英语基础写作必备.ppt

英语基础写作必备,常用句型分类训练,基础写作失分点:1.漏要点；2.时态错用；3.句子结构问题，特别是多个谓语动词;4.介词乱搭；5.重要词拼错；6.中文直译,高分作文必备：1.要点齐；2.不多不少五句话，有一句定从，最好还会非谓语动词形式或其他句式；3.首尾句千万别出错4.书写相当重要！,请用一句话，翻译以下句子,一、关于人物：1.李华:开朗,乐观 陈伟:待人友善,有点害羞2.他眼睛近视/远视，鼻梁上架着一副眼睛。3.她长得很漂亮，留着长长的头发。,LiHuaisanopen-minded and optimistic boy andChen Weiisvery friendly but a little shy.,Heisa near-sighted/far-sighted guy/man with a pair of glasses on his nose.,Sheisgood-looking with long beautiful hair.,4她与学生关系融洽，常与学生通过电子邮件和网上聊天交流。5高锟，1933 年 11 月 4 日出生于上海的一个富裕家庭，试验产 生浓厚的兴趣。6他于 1957 年在伦敦念大学，并于 1965 年获得博士学位。,She gets on well with the students,who always communicates with us by e-mail or Internet.,Gao Kun,(who was)born into a rich family in Shanghai on Nov.4,1933,showed great interest in/was interested in doing different experiments during his childhood.,In 1957,he studied in a university in London andgained/got his doctors degree in 1965.,71978 年至 1996 年他在香港中文大学工作并任校长。8中山大学英语系毕业后，她出国深造。9在闲时，他喜欢打羽毛球和排球。,From 1987 to 1966 he worked in the Chinese University of Hong Kongandwas appointed to be the principle/president/headmaster.,After she graduated/After graduating/Having graduated from the department of English of Zhongshan University,she went abroad for further studies.,In his spare time,he likes playing badmintonand volleyball.,10.凭着无比的决心和毅力，他花了 37 年完成了这本书，为这个领域作出重大贡 献。11.雷锋为我们树立了个好榜样，人们都高度赞扬他，尊敬他。,With great determination and will/perseverance,he spent 37 years(in)finishing the book,which makes a great contribution to the field.,Leifeng set us a good example,so all the people speak highly of him and respect him.,12.巴拉克 奥巴马，父亲是肯尼亚 人，母亲是美国白人，于 1961 年 8 月 4 日出 生在夏威夷檀香山，现居住在芝加哥市。13.他于 1992 年结婚，育有二女。14.1983 年他毕业于哥伦比亚大学，1988 考入哈佛法学院,1991 年获博士学位。,Born in Honolulu,Hawaii on Aug.4,1961,Barack Obama,the son of a black man from Kenyaanda white American woman,lives in Chicago.,Married in 1992,he has two daughters.,In 1983,he graduated from Columbia Universityandin 1988,he was admitted into Harvard Law School,where he gained his doctors degree in 1991.,15.毕业后他当律师、大学讲师,后来一直从政 16.2008 年 11 月 4 日，奥巴马在大选中击败麦凯恩，成为首位黑人总统。17.米高.菲尔普斯（Michael Phelps）是美国一位非凡的游泳运动员。1985 年 6 月 30 日出生于美国马利兰州巴尔的摩市。,After graduation he worked as a lawyer,lecturerandthen began his political career.,On Nov.4,2008,Barack Obama defeated John McCain in the general election and became the first African American President of the USA.,Michael Phelpsisa great American swimmer who was born in Baltimore,Maryland on June 30,1985.,18.他 7 岁开始游泳,经历了许多艰苦的训练。19.15 岁的时候，他参加了 2000 年奥运会，并在 200 米蝶泳比赛中排名第五。20.在北京奥林匹克运动会,菲尔普斯实现了他的 8 枚金牌梦,打破了 7 个世界 纪录,创造了历史。,When he was seven years old,he started swimmingandexperienced/went through much tough/hard training.,At the age of 15,he attended the 2000 Olympics and placed the fifth in the 200-meter butterfly.,At the Beijing Olympic Games,Phelps realized his 8-gold medal dream andbravely broke 7 world records,creating the history.,*描写地方,关于描写地方：1.位置2.人口3.面积4.历史5.其他：,be located in/at/lies in,has/with a population of about,covers/with an area of.,east东 south南 west西 north 北 southeastsquare metres/kilometers 平方米/公里capital 首都,省会 province 省 district 区city 市 village 村 town 镇 suburbs郊区places of interest名胜古迹 politics 政治 economy 经济 culture 文化symbol象征 was built in memory of为纪念.而建be known/honoured as.被誉为traffic/transportation 交通 convenient 便利,has/with a long history of.,二 关于地点描写 1.归属:中华人民共和国,地理位置:中国西南方，被誉为世界屋脊(Roof of the World)2.人口:约 2,800,000 面积:120 多万平方公里3.省会:拉萨,被誉为世界上最高的城市,Located in the southwest of China,Tibet belongs to the PRCanditis known as the“Roof of the World”.,It has a population of about 2.8 million with/,covering an area of more than 1.2 million square kilometers.,Lhasa,the capital of Tibet,ishonoured as“the highest city”in the world.,4.特征:700 多年的悠久历史；风景秀丽，有很多享誉海内外的名胜古迹，如布达拉宫。5.1951 年 5 月 23 日解放以来,西藏在政治、经济(economy)、文化等方面都取得了很大的进步。6.广州市地处广东省中部，是广东省的省会，广州又是一座古城，有 2200 多年的文明历史。,With a long history of more than 700 years,Tibet has a number of world-famous places of interest,such as the Potala Palace.,Since the liberation of Tibet on May 23,1951,it has made great progress in politics,economyandculture.,Located in the middle of Guangdong province,Guangzhou,the capital of Guangdong,is an ancient city with a cultural history of 2200 years.,7.广州一年四季如春、繁花似锦，故又有“花城”的美誉;同时，“五羊”是广州的象征。8.加拿大是世界第二大国,是世界是湖泊最多的国家。9.东部区以渔业、森林为主，中部人口最密集。,Because itiswarmandflowery all the seasons,Guangzhouisalso called“Flower City”and“Five Goats”isthe symbol of it.,Canadaisthe second largest country with/which has the largest number of lakes in the world.,The majority of people live in the central part of the country,while fishing and forestry are of great importance in the eastern part.,10.北京是中国的古都，名胜古迹甚多。11.学校植物园:校园西南角;面积 1000 平方米 12.历史:20 年的历史;2008 年重建,Beijing,the capital of China,has many places of historic interest.,Located at the south-west corner of our school,the botanical garden coversan area of 1000 square meters.,The gardenhas a history ofover 20 years and it was rebuilt in 2008.The garden with a history of over 20 years was rebuilt in 2008.,13.功能:美化校园;研究植物场所;休闲之地 14.中山纪念堂（Sun Yat-sen）位于广东省广州市，为纪念孙中山而建。15.它于 1998 年重修，可容纳上千人。,The garden makes our school more beautiful and its a place for students to studyandlearn more about plants or simply to relax for a while,Located in Guangzhou,Guangdong Province,Sun Yat-sen Memorial Hall was built in memory of Sun Yat-sen.,It was rebuilt in 1998andcan hold thousands of people.,*灾难事件举办活动,关于,15.2008 年 5 月 12 日 14:28 分汶川爆发了一场大地震。2.2008 年 1 月中旬，雪灾袭击了华南大部分地区，并持续了差不多一个多月。10.起火地点：福建省长乐市拉丁酒吧 时间：2009 年 1 月 31 日 23:30 原因：约十名高中生开生日聚会，在桌上燃放烟花.,A big earthquake broke out at 14:28 on May 12,2008 in Wenchuan.,A severe snow storm hit most parts of Southern China in mid-January,2008,whichlasted for nearly a month.,A fire broke out in the Latin Bar in the city of Changle,Fu Jian Province at 23:30 on Jan.31,2009,which was caused by a dozen of high school students who held a birthday party,setting off fireworks on their table.,3.地震估计将导致 4.5 至 5 万人遇难，另有 300 万人受伤或无家可归。4.这次雪灾是 50 年里最严重的一次灾难，大约 60 人死亡，8 人失踪。5.首都太子港将近 50%的房屋被损毁,目前海地首都太子港到处是一片废墟。,About 50%houses in the capital city Port-au-Princeis have been destroyed and the whole city lies in ruins at present.,Itisestimated that about between 45 thousandand50 thousand people will be killed in the quake,with 3 million more people injured or homeless.,The disaster was the worst in five decades/50 years in which about 60 peopledied and8 people missed.,7.估计雪灾造成了超过 5 百亿元的损失。12.伤亡情况：15 人死亡，24 人重伤。13.火灾经济损失：至少两千万元。14.影响：引起当地政府和全社会的关注。,15 people lost their lives and 24 people were injured./It caused 15 deaths as well as 24 bad injures.,Itisestimated that the storm has caused a loss of more than 50 billion yuan.,The fire caused a loss of 20 million yuan at least.,Not only the local government but also all the people are concerned about the fire,thinking of the lesson from the fire.,6.地震后，国际社会纷纷伸出援助之手-包括捐衣服，食品和药物。9.救援工作正在进行，与此同时，大家正在积极为灾区捐钱。11.救援人员：数百消防员，警察，当地群众。,The rescue workisgoing on while people are actively donating money to the disaster areas.,After the earthquake international societies offered their helping hands-donating clothes,food andmedicine.,Hundreds of firefighters/firemen,policeandlocal people fought bravely against the fire until it was finally put out.,1.2010 年 1 月 13 日，星期二，加勒比岛国海地首都太子港发生李氏 7 级地震。8.中国国际救援队也于 1 月 14 日抵达海地，并立即展开搜救工作；医务工作者们 也已经在海地建立了流动医院，救治当地受伤民众。,Meanwhile,the Chinese international Rescue Team also arrived in Haiti on Jan.14th to carry out the rescue for the survivorsandmedical workers have even set up mobile hospitals in the capital district,providing medical service for the local people.,On Tuesday，an.13th,2010,a big earthquake at scale of 7 on the Richter calculations hit Port-au-Prince,the capital of Haiti,on the Caribbean.,Writing,要求：用5句话完成写作。,Discussion,1.这篇短文的人称是:2.时态是:,Past simple;present simple,The third person singular,重要单词与短语,毗邻 _ 总面积 _ 令人难过的是_ 夷为平地 _ 丧生_ 在的帮助下_ 充满活力 _ 誉为_ 凤凰之城 _,next to；close to;nearby,cover/have a total area of,sadly,it was sad that,destroy in ruins,cause sb.to death；lose ones life,with the help of,energetic;full of energy,be known as;be recognized as,The Phenix City;the City of Phenix,+=_,Assessment,1._(locate)in the east of Hebei Province,Tangshan is next to Beijing and Tianjin.2._(cover)a total area of 13,432 square kilometers/km,Tangshan is one of the big cities in China.3._ made us sad was that a terrible earthquake 4._(strike)Tangshan 5._ July 28,1976,6._ destroyed the city in ruins and caused 240,000 people to death.7._,with the help of the people nationwide,now it is a rich,beautiful and 8._(energy)city,which is known 9._ the Phoenix City.The story of Tangshan 10._(encourage)me to be confident and optimistic towards the future of life.,Located,Covering,What,struck,on,which,Fortunately,energetic,as,encourages,*数据调查,关于议论调查：调查(v./n.)survey，问卷 questionnaire，表一 chart one，根据 according to，社会 society，政府 government 采取措施take measure 提高,改善(v.)improve保护环境 protect the environment 环境保护environment protection 意识到 realize，的重要性 the importance of 的严重性 the seriousness of同意;赞成agree/be for/be in favor of/approve sb.of sth.反对；持反对意见disagree(with/that)/disapprove of/be against/hold the opposite opinions,三、数据调查 1.根据调查得出,48%的学生认为赞成文理分科。2.被调查中 67.9%人认为博物馆应该免费开放。3.70%的人认为不要期望太高的收入，及早就业,According to the survey,about 48 percent of the students are in favour of/are for the seperation/division of science andarts education.,67.9%of the people surveyed believe/think that museums should be free to the public,70%of people think it makes sense that they realizeanearly employment by lowering their income expectations.,4.从表一我们可以看出高中学生来自不同的家庭背景。5.根据表二，学生毕业后的选择呈现得很清楚。6.最近，网上做了一份关于为什么要上大学的问题做了一份问卷调查。7.最近，我们就黄金周是否应该取消作了一份调查,From Chart 1,we can see high school students are from different family backgrounds.,According to chart 2,the students choices after graduation appears to be very clear.,Recently,a website organized a questionnaire survey about/on why people go to university,Recently we made a survey whether we should have long holiday in the coming National Day.,8.然而，25%的学生不赞成志愿者工作。9.我最近在 30 个男生和 30 个女生当中做了一份关于上网的目的的调查。10.从柱形图呈现，小孩随着年龄的增长，花费在和父母的谈心的时间越少。,I have recently made a survey among 30 boysand30 girls in my class about/on their purpose of getting on the Internet.,However,25%of the students disagree with/disapprove of voluntary work,Asisshown in the bar chart,children spend less time having heart-to-heart talks with their parents when they grow older.,*议论文,四关于议论文 1.人们对学生是否应该上网交友持不同意见。2.一些学生认为上网有助于广交朋友，通过网上聊天他们可以自由表达思想。3.而且有利于外语学习。,There are different opinions about whether the students should make friends online.,Some students think that the Internet helps to make many friends and through/by chatting online,students can express their feelings and opinions more freely.,Whats more,it is helpful to study foreign languages.,4.但是，一些学生持反对意见，他们认为上网交友浪费时间,影响学习,更糟的是,可能上当受骗。5.作为我自己，我认为在能够平衡学习和放松的情况下可以上网交友。,However,some students hold the opposite opinions that it will waste time to make friends online,so it will have a bad effect on their studyandworse still,they may get cheated by online friends.,As for me,I think that students can make friends online by making a good balance between studyand relaxation.,6.随着时间的过去,越来越多的游客环保意识日益增强7.不容置疑,吸烟对吸烟者有害,对非吸烟者更有害8.肯定，在不久的将来越来越多的人将会认识到吸烟的严重性，放弃吸烟。,As time goes by,moreand more tourists/travelers are paying greater attention to environment protection.,There is no doubt that smoking isharmful to smokers and even non-smokers.,Itiscertain that moreandmore people will realize the seriousness of smokingandgive up smoking in the near future.,9.我们必须学会与人合作:1现在社会必备 2.可省时间和精力 3.更多互相学习机会 10.每个人都要重视食品安全；政府应该采取更严格的措施保障食品安全。,we must learn to cooperate with others,which is necessary for the society and it not only save us a lot of timeandenergy,but also we can learn much from each other.,Everybody should pay more attention to food safetyandthe government should take stricter measures to ensure the safety of food.,