教学课件第二次作文英语角发言稿.ppt

月考作文分析,书面表达 假如你是李华，被聘为你校英语角的主持人，请你为英语角的第一次活动准备一篇英文发言稿，主要内容包括：1创办目的；2主要内容：（1）外教讲座：中西方文化差异；（2）定期举办英语晚会；（3）话题讨论；3活动时间及地点：每周五晚上7：009：00；学校礼堂。注意：1词数100左右。开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。2可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Hello,everyone!Welcome to English Corner!I am Li Hua,the toastmaster of English Corner.,学生作文分析1.作文卷面分析2.错误句子分析 3.优秀句子展示,作文阅卷印象：1.层次混乱，表达不清2.用词混乱，想怎样用就怎样用3.情态动词后+名词，不定式，现在分词，过去分词，介词，形容词等4.卷面糟糕，影响得分。,How to write a composition better?,写作步骤一：审题二：构思 抓中心，列要点，写提纲.先形成自己的写作语言（中文）三：润色 1.想词组句 2.连句成段 3.连段成篇四：复查纠错成文时应注意：1.文章内容要齐全；2.时态：用一般现在时；3.人称：一、三人称；4.注意演讲稿的格式；5.适当使用一些高级词汇和短语，以提高文章的档次；6.恰当使用一些连词和插入语，使文章自然流畅。,书面表达 假如你是李华，被聘为你校英语角的主持人，请你为英语角的第一次活动准备一篇英文发言稿，主要内容包括：1创办目的；2主要内容：（1）外教讲座：中西方文化差异；（2）定期举办英语晚会；（3）话题讨论；3活动时间及地点：每周五晚上7：009：00；学校礼堂。注意：1词数100左右。开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。2可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Hello,everyone!Welcome to English Corner!I am Li Hua,the toastmaster of English Corner.,一般现在时,构思三段式作文模式第一段属引入，直奔主题第二段属文章主干，适当再构，使行文流畅，前后衔接连贯自然。第三段 结束语。,提纲Para1创办目的Para2 主要内容Para3 结束语,1.唤起学英语的兴趣，2.改进大家的口语 3.推动英语爱好者之间的交流。,1.邀请一些外教，作关于中西方文化差 异方面的演讲2.定期举办一些英语晚会 3.开展各种话题讨论和交流活动4.活动时间和地点,快乐学习英语，结交朋友,丰富知识，拓展视野,先成自己的写作语言第一段 创办目的：我们的英语角目的是唤起大家学习英语的兴趣，改进大家的口语 和推动英语爱好者之间的交流。第二段 主要内容：在英语角活动中，我们将开展各种活动。首先，我们将邀请一些外教，并请他们给一些关于中西方文化差异方面的演讲。第二，我们也定期举办一些英语晚会。此外，为了使英语角更有吸引力，我们也会开展各种话题讨论和交流活动。我们的活动时间是每周五晚上7：009：00，活动地点是学校礼堂第三段 结束语 我相信在我们的英语角上，你们将获益多多。你不仅可以练习英语口语，有效学习英语，还是一次很好的机会去结交志同道合朋友。,有的地方较粗糙，你可以修改润色,想词-组句-成段第一段 我们的英语角目的是唤起大家学习英语的兴趣，改进大家的口语 和推动英语爱好者之间的交流。,英语角 English corner,目的 Be to do Aim at唤起大家学习英语的兴趣 Arouse ones interest in Make sb interested in改进 Improve 口语 Spoken/oral English 推动 Promote喜欢 Be keen on Be interested in Be fond of like/love,成句 Our English Corner is to arouse your interest in English learning,improve oral English and promote communication between those who are keen on English.Our English Corner is to make you interested in English learning,improve oral English and promote communication between those who are keen on English.Our English Corner aims at arousing interest in English learning,improving oral English and promoting communication between those who are keen on EnglishOur English Corner aims at making you interested in English learning,improving oral English and promoting communication between those who are keen on English,第二段 在英语角活动中，我们将开展各种活动。首先，我们将邀请一些外教，并请他们给一些关于中西方文化差异方面的演讲第二，我们也定期举办一些英语晚会。此外，为了使英语角更有吸引力，我们也会开展各种话题讨论和交流活动。我们的活动时间是每周五晚上7：009：00，活动地点是学校礼堂.,In English corner,have/give some activities/a variety of activities Invite,foreigners,give some speeches on.,the culture differences between China and western countries,Hold some English parties,regularly,moreover,whats more,make sth more attractive,some topics,discussions,communication,切记不可直译：activity time/place,第二段 在英语角活动中，我们将开展各种活动。首先，我们将邀请一些外教，并请他们给一些关于中西方文化差异方面的演讲第二，我们也定期举办一些英语晚会。此外，为了使英语角更有吸引力，我们也会开展各种话题讨论和交流活动。,In English corner,have/give some activities/a variety of activities Invite,foreigners,give some speeches on.,the culture differences between China and western countries,Hold some English parties,regularly,moreover,whats more,make sth more attractive,some topics,discussions,communication,1.We will hold/give a variety of activities in English corner.2.There will be some/a lot of/a variety of activities given here.3.we will invite some foreign teachers to give speeches on the culture differences between China and western countries,1.We will hold some English parties regularly.2.English parties will be held regularly.3.To make our English Corner more attractive,we will hold all kinds of topic discussions and communication activities.A wide range oftopic discussions and communication activities will also make our English Corner more attractive.,我们的活动时间是每周五晚上7：009：00，活动地点是学校礼堂.,1.The time of activities is from7:00 to 9:00 on Friday evening every week,and the place is the school hall.2.The time when the activities start is from7:00 to 9:00 on Friday evening every week,and the place where the activities will be held is the school hall.3.We will hold the English party in the school hall from 7:00 to 9:00 on the evening of Friday.4.Our activities will be held in the school hall from 7:00 to 9:00 on Friday evening every week.,第三段 我相信在我们的英语角上，你们将获益多多。你不仅可以练习英语口语，有效学习英语，还是一次很好的机会去结交志同道合朋友。,Benefit,benefit from,Not only.but also.Practise,effectively,a good chance to do sthMake friendslike-minded 志同道合,志趣相投的,志同道合者 some common hobbies and dreams,1.I believe you will enjoy yourself and benefit a lot here!You can not only practise your oral English and learn English effectively,but also you can make friends who have some common hobbies and dreams.2.I believe you will enjoy yourself and benefit a lot here!You can not only practise your oral English and learn English effectively,but also you can make like-minded friends.,参考作文 成段成篇 Hello,everyone!Welcome to English Corner!I am Li Hua,the toastmaster of English Corner.Our English Corner aims at arousing interest in English learning,improving oral English and promoting communication between those who are keen on English.There will be a variety of activities given here.First,we will invite some foreign teachers to give speeches on the culture differences between China and western countries.Second,English parties will be held regularly.Whats more,a wide range oftopic discussions will also make our English Corner more attractive.Our activities will be held in the school hall from 7:00 to 9:00 on the evening of Friday.I believe you will enjoy yourself and benefit a lot here!,Homework:Recite this composition,Excellent sentences from ourselvesIf you are anxious about how to study English well,now there is just a chance for you!We have invited some professors from the USA.-许晋源The more you practise,the better you will master English.,Its my honor to stand here,delivering the speech to you.王云,(曹荣丽，尹文豪，胡在伟，李晨，闫红等)The activity starts at 7:00 p.m.and ends at 9:00 p.m.every Friday.Developing your English skills is our goal.冯兰兰Its believed that the more you give,the more you will get.胡月English corner aims at recruiting a group of students who like English and help them promote English levels together.杨文茹,Besides,English has much to do with our future.李效霞，石雪I believe that we will be good at speaking English as long as we are willing to practise.And we can also discuss some popular topics at English corner.How interesting it is!项复佳English corner is intended to improve our English.尹文豪English corner can give everyone a chance to practice oral English and learn more about western cultures.谢文博,In short,our English corner is a good place for those who like English.周世李Whats known to us all is that learning English is very important to everyone.晏程凤The English corner includes activities as follows.董俊玲Come here and join us!-李晨,