初中英语写作公开课(九年级).ppt

A Lesson of Writing,How to write a composition.,Example:Imagine that you are Li Ming,write a composition about the changes taken place in your hometown.Key points:1.Topic（主题）:changes 2.who:Li Ming3.Where:Li Mings hometown4.tense(时态):past tense&present tense 一般过去时&一般现在时,First,consider the task carefully.,Living condition,Cell phones,jobs,transportation,changes,house,cars,Second,brainstorm,(头脑风暴),education,shops,food,roads,computers,clothes,building,working tools农耕工具,reason,government,efforts,live in a low houselive in a tall building,plant crops with the help of farm animalsplant crops with the help of farm machines,study in an old schoolstudy in a modern school,Living condition,Working tools,education,Living condition,Working tools,education,changes,Brainstorm for the body,(正文),a.Changes in living conditions.b.Changes in working tools.C.Changes in education.,OutlineTitle题目:Changes in Li Mings HometownHeading开头：Great changes have taken place in Body正文:a.Changes in living conditionsb.Changes in working toolsC.Changes in educationConclusion结尾:Thanks to the governments efforts(努力),Li Mings hometown is becoming better and better.,Next,draw up an outline.,提纲,Then,write the composition.,Finally,check over the composition.,Changes in Li Mings Hometown Great changes have taken place in Li Mings hometown since the reform and opening-up.In the past,people lived in low houses.The farmers planted crops only with the help of farm animals.Children studied in old schools.But now,most people live in tall buildings.The farmers can plant crops with the help of farm machines.And children study in modern schools.Thanks to the governments efforts,Li Mings hometown is becoming better and better.,One possible version:,heading开头,body正文,conclusion结尾,A Writing PracticeWrite your own composition about Great changes in my Hometown.,以Great changes in my Hometown为题，按下列提示要求写一篇80词左右短文，介绍自己家乡的变化。1、过去生活贫困，房屋破旧阴暗；道路窄交通不便。2、现在住房宽敞、明亮；现代学校，孩子可接受良好的教育；马路宽广，许多人有小车，交通方便；人们生活大为改善。3、未来会更加富饶和美丽4、我的感受是希望记住过去，展望未来是很重要的。可能会用到的词汇：poor and backward贫穷落后的；traffic交通；convenient方便的；Thanks to 多亏；the country and the government国家和政府；take place 发生；education教育；modern现代；dream about憧憬,Requirement:1.topic:2.who:3.Where:4.What changes：5.Tense时态:,First,consider it carefully.,great changes,I/myself,my hometown,life,roads,houses,past tense&present tense,Living condition,transportation,changes,house,Brainstorming,(头脑风暴),education,roads,building,Example:Outline提纲Title题目:Great changes in my HometownHeading开头：Body正文:a.Changes in b.Changes in c.Changes in Conclusion结尾:,Next,draw up an outline.,LifeHouseRoads,houselifeeducationtransportation,now,Used to be,Once曾经,past,Many years ago,is/are,In the past,At present,before,nowadays,today,Was/were,Make sentences.,eg:1.In the past,my hometown was poor.,2.My hometown used to be poor.,Then:,Brainstorm for the tense,(时态),Living condition,Cell phones,transportation,wide,roads,clean,cars,Brainstorm for the body,(正文),dirty,better,narrow,poor,clothes,Convinent方便的,improve,eg:1.Many years ago,the roads in my hometown was narrow and dirty.,2.Nowadays,the roads in my hometown are wide and clean.,3.Today,many families have cars.,school,house,Brainstorm for the body,(正文),Then,write the composition.,以Great changes in my Hometown为题，按下列提示要求写一篇80词左右短文，介绍自己家乡的变化。1、过去生活贫困，房屋破旧阴暗；道路窄交通不便。2、现在住房宽敞、明亮；现代学校，孩子可接受良好的教育；马路宽广，许多人有小车，交通方便；人们生活大为改善。3、未来会更加富饶和美丽4、我的感受是希望记住过去，展望未来是很重要的。可能会用到的词汇：poor and backward贫穷落后的；traffic交通；convenient方便的；thanks to 多亏；the country and the government国家和政府；take place 发生；education教育；modern现代；dream about憧憬,The Changes in My Hometown,I am Li Ming,today I have interviewed my grandmother.She has lived in my hometown for more than seventy years.She has seen the changes in my hometown herself.In the past,my hometown was very small and poor.The roads were narrow.The people couldnt get enough food.But now,the roads were so wide,and there are more and more kinds of food to satisfy peoples needs.And now,each family has telephones,TVs,computers and so on.I think my hometown will be more and more beautiful in the future!,Changes in My Hometown,My hometown used to be a backward place,because it was deep in the mountains,where there were no nice buildings and the roads were so narrow and dirty.People lived a poor life.While in recent years,with the development of society,my hometown has been greatly changed.Now the roads are getting much wider.Trees and flowers are planted on the two sides of the roads.They can provide us with oxygen and fight against the pollutions.So the sky becomes cleaner and brighter.Whats more,you can see many modern and beautiful buildings everywhere,and the living conditions are improving.People are enjoying a comfortable life now.,Goodbye!,