书面表达专项突破-留言条.ppt

4.留言条,文体概述 留言条开篇须有称呼语，日期部分可写在右上角，结尾须署姓名在正文的右下角；形式和内容简洁，明确无误。留言条(也可称为便条)虽简单，但中心务必突出，讲清楚写给谁、什么事、谁写以及什么时候写。注意事项：1.人称。以第一或第三人称的形式给第二人称写留言条。2.时态。根据时间状语灵活运用各种时态，常用过去时、现在时和将来时。,常用语块直到下午5点才回来 _2.把书还给图书馆 _3.明早在咖啡屋见面 _4.有重要的事情要做 _5.对感到抱歉 _,feel very sorry about,wont be back until 5:00 p.m.,return the book to the library,meet at Coffee Room tomorrow morning,have something important to do/attend,6.告知他这个变化 _7.定别的时间见面 _8.以便 _9.我们将要做 _10.非常感谢你的 _,thank you so much for,tell him about this change/inform him of this change,set some other time for the meeting,so that,we are going to,11.你很体贴 _12.我们很高兴能收到，但 _13.外出购物 _14.卧病在床 _15.离开去 _,leavefor,it was thoughtful of you,we are delighted to receive,but,be out doing some shopping,be ill in bed,套用句式今天早上一个自称刘彬的人打电话给你，但是你不在。2.他想在本周六早上9点在校门口与你见面。,1.A Mr.Liu Bin called you this morning but you were not in.,2.He wanted to meet you this coming Saturday,at 9:00 a.m.at the school gate.,3.如果不方便，你可以在晚上8点到10点任何时间打电话给他，号码是12345678。4.她要你回到家就回电话。5.最好来电告知。,4.She wanted you to call her back as soon as you are home.,3.If it is not convenient for you,you are requested to ring him up at any time in the evening from 8:00 p.m.to 10:00 p.m.at 12345678.,5.It is better for you to inform me of it.,习作修改(做短文改错，背经典范文)March 21Mrs.Wilson,I am going out shop,and wont be back until about 5:00 p.m.I have take with me the two book you asked me to return back to the City Library.,shopping,taken,books,In about one oclock this afternoon,Tracy called,said that she couldnt meet you at Bolton Coffee tomorrow morning as she has something important to attend.She felt very sorry about that,and said that you could set some other time for meeting.She wants you to call her back as soon as you are home.She has already told Susan of this change.Li Hua,At,saying,but,wanted,about,1.shop shopping因为go doing表示进行某活动，为固定用法。2.take taken此处是现在完成时结构have done，故用taken。3.book books根据前面的two可知应用复数。4.去掉return后的back因为return和back有重复意义。5.In At表“在几点钟”用介词at。,6.said saying分析句子结构可知，say在此是非谓语，且与逻辑主语Tracy存在主动关系，故用saying。7.and but此处存在转折关系故用but。此处but本身无特殊意义，只是语法上的需要。8.在meeting前加the表示“双方都知道的或心中明白的人或物”前须加定冠词。9.wants wanted根据上下文时态可知，want应发生在过去的时间。10.of about固定表达tell sb.about sth.意为“告知某人某事”。,课堂练习 假定你是李华，本已约好与Kelvin今天(4月8日)晚上一起看电影捉妖记(Monster Hunt)。但你临时有事，他打篮球未回，故给他写留言条。要点如下：1.临时有事要做。2.具体更改的见面时间、地点。3.此事已告知谁。4.见字告知。注意：1.词数100左右。2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3.开头语和结束语已为你写好。,April 8Hi Kelvin,Yours,Li Hua,I am going to tell you that as I have something important to attend this evening,so I cant go to see the movie,Monster Hunt,with you this evening.And I have to change it to another place,the Wanda Cinema.We will meet together at 7:00 p.m.at the gate of the cinema tomorrow evening.I have already told your parents about this change when you were out to play basketball.If this change is not convenient to you,it is better for you to inform me of it so that we can set some other time for the movie.,课外作业 假定你是李华，你到一个叫Alex的同学家，叫他帮忙做一件事，碰巧他不在家。因此，你给他写了一张留言条，要点如下：1.请他代你参加明天(3月12日)的植树活动。2.集合地点，如何出发。3.天气情况。4.自备的东西。注意：1.词数100左右。2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3.开头语和结束语已为你写好。,March 11Dear Alex,Yours,Li Hua,I would like to ask you for help.Would you please take the place of me to take part in the tree planting activity in the Peoples Park tomorrow?You know the school sports meeting has taken up much of my time and energy,and I need to adjust myself.You will get together at the school gate at 7 oclock,and set off by bike for the park.By the way,it is reported that it probably rains tomorrow,so do remember to take your raincoat along with you.Besides,you must bring your own lunch.A million thanks to you!,