难忘的经历 英语作文.ppt

中考作文评分标准,第一档（13-15分）很好地完成了试题规定的任务。覆盖所有内容要点；应用了较丰富的语法结构和词汇；用词准确、句子通顺、行文连贯、表达清楚，没有或基本没有语言错误；书写工整；字数符合要求。完全达到了预期的写作目的。第二档（10-12分）较好地完成了试题规定的任务。虽漏掉1、2个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容；应用的语言结构和词汇虽不太丰富，但能满足任务的要求；句子较通顺、表达较清楚；有少量语言错误；书写工整；字数基本符合要求。达到了预期的写作目的。,中考作文评分标准,第三档（7-9分）基本完成了试题规定的任务。虽漏掉一些内容，但覆盖所有主要内容；应用的语言结构单一；句子不够通顺，行文不够连贯；语言错误较多；书写不够工整，字数较少。整体而言，基本达到了预期的写作目的。第四档（0-6分）未恰当完成试题规定的任务。漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容，写了一些无关内容；应用的语言结构单一且不规范；句子不通顺，行文不连贯；语言错误多；书写潦草，字数不足50。信息未能清楚地传达给读者。,五、书面表达(共15分)还记得发生在你身上最难忘的一次经历吗?某英文报纸正在以“An unforgettable experience”为题进行征文活动。请你写一篇短文，描述一次难忘的经历，并谈谈你的感想。参考词语：remember,help,wonderful,feel,thinkAn Unforgettable ExperienceEveryone has some unforgettable experiences._,Possible version 1：An Unforgettable ExperienceEveryone has some unforgettable experiences.Last term my leg was badly hurt in a football match,and I had to stay in bed for two weeks.While I was worrying about school work at home,my classmate Tom came to help me.He told me what the teacher taught in class,and helped me a lot with my math problems.I was deeply moved because he kept teaching me until I returned to school.I was glad that I caught up with my classmates.From then on,we became best friends.I truly understood that a friend in need is a friend in deed.,Last term my leg was badly hurt in a football match,and I had to stay in bed for two weeks.一般过去时；被动；副词；情态动词While I was worrying about school work at home,my classmate Tom came to help me.过去进行时；一般过去时态；非谓语动词He told me what the teacher taught in class,and helped me a lot with my math problems.一般过去时；宾语从句,(P V 2)An Unforgettable ExperienceEveryone has some unforgettable experiences.I will never forget my first volunteer work.Last summer,our class went to a country primary school to help the students there.First,we gave away some books and stationery to them.Then we talked about school life.I was quite shy before,but to my surprise,I talked with some students for almost an hour without intermission.I shared my effective study methods with them excitedly.Finally,we played games together.All of us felt so happy.By doing the volunteer work,I not only gained happiness,but also became more confident.It made me experience that giving is receiving.,Last summer,our class went to a country primary school to help the students there.总起First,we gave away some books and stationery to them.Then we talked about school life.I was quite shy before,but to my surprise,I talked with some students for almost an hour without intermission.I shared my effective study methods with them excitedly.,Finally,we played games together.All of us felt so happy.By doing the volunteer work,I not only gained happiness,but also became more confident.It made me experience that giving is receiving.,跑题篇An unforgettable personAn unforgettable presentAn unforgettable trip watching movies is my best hobby I like watching movies.n.1.经验,体验2.经历;阅历;感受,体会3.传统4.亲身经历或参加的活动5.以亲身经历中得到的知识(或技能、经验),