高三英语书面表达的策略与技巧.ppt

,Dear Smith,Li Hua,Yours,24,I was so pleased to hear from you and am writing to tell you something about my school.Youre right.Remarkable changes have taken place since you last visited.On one side of the road is a new classroom building;On the other side,where the track used to be,stands another new building-our library.The playground is located right in front of the school.In addition,we have planted a lot of trees in and round the school.I hope that you will be able to return and see the changes for yourself someday.Best wishes,高考书面表达的复习训练策略,一.评分标准:,假设你是李华，在一所中学读书。最近收到美国朋友Smith先生的来信.他三 年前参观过你校,听说现在变化很大，希望了解有关情况。参照下图，给他写封回信,介绍你校的变化。注意：1，回信须包括图画的主要内容，可适当增减细节，使内容连贯。2，词数100左右。,三年前,现在,原操场,新操场,旧教学楼,旧教学楼,图书馆,新教学楼,Dear Mr Smith Im very happy to hear from your letter，Lets tell you the new school.Our school happened great change.An new labrary build in the three years ago.A new classroom building was built at other side of road.Our new playgroud out the school.At last we planted many trees.That all,thank you.,8,高考书面表达评分原则 第二挡（较差）（6-10分）未恰当完成试题规定的任务*漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容*语法结构单调，词汇项目有限*有语法或词汇错误，影响了对内容的理解*较少使用语句间的连接词，内 容缺少连贯性，,8,Dear Smith,I was very happy to hear from you.Now let me tell you something about our new school.Great changes have taken place in our school.A new library was built.And a new classroom building was set up on the other side of the road.Our new playground was outside our school.At last,we have planted many green trees around our school.Thats all,thank you.,Li Hua,Yours,15,高考书面表达评分原则 第三档（适当）（11 15 分）*基本完成了试题规定的任务。*虽漏掉一两个次重点，但覆盖所有内容应用的语法和词汇能满足任务的要求*有一些语法和词汇错误，但不影响理解*应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文内容连贯。,15,Dear Smith,I was very happy to hear from you.Now let me tell you something about our new school.Great changes have taken place in our school.A new library was built where the old playground used to be.And a new teaching building was set up on the other side of the road.Our new playground was outside our school.At last,we have planted many green trees around our school.Thats all,thank you.,Li Hua,Yours,17,高考书面表达评分原则 第四挡（好）（16 20 分）完全完成了试题规定的任务*覆盖所有主要内容*语法结构和词汇能满足任务要求*语法或词汇应用基本准确，有些许错误 主要是尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致，*应用简单的语句间的连接词，使全文紧凑，,17,Dear Smith,Li Hua,Yours,22,I was so pleased to hear from you and am writing to tell you something about my school.Youre right.Quite a few changes have taken place here.On one side of the road is a new teaching building;On the other side,where the playground used to be,stands another new building-our library.The playground is now in front of the school.We have also planted a lot of trees in and round the school.I hope that you will be able to return and see the changes for yourself someday.Best wishes,高考书面表达评分原则 第五挡（好）（21-25 分）完全完成了试题规定的任务*覆盖所有主要内容*语法结构和词汇能满足任务要求*语法或词汇应用基本准确，有些许错误但主要是尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致，*应用简单的语句间的连接词，使全文紧凑，,22,Dear Smith,Li Hua,Yours,24,I was so pleased to hear from you and am writing to tell you something about my school.Youre right.Remarkable changes have taken place since you last visited.On one side of the road is a new classroom building;On the other side,where the track used to be,stands another new building-our library.The playground is located right in front of the school.In addition,we have planted a lot of trees in and round the school.I hope that you will be able to return and see the changes for yourself someday.Best wishes,24,高考书面表达评分原则 第五挡（很好）（21-25 分）完全完成了试题规定的任务*覆盖所有主要内容*应用了较多语法结构和词汇*语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误。但为尽 量使用较复杂结构或高级词汇所致；具 有较强的语言应用能力*有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文紧凑，完全达到 了预期的写作目的,高考书面表达评分原则*词数少于80和多于120的，从总分 中减去2分。*如书写较差，以至影响交际，将 分数降低一个档次。,25,二.写作步骤:,练 习,根据下列图画中Tom骑自行车的经历，用英语写一篇短文。短文要写得连贯、完整。字数100字左右。,书面表达如何写？,五个步骤,1、审题,题材、人称、时态、要点（仔细阅读写作要求，确定写作要点）,2、以词及点：用一两个单词或短语写出每句 话的细节要点。,3、联词成句：用联词成句的方法将上述要点 的词语扩展成句子。（认真拟好写作表达顺序，先写出简单句）,联句成文：（依据句式结构要求，巧妙整合各句，使句子紧凑，增加句子信息量。）,注意：,主语和谓语,背景（适当增加时间、地点条件等）,逻辑关系,开头与结尾语篇衔接,5、检查修改，规范抄写,练 习,根据下列图画中Tom骑自行车的经历，用英语写一篇短文。短文要写得连贯、完整。字数100字左右。,审 题,字 词 文,参考答案,审 题,1、体裁：叙述Tom骑自行车的经历，为记叙文体2、主要时态：一般过去时，叙述描绘一起交通事故3、人称：第三人称Tom4、要点：记叙描绘文体，抓住四个要点：时间、地点、人物、事件的前后经过。,词 句 文,词：,to ride a bike,to hit his bike and fall off,句：,Tom was riding a bike along the street.,The car hit his bike and he fell off it.,文：,The other day,Tom was riding along the street.Suddenly,a car was running towards him fast and hit his bike,then he fell off it.,参考答案,Tom was a lucky dog.(heading)The other day,Tom was riding along the street when a car ran towards him fast.He was so frightened that he quickly turned to the left side.But it was too late.The car hit his bike and he fell off.The moment the driver realized that he had caused an accident,he got such a fright that he took flight with his car.,He was soon out of sight,leaving Tom helpless on the spot.Fortunately Tom was not hurt badly.Besides,a passer-by happened to see what had happened and remembered the number of the car,which he reported to the police.Now the driver has been caught and will be punished for his wrong deed.Anyhow,Tom will remember this experience forever,I believe.,三增强书面表达效果的技巧,增强书面表达效果的技巧,词汇反映你知识贮存量的多少，也是衡量英语水平的一个重要标志。,运用得当的句子结构可以给文章增色不少，从而使整篇文章因此而生辉。,使用恰当连接词，对写一篇有“英语味”的文章很重要，能使文章上下衔接自然、紧凑。,1.Because the weather was good,our journey was comfortable.(幸亏)2.We all think he is a great man.（评价很高）3.Suddenly I thought out a good idea.（occur）,Thanks to the good weather,our journey was comfortable.,I.怎样使用较高级的词汇,We all think highly of him.,A good idea occurred to me.,/A good idea suddenly struck me.,4.The students there neednt pay for their books.（免费的）5.She went to Australia in order to study music.（purpose）6.When he spoke,he felt more and more excited.（the 比较级，the 比较级）,Books are free for the students there.,She went to Australia for the purpose of studying music.,The more he spoke,the more excited he felt.,II.丰富的句式：(常用到的句型结构）利用不同的句型来表达同一个意思，能增加文章的文采。How happy I was when I received your letter!It was this young boy who helped the old granny.Only in this way can you solve this problem.They read while walking or riding on a bus.,1.感叹句,2.强调句,3.倒装句,4.省略句,I saw a young lady walking slowly in the street with a handbag in her hand.Lets come to the main teaching building,at the back of which stands the school library.Thats what I should do.Time passed quickly before we knew it.,5、with短语,6、定语从句,7、各种名词性从句,8、各种状语从句,Practice,1 When he arrives,please give me an e-mail.（使用V-ing形式）.On his arriving,please give me an e-mail.2.To his surprise,the little girl knows so many things.（使用名词性从句）3.Though Im weak,Ill make the effort.(使用倒装句)4.He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper.(使用强调句型)It was not until he had read the news in the newspaper that he knew what had happened.5.I passed the physics exam because of your help.(用虚拟语气）,What surprises him is that the little girl knows so many things.,Weak as I am,Ill make the effort.,I couldnt have passed the physics exam but for your help.,倒装句,强调句,感叹句 主从复合句 复合宾语形式非谓语形式用 so that 用 with+O.+O.C.用比较级形式代替最高级用虚拟语气表达真实意思用 at the news 代替 when he heard the news用 on her arrival 代替 when she arrived 用 the moment 代替 as soon as,常用句型及结构,三、怎样使用恰当的连接词,On one side of the road there is a new classroom building.On the other side,where the playground used to be now stands another new buildingour library.(NMET1999 范文),As far as I know,everyone is happy about this new arrangement of things.(NMET2001 范文),Whats more,I can go to bed earlier.(NMET2001 范文),III.常用的连接词1.表示递进;在同一话题上补充内容 另外，还有：2.表示转折关系 但是，然而，相反：,whats more;besides;also;moreover;in addition,but;however;yet;instead;on the other hand;on the contrary.,3.表示因果关系 因为，因此，所以:4.表示条件关系 如果，只要:除非,如果不 否则:,since;as;because(of);so;thus;therefore;as a result;,if;on condition(that);as long as,unless,or,or else otherwise,5.表示时间关系 当 的时候:when;while 在之后:after 在之前:before 直到:until 直到才:notuntil 一就:as soon as 后来，然后:later;afterwards 不久:soon 近来:lately;recently 自从:since 从那时起:from then on,6.表示特定的顺序关系 首先:firstly 最主要的:above all 其次:secondly 然后:then;next 最后:finally;in the end7.换一种方法表述 换句话说:in other words;that is to say，namely;,8.进行举例说明 例如，比如:9.用于陈述事实,for instance;for example;like;such as,and so on,believe it or not,for this reason,实际上:in fact;actually;as a matter of fact跟你说实话:to tell you the truth,10.对一个话题进行总结 总而言之，总的来说:,on the whole;in short;all in all;in general;in a word,finally,in conclusion,generally speaking,as you know,in the end,其它常用到的副词 therefore;otherwise;finally;furthermore;thus;namely;although;afterwards;personally;,12.表示结果：thus,therefore,so,as a result,seeing that,luckily,unfortunately 13.表示强调：above all,indeed,surely,certainly,of course,after all,without any delay,at least,at most,most important,undoubtedly,四.Six steps for writing(写作五步骤）,五.书面表达六十字解题要诀,书面表达题 审题要仔细 格式应正确 把握时和体 条理弄清楚 要点不漏遗 全文要连贯 不可中式译 结构多文采 优作准无疑,Its time to show off,六 练习:,某中学生英语报社正开展一场题为“Young teachers or elderly teachers，which do you prefer?”请你依据下面表格所提供的要点写一篇短文，向该报社投稿。,注意：1词数100左右，开头语已为你写好，不计入总数；2短文必须包含表格的全部内容。要求观点明确，结构合理，紧凑连贯,One possible version:Opinions are divided on this question.Some students may like elderly teachers teaching because they think elderly teachers have more teaching experience and that they tend to be patient and careful with explanations.However,I prefer to be taught by young teachers.Firstly,we students have much in common with them.So they are our friends as well as our teachers.Secondly,they are more.energetic and enthusiastic.Usually they can make their classes lively and interesting.Besides,they are more ready to accept or create new ideas,including teaching.Thirdly,most young teachers devote themselves to their work,making them teach creatively and effectively.In a word,I prefer young teachers to elderly teachers.,七 积累:,附录(背诵)A.表示变化的句子有：In the past,there used to be,but nowWith time passing by,going on As time went on,goes onWith the development of agriculture and industry,4.Green grass and trees can be seen everywhere now.5.Those small and low houses have been replaced by tall buildings.6.Great changes have taken place in my village in the past ten years.7.What great changes we have!8.The villagers are really satisfied with their lives now.,B.事故报道：run into,be hit down by,be injured/hurtC.夏令营:join in the summer camp,hold a contest/competition,exchange experienceD.校园生活:outside-class activity,lively and interesting,make our school life colorfulE.推荐信、自荐信:recommend sb.to,be good at,do well in,be fit for,put it into considerationF.通知:Attention,please!I have ato make.There will be.Thats all.Thank you!G.日记活动，如：难忘的一件事/一天gather at the school gate and set out for.,假定你是小明,你的一位内地朋友张贵来信向你咨询如何才能学好英语，请你根据下列要点写回信.要点:1.学英语的意义；2.参加英语口语学习班;3.看英文书刊、电视；4.学唱英文歌曲；5.与以英语为母语的人交朋友。,Writing,Homework,欢迎你的光临,请留下宝贵建议,谢谢您的光临,请留下宝贵建议,衷心感谢 莅临指导！,