-00757 Article title:Voltage-gated K+channel subunits on cholinergic and dopaminergic amacrine cells Corresponding author:Dr.Xiong-Li Yang Your paper has been seen by our reviewers and I have received from the Section Editor a favourable recommendation.I am pleased to let you know that we will therefore publish it in the next issue of NeuroReport to be compiled.There is no specific criticism of the paper and no requests of revision(and this makes a most pleasant and unusual change from our routine;congratulations!).A decision is not yet been made on the cover of the issue but we will take into consideration the figure that you are offering for the purpose.If your picture is chosen(the chances are high),I will need an ad hoc figure legend,that could be read and understood without direct reference to the paper itself;it could be quite long,but it has to be extremely clear.Will you have a go at it?.Thank you for sending this interesting paper to our Journal.Kind regards.Yours sincerely,Giorgio Gabella,MD DSc Editor in Chief NeuroReport,Localization of Kv subunits in retinal amacrine cells Cholinergic Dopaminergic,Kv 3.1b,Kv 4.3,回复论文评审意见的程序,导师和学生对评审意见逐条进行讨论，决定如何答复，是否需作补充实验。由学生拟出答复意见。,Zhang,D.Q.and Yang,X.L.(1998)GABA modulates color-opponent bipolar cells.Brain Res.,792:319-323.Lu,T.Shen,Y.and Yang,X.L.(1998)Desensitization of AMPA receptors on horizontal cells isolated from crucian carp retina.Neurosci Res.,31:123-135.Shen,Y.and Yang,X.L.(1999)Zinc modulation of AMPA receptors may be relevant to splice variants in carp retina.Neuroscience Lett.,259:177-180.Shen,Y.,Lu,T.and Yang,X.L.(1999)Modulation of desensitization at glutamate receptors in isolated crucian carp horizontal cells by concanavalin A,cyclothiazide,aniracetam and pepa.,Neuroscience,89:1979-1990.Zhang,D.Q.,Yang,R.and Yang,X.L.(1999)Suppression of sustained and transient on signals of amacrine cells by GABA is mediated by different receptor subtypes.Science in China,Ser.C.42:395-400.Zhang,J.and Yang,X.L.(1999)GABAb receptors in Muller cells of the bullfrog retina.NeuroReport,10:1833-1836.Li,P.,Yang,X.L.(1999)Zn2+differentially modulates glycine receptors versus GABA receptors in isolated carp retinal third order neurons.Neuroscience Lett.,269:75-78.Han,M.H.and Yang,X.L.(1999)Zn2+differentially modulates kinetics of GABAc vs GABAa receptors in carp retinal bipolar cells.NeuroReport,10:2593-2597.Yang,X.L.Gao,F.and Wu,S.M.(1999)Moduation of horizortal cell function by GABAa and GABAc receptors in dark-and light-adapted tiger salamander retina.Visual Neuroscience.16:1-13.,Publications(19982003),Yang,X.L.Shen,Y.,Han,M.H.and Lu,T.(1999)Physiological and Pharmacological Characterization of Glutamate and GABA Receptors in the Retina.Korean Journal of Physiology and Pharmacology,3:461-469.Du,J.L.and Yang,X.L.(1999)Retinal bipolar cellA model for the study of neuronal signal integration.Chinese Science Bulletin.44:1737-1743.Yang,X.L.,Shen,Y.and Han,M.H.(1999)Glutamate and-aminobutyric receptors and their characteristics in retina.Chinese Science Bulletin,44:1548-1556.Yang,X.L.Gao,F.and Wu,S.M.(1999)Modulation of horizortal cell function by GABAa and GABAc receptors in dark-and light adapted tiger salamander retina.Visual Neuroscience.1-13.Shen,Y.,and Zhou,Y.and Yang,X.L.(1999)Characterization of AMPA receptors on isolated amacrine-like cells in carp retina.Eur.J.Neurosci.,11:4233-4240.Xu,H.P.and Yang,X.L.(1999)Differential modulation by GABA of signals from red and green sensitive cones in the carp retina.Brain Res Bul.,51:493-497.Zhao,J.W.,Du,J.L.,Li,J.S.and Yang,X.L.(2000)Expression of GABA transporters on bullfrog retinal Mller cells.Glia 31:104-117Du,J.L.and Yang,X.L.(2000)Subcellular localozation and complements of GABAA and GABAc receptors on bullfrog retinal bipolar cells.J.Neurophysiol.,84:666-676,Xu,H.P.and Yang,X.L.(2000)Differential modulation by GABA of signals from red-and green-sensitive cones in the carp retina.Brain Res Bull.,501:493-497Han,M.H.,Shen,Y.and Yang,X.L.(2000)Differences in kinetics between GABAc and GABAA receptors on carp retinal bipolar cells.Science in China(Ser.C),43:526-534.Li,P.and Yang,X.L.(2001)Forskolin modulation of desensitization at GABAA and glycine receptors is not mediated by cAMP-dependent protein kinase in isolated carp amacrine-like cells.Pflger Arch(Eur.J.Physiol.),441:739-745Yang,X.L.,Li,P.,Lu,T.,Shen,Y.,and Han,M.H.(2001)Physiological and Pharmacological Characterization of Glutamate and GABA Receptors on Carp Retinal Neurons,Prog Brain Res.,131:227-294.Xu,H.P.,Luo D.G.and Yang,X.L.(2001)Signals from cone photoreceptors to L-type horizontal cells are differentially modulated by low calcium in carp retina.Eur.J.Neurosci.,13:1411-1419.Zhao,J.W.and Yang,X.L.(2001)Glutamate transporter EAAC1 is expressed on Mller cells of lower vertebrate retinas.J Neurosci Res,66:89-95.Luo,D.G.and Yang,X.L.(2001)Zn2+differentially modulates signals from red-and short wavelength-sensitive cones to horizontal cells in carp retina.Brain.Res.,900:95-102.Li,G.L.,Li,P.and Yang,X.L.(2001)Melatonin modulates-amino-butyric acid receptor-mediated currents on isolated carp retinal neurons.Neurosci Lett.,301,49-53,2001,Du,J.L.,Yang,X.L.(2002)Bullfrog retinal bipolar cells may express heterogeneous glycine receptors at dendrites and axon terminals.Neuroscience Letters 322:177-181.Yang,X.L.,Fan,G and Wu,S.M.(2002)Non-linear,high-gain and sustained to-transient signal transmisson from rods to amacrine cells in dark-adapted retina of Ambystoma.J.Physiol.,539:239-251.Du,J.L.,Yang,X.L.(2002)Glycinergic synaptic transmission to bullfrog retinal bipolar cells is input-specific.Neuroscience,113:779-784.Xu,H.P.,Zhao,J.W.,Yang,X.L.(2002)Expression of voltage-dependent calcium channel subunits in the rat retina.Neurosci.Lett 1.329:297-300.Luo,D.G.,Li,G.L and Yang,X.L(2002)Zn2+modulates light responses of color-opponent bipolar and amacrine cells in the carp retina.Brain Res.Bull.,58:461-468.Xu,H.P.,Yang,X.L.(2002)Different effects of low Ca2+on signal transmission from rods and cones to bipolar cells in carp retina.Brain Res.,957:136-143.Luo,D.G.,Yang,X.L.(2002)Suppression by zinc of transient OFF responses of carp amacrine cells to red light is mediated by GABAA receptors.Brain Res.,958:222-226.Du,J.L.,Xu,L.Y.,and Yang,X.L.(2002)Glycine receptors and transporters on bullfrog retinal Mller cells.NeuroReport.13:1653-1656.Xu,H.P.,Zhao,J.W and Yang,X.L.(2002)Cholinergic and dopaminergic amacrine cells differentially express calcium channel subunits in therat retina.118:763-768,Tian,M.,Chen,L.,Xie,J.X.,Yang,X.L.and Zhao,J.W.(2003)Expression patterns of inwardly rectifying potassium channel subunits in rat retina.Neurosci Lett.,345:9-12.Tian,M.,Xie,J.X.,Zhao,J.W.and Yang,X.L.(2003)Differential expression of voltage-gated postssium channel subunits on cholinergic and dopaminergic amacrine cells in rat retina.NeuroReport,(in press)Li,G.L.and Yang,X.L.(2003)Glycinergic input to carp retinal ganglion cells may be mediated by glycine receptors with homologous kinetics.Brain Res.,(in press)Shen,Y.Zhang,A.J.and Yang,X.L.(2003)Uncoupling of horizontal cells alters the receptive fields of retinal bipolar cells.NeuroReport,(in press),Thank you!,