初三英语写作-省级公开课.ppt

Better Your Writing,Eyes Can Speak,When two people are talking,the listener often looks at the speakers,in order to _When a man says“I love you”to a woman,he may look at the womans eyes,in order to _When,Eyes Can Speak,人们常说眼睛会说话。在生活中，我们经常借助眼睛来表达情感。有时，当别人看我们时，我们会觉得不舒服。,People often say that eyes can speak.,In our life,we often express our feelings with the help of our eyes.,Sometimes,we may feel uncomfortable when someone looks at us.,Eyes Can Speak,People often say that eyes can speak.In our life,we often express our feelings with the help of our eyes.Sometimes,we may feel uneasy when someone looks at us.,When two people are talking,the listener often looks at the speaker,in order to show that he is interested in the speakers words.,When a man says“I love you”to a woman,he may look at the womans eyes,in order to show that his feeling is true and deep.,If we are looked at by a stranger for more than necessary,we will look at ourselves up and down,to see if there is anything wrong with us.,Eyes Can Speak,People often say that eyes can speak.In our life,we often express our feelings with the help of our eyes.sometimes,we may feel uneasy when someone looks at us.,When two people are talking,the listener often looks at the speaker,in order to show that he is interested in the speakers words.When a man says“I love you”to a woman,he may look at the womans eyes,in order to show that his feeling is true and deep.,If we are looked at by a stranger for more than necessary,we will look at ourselves up and down,to see if there is anything wrong with us.,For example,Also,However,Do you have such kind of experience?,英语写作时常用的过渡语:,表并列：and,_ 表转折：but,_表因果关系：because,_ 表先后顺序：First,_ 表时间关系：when,_ 表列举说明：for example,_ 发表观点：in my opinion,_表总结陈词：in general,_,英语写作时常用的过渡语:,表并列：and,besides,in addition,whats more,表转折：but,yet,however,on the contrary,表因果关系：because,so,therefore,as a result表先后顺序：First,Second,Third,Next,Then,Finally表时间关系：when,while,after,before,then,表列举说明：for example,for instance,such as发表观点：in my opinion,to my understanding,from my point of view,表总结陈词：in general,in all,in a word,generally speaking,Eyes Can Speak,People often say that eyes can speak.In our life,we often express our feelings with the help of our eyes.sometimes,we may feel uneasy when someone looks at us.,when two people are talking,the listener often looks at the speaker,in order to show that he is interested in the speakers words.when a man says“I love you”to a woman,he may look at the womans eyes,in order to show that his feeling is true and deep.,If we are looked at by a stranger for more than necessary,we will look at ourselves up and down,to see if there is anything wrong with us.,For example,Also,However,Do you have such kind of experience?,Generally speaking,eye contact should be done according to the relationship between two people and the place where we stay.,文章结构,1.Heading点题，概括性,2.Body中心记述部分；层次分明,3.Ending小结，呼应主题,Eyes Can Speak,People often say that eyes can speak.In our life,we often express our feelings with the help of our eyes.sometimes,we may feel uneasy when someone looks at us.,when two people are talking,the listener often looks at the speaker,in order to show that he is interested in the speakers words.when a man says“I love you”to a woman,he may look at the womans eyes,in order to show that his feeling is true and deep.,If we are looked at by a stranger for more than necessary,we will look at ourselves up and down,to see if there is anything wrong with us.,For example,Also,However,Do you have such kind of experience?,Generally speaking,eye contact should be done according to the relationship between two people and the place where we stay.,eyes can help us express our feelings.,Step by step,1.审2.构3.列4.连5.美,文体_ 时态_ 人称_,连字成句，连句成段,在有把握的情况下，变换句型，灵活使用长短句和复合句，使文增色,把握文章框架结构，必要时适当增加细节,列出要点,Have a Try!,网络已成为我们生活的一部分。请你根据以下要点以“The Internet in Our Life”为题，用英语写一篇短文.,1.好处：多彩、便捷的生活，如：交友、放松；（请再举一个例子）2.坏处：沉溺于网络，影响身体、学业3.你的观点（考生自拟，至少一点）注意：1词数90左右。短文的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数 2短文须包括所有要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；3短文不得出现真实的人名、校名等信息。,The Internet in Our LifeInternet plays a very important role in our life.,Rome is not built in a day.,Tips:1.卷面工整。2.规范写作过程。3.多背诵美文，积累素材。,