初中英语书面表达写作指导策略.ppt

初中英语书面表达写作指导策略岱山初中邱雅,书面表达复习的有效策略,1.制定训练计划,书面表达复习的有效策略,2.每日做好1、2、3、4，输入和输出协调进行,每日做好1、2、3、4是指每天背诵1句谚语或名言佳句、2个句型和3个短语，并运用所背的句型和短语造4个句子。教师安排全班同学轮流值日，同时把全班同学分成若干小组，每组6个人，而且每组分配两名英语成绩好的学生负责作业检查和批改。每天上课前，值日生把1句名言、2个句型和3个短语写在黑板上。名言和短语由学生课下背诵，由每个小组的组长负责检查。2个句型则在每节课前5分钟背诵，并即时运用当天的短语和句型口头造句。课后学生再把自己造的句子修改好写在作业本上，有每组的组长负责批改。,书面表达复习的有效策略,3.每两周进行一次循环复习为防止前面背诵的短语和句型被遗忘，教师指导学生每隔两周复习一遍前面背诵的短语和句型。复习时采用课上和课下相结合的方式，课上老师提供汉语，叫两名学生将英语句子翻译在黑板上，其余学生则翻译在作业本上，并当堂对改；课下有各组组长负责听写短语，落实到每一位同学。4攻坚阶段以话题为主线，每周进行一次模拟写作所谓攻坚阶段是指5月6月上旬，离中考还剩1个多月，以备课组为单位、以中考题型为导向、以课本为依据、结合时事热点，根据前面写作教学中暴露出的问题以及作文的不同题材、体裁和考查的不同方式，精心编制6套模拟书面表达题和相应的评分标准，进行最后模拟写作，培养学生考场生成高分书面表达的习惯和能力。,写作前期要求,（一）教师方面：。,科学评价学生，提高作业批改质量 合理组建写作小组，全员调动写作兴趣制订学期计划，确立每周写作训练话题,2011年中考英语写作训练计划,写作前期要求,学生方面：(1)加强语言基础知识的学习和训练。要有足够的词汇量；要掌握好英语的五种基本句型；要把握基本的语法知识,如：动词的时态和语态、主谓一致、非谓语动词的使用、形容词/副词的比较等级等等；熟悉习惯用语和习惯搭配；注意相似词语、易混词语的辨析。（2）加强阅读训练,培养英语语感。大量的阅读是书面表达的基础和源泉。俗话说：“读书破万卷,下笔如有神”，长期坚持阅读,语感增强了,表达能力也就自然而然地“水涨船高”了。（3）多背诵一些范文,多练笔。,写作要求,(1)认真审题,明确要求。审题是做好书面表达的前提,做题之前应认真分析说明材料,明确题目要求。审题包括“三审”：审文体，审格式，审人称。(2)捕捉信息,组织要点。书面表达的评分依据之一就是内容要点。因此,在认真审题,弄清题意的基础上,逐个地完整无缺地把内容要点列出(一般为58个要点),并用明白、恰当、得体的语言表达出来；其次要尽量杜绝中国式英语,更不能逐字逐句地将汉语译成英语,使得文章支离破碎。(3)注重开头，写好结尾。大家都知道“Well begun is half done”,(4)谴词造句,准确表达。清理了要点之后,就要组词成句了。(5)整理成篇,行文连贯。(6)规范书写,一气呵成,brainstorm,Teenagerscolorful life,We study.,We like listening to music.,We play computer games for long.,We like reading books.,We often playSports.,We go to KFC.,Sometimes we travel.,Sometimes we stay up studying.,Teenagershealthy life,We study all day.,We like listening to music.,We play computer games for long.,We like reading books.,We often playSports.,We go to KFC.,Sometimes we travel.,Sometimes we stay up studying.,colorful,healthy,认真审题，找出文章要表达的中心。,写作第一步,审,健康很重要。在学习和工作的压力日趋增大的今天，会休息的人才会有健康的身体。人们是如何度过假期的呢？国际健康组织对此作了一次调查，右图是他们此次的调查结果。根据你所得的信息，请为国际健康组织写一篇完整的调查报告,并提倡大家进行假日休闲。,审,travel,stay at home,visit friends or parents,work,用简单的句子或短语列出文章要点。,列,写作第二步,根据以下关键词及图表用简单的句子列出文章的要点,如何度假调查报告倡议假日休闲,stay at home,work,visit friends or parents,travel,A lot of people travel.Some people stay at home.Some other people visit friends or parents.A few people work.Enjoy your vacation.,列,A lot of people travel.Some people stay at home.Some other people visit friends or parents.A few people work.,How do people spend their vacation?We made a survey and here is our survey report.,Come and enjoy your vacation.People who relax well work well.,a nice head,a nice tail,a nice body,加,加首尾，使结构完整。可以采取总分总结构或者总分结构，开头或结尾的句子应注意简洁，漂亮。,写作第三步：,3 2 1 4 6 5,Second,we should keep quiet in the library.First,we have to wear our uniforms to go to school,though most of us dont like them at all.Every school has its own rules for students.We have many school rules to follow in our daily life.Whats more,we ought to return books on time.Our school rules are good for us,I will try my best to follow them.Third,we must do lots of homework.,How do people spend their vacation?We made a survey and here is our survey report.A lot of people travel.Some people stay at home.They watch TV or surf the internet.Some other people visit friends or parents.A few people work.Come and enjoy your vacation.The people who relax well work well.,连,恰当运用关联词句，使得文章层次清晰，各个部分衔接自然。,写作第四步：,1.表示并列或递进:and,as well as,bothand,not onlybut also,neithernor;2.表示选择:or,eitheror;3.表示转折:but,however,although,though,after all,4.表示因果:because,so,therefore5.表示条件:if,unless6.表示对比:instead,notbut,on the one handon the other hand;7.表示解释:for example,for instance,such as,that is to say,in other words;8.表示顺序:to begin with,firstly,first(of all),second(ly),next,later,since then,from then on,finally,in the end;9.表示强调:also,besides,whats more,actually,in fact,10.表示结论:all in all,altogether,in a word,generally speaking,关联词,Lets play the game.,_ I am tired,I keep on working till midnight.He didnt go to movies,he went to the concert _.We like doing kinds of sports _ swimming,running and hiking._,he stood up.Then he got out._,he went back._,he smiled.,How do people spend their vacation?We made a survey and here is our survey report.According to it,most people travel.And some people stay at home.Also some other people visit friends or parents.However,a few people work.Come and enjoy your vacation.People who relax well work well.,连,We interviewed people about the ways to spend the vacation and here is our survey report.According to it,most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays.Then some people like to stay at home,watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest.And to visit friends or parents also makes them relaxed.However,a few people have to work.Come and enjoy your vacation.People who relax well work well.,美,美,选好词句，美化文章。在有把握的情况下展示自己的语言功底。,写作第五步：,Skill One Make your sentences correct,Good good study,day day up.We should do sports a week once.Save the environment is our duty.There is going to have a meeting today.I hope I can come true my dream.,once a week,Saving,be,achieve,If we study hard,we will make great progress.,Skill Two Express in different ways,Our parents really wish us to work hard.Our parents really wish us to put our heart into study.The teenagers like the computers.The teenagers enjoy playing the computers.We shouldnt eat junk food.We should stay away from the junk food.When he spoke,he got more excited.The more he spoke,the more excited he got.We should learn English grammar.Its important to learn English grammar.,书面表达写作技巧,审,列,加,连,美,中考作文评分标准,第一档（13-15分）信息完整，表达流畅，无语言错误或基本无语言错误。第二档（10-12分）信息基本完整，表达较流畅，有少量语言错误，但不影响意思表达。第三档（7-9分）能传达部分信息，表达不够流畅，语言错误较多，但句子基本可读。第四档（4-6分）只能传达少量信息，表达不流畅，语言错误多，只有少量句子可读。第五档（1-3分）只能传达个别信息，表达不清楚，只有个别句子可读。,书面表达,以“I have a dream”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。Sentence patterns for reference(以下句型供参考）My dream is to be/to do/to goI enjoy/like/preferTo make my dream come true,I If my dream comes true,I have a dreamHave you ever watched a bike racing?The riders are cool!Yeah,its my dream to be a professional bike rider.I fell in love with bike rider for the first time I rode.Since that,Ive been riding for 5 years.Some people think its dangerous,I dont think so.During a bike riding,you will be in a high speed and feel the wind rushes quickly.Exciting?That is!To make my dream come true,Ill practice more after middle school.Also,Ill watch more bike racing to learn from the riders.I hope my dream will come true,if so,I can enjoy the life I like best.,Passage One,I have a dreamAnybody has a dream.But different people have different dreams.Most people always dream to be popular or rich.But my dream is very special,I just want to be a bird.Why I have such a dream?Just because I admire theyre free,they can do everything they want.When theyre flying in the sky,they look beautiful,even theyre the most beautiful animals.I really want to enjoy the feeling of flying in the sky.However,I know it wont be achieved any more.Its just a dream,in my heart.,Passage Two,Passage Three,I have a dreamMy dream is to be a basketball player.I like it because I think it very interesting.It can make me become very happy and healthy.To make me dream come true.I need try to do it.And I need take some time to do it.I need practice every day.If my dream come true,I will more try to do it.,Homework,自教育部提倡初中生每天长跑1500米后，校园里课间可以看到很多学生跑步的身影。对于这样的倡议，你在学校做了一个调查，有些学生觉的好，有些学生觉的不好。请你把调查的结果用英语写成短文，并谈谈自己的看法，发表在学校的刊物上，开头已经写好。I did a survey about whether middle school students should run 1500 meters every day.Here are the results.,学生精彩开头All of us have holidays in our daily life,but how do people spend their holiday?We did a survey and here are the results.from Mao Yilan,Its nothing better than having a rest after working!So how do people rest themselves on vacation?According to our survey,there are several ways.from Zhang Peidi,学生精彩结尾All in all,different people have different ways to relax themselves.But I suggest that we should enjoy the holiday,then we may work better.from Zhang Qixuan,So this year,why not consider going outside?Spend your healthy holiday and then get more energy for work or study.from Wu Haoze,Thank you!,