高三英语基础写作复习指导.ppt

新题型基础写作,Pengpai Middle School,徐 惠 玲xuhuiling,写作指导,提纲类基础写作复习指导（记叙文）,审题 体裁：记叙文六要素:时间,地点,人物,事件,原因,结果),写作顺序：开始发展高潮结局),1抓出重点词汇2组构短语3选择句型,思维过程：单词短语句型,处理信息(此为最关键)-即将信息进行整理组合，以明确五个信息句。,抓关键信息且不漏任何信息,基础写作步骤,审,抓,扩,连,改,抄,你很荣幸地成为2008北京奥运会的一名志愿者，负责编写奥运比赛项目的英语介绍。写作内容请根据以下中文提纲，编写射击项目的英语介绍：,写作要求:只能使用5个句子表达全部内容评分标准:句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。,拆分和整合五个信息句,1896：第一次成为奥运项目1904：中断1928：中断,为第二信息模块,1932：重回奥运会,为第三信息模块,1968：第一次允许妇女参加奥运射击比赛,为第四信息模块,现状：稳步发展，1896奥运会只有三项射击项目，现今有17项,为第五信息模块,1904：中断1928：中断,为第三信息模块,背景：射击最初只是生存工具，19世纪末才发展成为一项体育运动。,为第一信息模块,现状：稳步发展，1896奥运会只有三项射击项目，现今有17项。,为第五信息模块,1932：重回奥运会,1968：第一次允许妇女参加奥运射击比赛,为第四信息模块,1896：第一次成为奥运项目,为第二信息模块,Sentence 1主（射击）+be+表+并列连词 sth V(into+O)+时状Sentence 2时状主 it+V+O+转折连词 主+V+时状Sentence 3时状，主+（to+O）Sentence 4时状，主+（to+O）Sentence 5时状，主+V+并列连词 the sport+V+form _+to_.,采用“主谓”模式（草稿句型）,(develop),(become),(return),(stop),(be allowed),(develop),(grow),Originate(vi)起源于，来自，产生SurvivalDevelopItem(项目)Stop/suspend：终止，暂停,Be allowed to do Participate in Take part in Steady/steadily,Linking words 并列关系的：and besides 转折关系的：But,however,while,yet,Key words&expressions:,学生作品,Its not until at the end of 19th century that shooting has developed a sport for its just a survival means first.And it was in 1896 that shooting became an Olympic item.Unfortunately,it had to be stopped in 1904 and 1928.To our delight,shooting returned to Olympic in 1932.In1968,it was its first time to allow women to take part in Olympic shooting Games.Nowadays,shooting is developing smoothly,which has 3 shooting events in 1896 but 17 now.,学生作品,Firstly,the shooting is a survival tool,and by he end of 19th century it developed into a physical sport.In 1896,shooting became Olympic item but from 1904 to 1928 it was suspended.Until 1932,it return to Olympics.Then in 1968,it was first time that women were allowed to take part in Olympics shooting games.Now,shooting developed steadily.,下面例作大多是简单句，一律采用“主-谓”句型，因而读起来单调乏味：Shooting was a means of survival and developed into a kind of sport at the end of the 19th century.It became an Olympic item in 1896.It was stopped in 1904 and 1928.In 1932,it returned to the Olympic Games.In 1968,women were allowed to join Olympic Games.Now,it developed steadily and in 1896 there were only three shooting items but now there are 17 items.,句式多样文章增“靓”,一.使用非谓语动词使句子简洁高档,二.巧用倒装增强句子表现力,三.尝试多样化表达方式,（三）成篇（making up）1.添加过渡词2.多样化句式 单句 并列句 复合句.巧用句型:倒装：not until+时状+助动+主+(Sentence 1,2,4)强调：it is/was+时状+that+非强调(Sentence 1,3,4)With+(Sentence 5),妙笔生花,5.it was not until the late 19th century did shooting,originated as a means of survival,developed as a sport(强调句),Sentence 1,1.Shooting was a means of survival,and it developed into a sport only in the late 19th century.(并列句),2.Shooting,which originated as a means of survival,developed into a sport only in the late 19th century.（复合句）,3.Shooting,originated as a means of survival,developed into a sport only in the late 19th century.（简单句过去分词作定语）,4.Not until the late 19th century did shooting,originated as a means of survival,develop as a sport(倒装句),4.the sport first appeared in 1896(若按写作模式一，可but 再加19281932),Sentence 2,1.The sport first became an event of the Olympic Games in 1896.,2.not until 1896 did shooting become an event of the Olympics.,3.it was not until 1896 that shooting first became an event of the Olympics.,3.twice in history(1904,1928)shooting was suspended at the Olympics.,3.It was in 1932 that the sport return to the Olympics.,Sentence 4,Sentence 3,1.it was stopped in 1904 and 1928.,2.none were contested during the 1904 and 1928 Games.,1.The sport returned to the Olympics in 1932.,2.not until 1932 did the sport returned to the Olympics.,3.It was in 1968 that women were first allowed to participate in the competition.,Sentence 5,Sentence 6,2.Now,with it steady development,shooting includes 17 events,while only 3 in 1896.,women were first allowed to participate in the competition in 1968.,2.Not until 1968 were women first allowed to participate in the competition.,1.The sport has grown steadily from just three shooting events at the 1896 Olympic Games to 17 today.(from 1896s 3 events to todays 17),如果做到多样性的要求，做如下改变，就会带来生动、流畅、连贯、节奏感强的表达效果。Shooting,originated as a means of survival,developed into a sport only at the end of the 19th century.(过去分词短语作定语)The sport first became an event of the Olympic Games in 1896,but it was stopped in 1904 and 1928.（并列句）It was in 1932 that the sport returned to the Olympic Games.（强调句）Not until 1968 were women first allowed to compete in the Olympic shooting.（倒装句）Now,with it steady development,shooting includes 17 events,while only 3 in 1896.（并列句和省略句）,例作,高考范文Version 1Shooting,originated as a means of survival,developed into a sport only in the late 19th century.The sport first appeared in 1896,but none were contested during the 1904 and 1928 Games.The sport returned to the Olympics in 1932.Women were first allowed to compete in the Olympic shooting in 1968.The sport has grown steadily from just three shooting events at the 1896 Olympic Games to 17 today.Version 2It was not until at the end of 19th century that shooting,originated as a means of survival,earned its status as a sport.Shooting became an Olympic event officially in 1896.Yet,twice in history(1904,1928)shooting was suspended at the Olympics.It returned to the Games in 1932,and women were first allowed to participate in the competition in 1968.The sport has been growing steadily from 1896s three events to todays seventeen.3,Homework（基础写作）：假设你是班长刘康，最近你组织全班同学进行了一次社会实践活动。请你根据以下提示，用英语写一篇社会实践报告。写作内容时间：上周六地点：附近的一个村庄目的：了解农民的生活现状形式：走访村民家庭、与村民聊天收获：1.认识到新农村建设以来农村面貌焕然一新，农村生活已 发生巨变；2.发现农民生活水平大幅度提高，生活环境更加和谐。写作要求 1.只能使用5个句子表达全部内容 2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。评分标准句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。,