高等学校英语A级考试写作专题.ppt

高等学校英语A级考试写作专题,华南师范大学增城学院外语系主讲教师：江文静,写作,测试要求：A级考试一般都侧重于应用性文字（摘要，通告，信函，简历表，申请书，协议书等）翻译或写作。测试形式：测试形式为主观题。总题数为1题。考试时间为25分钟。测试目的：测试考生套写，书写，填写，翻译应用性短文，信函，填写英文表格及其他简短的实用性文字的能力。,写作,这里介绍考试中常用的写作文体：1 商务信函2 电子邮件3 征稿启事4 招聘广告5 通知公告,写作,应试指导1 审题首先应该确定要采用的文体。2 构思构思是对审题的进一步延伸。因此考生应该考虑如何突出文章的写作要求。3 动笔在写作过程中英尽可能用自己有把握的词语和熟练运用的句型来表达思想。,写作,4 修改完善（1）从全局进行检查修改。主要是文章的格式内容是否符合题目要求。（2）局部检查，即段落层次上的检查。检查的重点是段内各句衔接是否紧凑，语义是否连贯，要避免使用含有歧义的句子以及不必要的重复。（3）语言检查，句子是否完整，语句是否符合语法。（4）检查标点符号。大小写是否符合写作规范。总之，修改后的文章符合商务写作的7C 要求，即Courtesy(礼貌）,Consideration（体谅）,Completeness（完整）,Clarity（清楚）,Conciseness（简洁）,Concreteness（具体）,Correctness（正确）.,写作,Test One Memo（备忘录）To:all staff employees:From:Ruth Crawford Reference:update the communication system Date:June 24 Th 2007Our company has decided to update the existing communication system in order to meet our business expansion.There are some proposals submitted by three Communications Companies.Listed in the attachment.All staff are required to read the proposals carefully and make their own suggestions by the end of this month.Our company will place an order on the new communication system next month.考点分析：1 现在完成时(have/has+done)2 There be 句型(表示某地有某物某人/表示即将发生某事)3 目的状语从句（so.that,in order to,so as to）4 被动语态(be+done)5 一般将来时(will+do),写作,Test Two December 24,2006Dear Sir or Madam,We knew your company through an introduction in Urban Commerce.And I am writing to ask whether you have some products we are interested in and which products are available now.Would you please send us some information about that?If possible,we would like to establish a regular relation with you.And we hope you would offer us the reasonalble prices.Our corporation has been dealing with imports and exports for many years and we have six branches in china.We have business relation with many big retailers in Europe and America,such as Wal-mart,Tesco,Carrefour and so on.We are looking forward to your early reply.Sincerely yours WangGangManager of China Office Equipment Import&Export Company Limited,写作,考点分析：1 现在完成进行时（have/has+been doing）现在完成进行时是现在完成时态与进行时态的结合，既有现在完成时态的特点也有进行时态的特点。一般表示长时间地做某事或长期从事某项职业。Examples:(1)They have been watching television for a long time.(2)I have been looking forward to your gift for a whole year.2 条件状语从句在句子中作条件状语的从句称为条件状语从句。条件状语从句可置于句首也可以置于句尾，有时还可以置于主语和谓语之间。引导条件状语从句的常用引导词：if,unless,as long as,once,in case,on condition that,supposing that,providing that,provided that,given that 等。在条件状语从句中，一般要用一般现在时表示一般将来时，一般过去时表示过去将来时，现在完成时表示将来完成时。Examples:If you do not learn to think when you are young,you may never learn.If we command our wealth,we shall be rich and free,if our wealth commands us,we are poor indeed.3 一般过去时:表示一个发生在过去的动作，或存在的状态。My father worked at the multinational company who produced medicine during last three years.我父亲在这所制药厂工作了三年。4 现在进行时(be+doing)表示短暂的动作I am doing questionnaires to prepare resources of graduate dissertation.我正在做调查问卷以准备毕业论文素材。,作文,Test Three18th June 2006Dear Office Director Brown Smith:I am sorry to inform you that employees canteen will be closed for the next whole week because of re-decoration.Drinks and sandwiches will be served on trolleys by a catering firm in reception hall of the first floor in the morning and afternoon.Moreover,the nearby restaurant will provide dinner for our employees from 12 am to 1 pm everyday.Peter Jones Catering manager考点分析：1 一般将来时的被动语态（will/shall be done）Example:Good will be rewarded with good,and evil with evil.Have an aim in life,or your energies will all be wasted.2 一般将来时(will/shall do)Example:I shall ensure that you get a room.I will ensure that you get a room.,写作,Test Four Zhang JianGuo,Manager Human Resources Department DongFang Group Company December 13,2005Personnel Department Managers,The group company is inviting you to a workshop on personnel management,mainly discussing the modern modes and new methods for personnel management under the new situation.Details of the workshop are as follows:Time:January 3rd and 4th,2006Place:The friendship hotel,BinHai CityKeynote speaker:professor Ding Yi,from management insititute of BinHai universityPlease notify us whether you would like to join in the workshop.If you would,please send the syllabus of your speech to the office of Human Resources Department,DongFang Group Company.Your sincerely,Zhang JianGuo,Manager Human Resource Department DongFang Group Company,写作,考点分析：一般现在时与现在进行时的基本用法比较：现在进行时结构：1）暂时性动作和经常性动作For this week we are getting up at 7:30.这个星期我们7：30 起床。（临时安排）We get up at 7:30.我们7：30 起床。（经常性）2）持续性动作和短暂性动作The bus is stopping.公交车渐渐停下来。（持续性动作）The bus stops.公交车停了下来。(短暂性动作)3）永久性动作和短暂性动作The cottage lies at the top of the hill.这所小茅屋位于山顶上。（永久性）People are lying on the beach.人们在海滩上躺着。（短暂性）4）带有感情色彩和不带有感情色彩How do you feel today.你今天感觉怎么样？（一般询问）How are you feeling today?你今天感觉怎么样了？（关切）,写作,Test Five Dear Mr John Holland:Havent contacted you for quite a long time,how are you going recently?I am writing this letter to urge you to pay the credit of 10,000 RMB as soon as possible.This amount of money is overdue for ten days,which has bought us a lot of inconvenience.By the way,a lastest catalogue of our summer products is enclosed for your reference.If you need any items,please send us the orders quickly.You can enjoy speical offers in this way.I am looking forward to hearing from you.Yours sincerely LiHua Manager of Marketing Department,写作,考点分析：1 非限制性定语从句定义：顾名思义就是对先行词没有特别限定的从句，常由who,whom,which,whose,as,when,where 等关系词引导。特点：非限制性定语从句起补充附带说明作用，缺少也不会影响全句子的理解。译为汉语时常常不译作定语，而根据句意翻译为相应的其他形式的从句。它与主句的关系不像限制性定语从句的关系紧密，只是对先行词作附加说明。即使去掉，主句的意思依然清楚。在非限制性定语从句的前面往往有逗号隔开，如果将非限制性定语从句放在句子中间，其前后都需要用逗号隔开。Examples:（1）The movie is very touching,as most audience say.正如大多数观众所说的，这部电影很感人。（2）My house,which I bought last year,has got a lovely garden.我去年买的那幢房子有一座漂亮的花园。（3）I have an elder brother,who graduated from PeiKing University.我有一个哥哥，他毕业于北京大学。2 条件状语从句If 从句还表示不可实现的条件或根本不可能存在的条件，也就是一种虚拟的条件或假设，从句多用一般过去时或过去完成时。条件状语从句分为真实条件状语从句和非真实条件状语从句。If I were you,I wouldnt invite him to the party.如果我是你，我不会邀请他参加聚会。The flower would not have died if I had watered them before I left home.如果我在离开家之前浇了水，这些花就不会死了。,写作,Test SixLetter of Inquiry:David Johnson November 29,2004Dear Mr.Peter Kevil,I am interested in the jet printers produced by your HP Company.Could you please let me know the prices of your products and the after-sale service?I am looking forward to hearing from you.Yours Sincerely,David JohnsonLetter of Reply:Peter Kevil December 6,2004Dear Mr David Johnson,Thank you for your interest in our jet printers.Concerning the catalogue and the price list,please refer to the attachment.We ensure that HP provides excellent services for its clients and if you purchase by wholesale,a discount will be given.Yours sincerely,Peter Kevil,写作,考点分析：1 Be interested in 对.感兴趣2 Could you please let me do something 请问你允许我做某事吗？3 We ensure that+从句 我们确信.,写作,Test SevenContributions Wanted（征稿启示）Our newspaper,which is printed on 15th every month,mainly serves the staff of our company.We are asking for contributions of various styles and types.They can be:Reports on each departmentIdeas and suggestions on the companys production,sales and marketingStaffs life in spare timeAnd othersPlease remember your writing will not be over 1000 words and contributions in English should be typed.Those which are not adopted will be sent back to the authors in three months.If you are interested,please contact LiYue at Public Relations Department.Public Relations Department,写作,考点分析：1限制性定语从句与非限制性定语从句(1)限制性定语从句用来修饰和限定先行词，与先行词之间的关系非常密切，它所修饰的先行词代表一个或一类特定的人或物，说明先行词的性质，身份，特征等状况，如果去掉则意思含混不清。Examples:-A doctor is a person who cures patients.-This is the car which I bought last year.-The person（whom/who）you were looking for is upstairs.-This is the file(which/that)he refers to in the discussion yesterday.(2)非限制性定语从句起补充附带说明作用，缺少也不会影响全句子的理解。翻译成汉语时常常不译作定语，而根据句意翻译成相应的其他形式的从句。它与主句的关系不像限制性定语从句的关系紧密，只是对先行词作附加说明，即使去掉，主句的意思依然清楚。在非限制性定语从句的前面往往用逗号隔开，如果将非限制性定语从句放在句子中间，其前后都需要用逗号隔开。Examples:The sun,which gives off a great deal of heat,is a great source of energy.,Test Eight Dear manager,I am writing to complain about the SQ200 mobile phone,which I bought in No 1 Department Store yesterday,I am sorry to tell you that the cell phone doesnt work when I try to take photoes and send short messages.What is worse it automatically turns off sometimes,I really appreciate it if you can refund me or replace it for me.I am looking forward to your early reply.sincerely yours,WangHua,写作,写作,Test nineDear Mr Smith,I am writing to inform you that we have to raise prices of our products as that of raw material has increased,but prices of the goods you have ordered before will remain the same as before.Enclosed is the latest price list for your convenience.We look forward to receiving a further order from you.Best regards.Yours very truly DingZhiWen,写作,Test 10Beijing Olympic Games organizing Committee Dec 23,2007Dear Sir,I am writing to you as an application for a volunteer of the 2008 Olympic games in Beijing.My name is Li Ming,a college student majoring in tourism.As an outgoing boy,I like to make friends and I am active in social activities.I guided a group of visitors to HuangShan laster summer.It is the whole nations pride that Beijing is the host of 2008 Olympic Games,as a college student,I would like to contribute my own enthusiasm and efforts.I have mastered much knowledge about our nations culture,custom as well as geography in my study.In the meanwhile,I am fond of learning english and have passed Band 4 when I was a sophomore.With all these capabilities,I am sure I can be a good guide for the foreigners.If I am so honored to get such a chance to contribute to the nation,please contact me by mobile phone or e-mail.Best wishes.LiMing,