高三英语提纲作.ppt

兰溪第一中学 周巧玲 Tel:83886819,How to Improve Our Writing,兰溪第一中学 周巧玲 Tel:83886819,How to Improve Our Writing,书面表达一：（改编自06年全国卷III）假定你是李华,北京人，2008年奥运会将在北京举办,现在正在招募志愿者,你希望成为其中一员。请按要求用英文给组委会写一封申请信.内容应包括:个人情况：年龄、性别、学历个人条件：英语好、爱好体育、善于交往、乐于助人、熟悉本地情况承诺：提供最佳服务注意：1.词数100左右，开头语已为你写好 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯生词：申请-apply(v.),application(n.)；志愿者volunteer,书面表达一：（改编自06年全国卷III）假定你是李华,北京人，2008年奥运会将在北京举办,现在正在招募志愿者,你希望成为其中一员。请按要求用英文给组委会写一封申请信.内容应包括:个人情况：年龄、性别、学历个人条件：英语好、爱好体育、善于交往、乐于助人、熟悉本地情况承诺：提供最佳服务注意：1.词数100左右，开头语已为你写好 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯生词：申请-apply(v.),application(n.)；志愿者volunteer,Dear Sir or Madam,My name is Li Hua.I would like to work as a volunteer for the 2008 Olympics.Im a boy and Im 18.I was born in Beijing.Im a middle school student.I want to do something for the 2008 Olympics.First,Im good at English.Second,I like sports.Third,Im good at communicating with others.Fourth,I like helping others.Last,Im familiar with Beijing.It is important for the work.If you give me the chance,Ill try my best to offer the best service to others.Please accept my application.I wont disappoint you!Looking forward to your replay.Yours faithfully,Li Hua,Dear Sir or Madam,My name is Li Hua.I would like to work as a volunteer for the 2008 Olympics.Im a boy and Im 18.I was born in Beijing.Im a middle school student.I want to do something for the 2008 Olympics.First,Im good at English.Second,I like sports.Third,Im good at communicating with others.Fourth,I like helping others.Last,Im familiar with Beijing.It is important for the work.If you give me the chance,Ill try my best to offer the best service to others.Please accept my application.I wont disappoint you!Looking forward to your replay.Yours faithfully,Li Hua,Dear Sir or Madam,My name is Li Hua.I would like to work as a volunteer for the 2008 Olympics.Im a boy and Im 18.I was born in Beijing.Im a middle school student.I want to do something for the 2008 Olympics.First,Im good at English.Second,I like sports.Third,Im good at communicating with others.Fourth,I like helping others.Last,Im familiar with Beijing.It is important for the work.If you give me the chance,Ill try my best to offer the best service to others.Please accept my application.I wont disappoint you!Looking forward to your replay.Yours faithfully,Li Hua,the same subject“I”simple words simple transitions（过渡词）simple sentences,Problems&ways of improving them:,Use different sentences(使用多样句型),Change the subject(改变主语),Use good transitions(使用过渡连接),Choose advanced phrases(选取高级词汇),.Change the subject(改变主语)：,1.Ill offer the best service to others._ is my goal.(-ing分词作主语)It is my goal to_.(用it形式主语)2.I like helping others._.(-ing分词作主语等)_.(用it形式主语或宾语),Offering the best service to others,offer the best service to others.,Helping others is my favorite/what I like most/.,It is my favorite to help others.,.Choose advanced phrases(选取高级词汇),be of great importance,be ready to/be willing to,Word,Phrase,I like helping others.2.I like sports.3.This is important for the work.,be fond of/be interested in/have great interest in,.Choose advanced phrases(选取高级词汇),Simple phrase,Advanced phrase,Im good at English.2.I want to do something for the Olympics.3.Ill try my best to offer the best service.,be fluent in/have a good knowledge of/have a gift for,make a contribution to/contribute to/devote to,spare no effort/make every effort,III.Use transitions(使用过渡连接),1.Phrases:(选取高级连接词)表层次顺序，罗列增加：First,second,third,fourth,last _,_,_,_,_ _,_,_,_,_,To begin/start with,furthermore,in addition,finally,First and foremost,besides,whats more,last but not least,in addition to that,moreover,III.Use transitions(使用过渡连接),2.Sentences:（加上常见句型开头）Im familiar with Beijing.Another reason _ _ the fact that Im familiar with Beijing.The most _ thing is that Im familiar with Beijing.There is no _ that Im familiar with Beijing because I was born in Beijing.Its _to say that Im familiar with Beijing because I was born in Beijing.,lies in,important,doubt,needless,.Use different sentences(使用多样句型）,1.Im familiar with Beijing.Its important for the work.,Im familiar with Beijing,_.(定语从句),2.Im a boy and Im 18.I was born in Beijing.Im a middle school student.,_.,(定语从句/分词作状语),which is of great importance for the work,Born in Beijing,Im an 18-year-old boy,who is studying in a middle school,(studying in a middle school),.Use different sentences(使用多样句型）,3.I wont disappoint you.（句首否定词倒装）4.If you give me the chance,Ill offer the best service to others.If _ the chance,Ill offer the best service to others.(使用省略）,On no account(决不)_.,will I disappoint you,given,.Ill offer the best service to others.It is _ that _.(使用强调句）,5.I like sports very much.I _ like sports very much.(使用强调）,do,.Use different sentences(使用多样句型）,the best service,Ill offer to others,国际文化交流中心将组织一次由各国学生参加的“和平、友谊”夏令营活动，要求报名者提交英文个人简历。假设你是王姗，请根据下列信息写一篇个人简历。注意：1、词数不少于60。2、可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯,书面表达二：年北京卷,the Peace and Friendship Summer Camp,photography,Steps of writing a good article,Read the instructions carefully and decide the style.Follow typical patterns List the key points.Put the key points into sentences.,（列提纲）,（明审题）,（选句型）,（妙联句）,(细复查),Develop the sentences into passage.,Check your work.,书面表达二：年北京卷,The outline of the passage（提纲）：Para1.:Introduce yourselfPara2.:Reasons of joining the Peace and Friendship Summer Camp,One possible version（参考范文）,My name is Wang Shan,and Im a 16-year-old girl(who is)studying in Beijing Yangguang Middle School.I have varieties of interests.First of all,enjoying music is my favorite/what I like most.In addition to that,Im interested in photography because it allows me to record the beautiful moments in my life.Being good at communicating with others,I make many friends.Whats more,Im always ready to help others.,One possible version（参考范文）,I would like to join the Peace and Friendship Summer Camp for many reasons.The first reason lies in the fact that I I love life;I love nature;and I love peace.But the most important reason is that,I think it a great opportunity to make friends with people from different countries and learn about their cultures.,Homework,Please perfect the composition after class.Finish the third writing,Goodbye,Hope everyone of you can get a higher mark in writing!,