英语写作常见语法错误.ppt

2023/9/15,英语写作常见语法错误,1,英语写作常见语法错误-1,常见语法错误举例：Now is golden time for us to attain a fair command of English.(词性使用不当。now是副词，不能作主语。可改为：Now it is the golden time for us)2.My roommate is so troublesome,I can hardly put with him any more.,2023/9/15,英语写作常见语法错误,2,英语写作常见语法错误-2,(标点符号错误。两个句子之间缺少连词。可改为：My roommate is so troublesome that I can hardly)A typical family nowadays is consisted of three to four members.(语态错误。consist of 一定要使用主动语态。可改为：A typical family nowadays consists of three to four members.),2023/9/15,英语写作常见语法错误,3,英语写作常见语法错误-3,4.The above-mentioned disadvantages which are brought about by environmental pollution is very detrimental but often miss peoples attention.(句子的主语是advantages，要用复数动词。可改为：The above-mentioned advantages which are pollution are very detrimental),2023/9/15,英语写作常见语法错误,4,英语写作常见语法错误-4,If you try your best to get more aerobic exercise and practice it whenever and wherever possible,we can maintain good physical condition.(指代不清。you 与 we 指代不一致。可改为：If you try wherever possible,you can maintain),2023/9/15,英语写作常见语法错误,5,英语写作常见语法错误-5,6.In my opinion,I think the owner is justified to do so.(in my opinion与I think重复累赘。可改为：I think the owner is 或：In my opinion,the owner is)If adopted,we hope the law will resolve the problem.,2023/9/15,英语写作常见语法错误,6,英语写作常见语法错误-6,(if adopted的逻辑主语是the law，与句子的主语we不一致，为悬垂分词。可改为：If the law is adopted,we hope 或：If adopted,the law will resolve the problem.)以上错误如果稍加小心，尚可避免。但下文中的错误则需要考生格外注意。,2023/9/15,英语写作常见语法错误,7,英语写作常见语法错误-7,In modern society,computers are becoming more and more popular.They are widely used for different uses.Many people use them to type letters,some people still write letters with a pen.I prefer to type letter on the computer.Because it is fast,correct,and clean.,2023/9/15,英语写作常见语法错误,8,英语写作常见语法错误-8,First,fast.You can type 90 to 100 words in one minute.The person who is good at it can even more.And nowadays,a lot of people are working hard to obtain the certificate of computer typing.Many of them get certificates,however,some do not.,2023/9/15,英语写作常见语法错误,9,英语写作常见语法错误-9,In modern society,computers are becoming more and more popular.They are widely used for different uses.(1)Many people use them to type letters,some people still write letters with a pen.I prefer to type letter on the computer.(2)Because it is fast,correct,and clean.在上一段落中，划线部分属于句子结构方面的错误。（1）两句话之间不能用逗号隔开，应加上并列连词and。（2）sentence fragment。这种断句只能使用在英语口语、某些文学作品或非正式的写作中。,2023/9/15,英语写作常见语法错误,10,英语写作常见语法错误-10,(3)First,fast.You can type 90 to 100 words in one minute.(4)The person who is good at it can even more.And nowadays,a lot of people are working hard to obtain the certificate of computer typing.(5)Many of them get certificates,however,some do not.（3）这根本不是一句话，至少应改为：Firstly,it is fast.（4）can是情态动词，后面缺少实义动词，因此意思表达不清。可改为：The person who is good at it can type even more words.（5）however是副词，不能连接两个句子。可改为：Many of them get certificates.However,some do not.或：Many of them get certificates;however,some do not.,2023/9/15,英语写作常见语法错误,11,句子改错（1）,Education is no longer free as it use to be.Education is no longer free as it used to be.For example,the computer that is used everywhere today to increase efficiency and save the cost of labor.For example,the computer that is used everywhere today increases efficiency and saves the cost of labor.In our country we vote for our government,(?)the next federal election is coming again.In our country we vote for our government when the next federal election is coming again.,2023/9/15,英语写作常见语法错误,12,句子改错（2）,After they express there opinion,he dicided to reduces the operational expenses.After they expressed their opinion,he decided to reduce the operational expenses.Many people are dishonest with government.Although they are married,but they dont want to declare they are married.Many people are dishonest with government.Although they are married,they dont want to declare they are married.,2023/9/15,英语写作常见语法错误,13,句子改错（3）,The closing down of hospitals causes inconvenience for the growing number of patients in Ontario.The closing down of hospitals causes inconvenience for the increasing patients in Ontario.“How do you think of my boyfriend,Dad?”the girl ask.“How do you think of my boyfriend,Dad?”the girl asked.Winter storms that bring ice,sleet,and snow they can cause traffic problem.,2023/9/15,英语写作常见语法错误,14,句子改错（4）,Winter storms that bring ice,sleet,and snow can cause traffic problem.（or:Winter storms bring ice,sleet,and snow which can cause traffic problem.)The cake was suppose to be tasty.The cake was supposed to be tasty.The river will flood again next year unless we will build a better dam.The river will flood again next year unless we build a better dam.,2023/9/15,英语写作常见语法错误,15,句子改错（5）,The runner looker as if he was winded.The runner looked as if he was winded.If I would have trained for the race,I might have won.If I had been trained for the race,I would have won.The instructor divided the work between Sam and I.The instructor divided the work between Sam and me.,2023/9/15,英语写作常见语法错误,16,句子改错（6）,Her mother told her she was going to visit Beijing.Her mother told her,“I am going to visit Beijing.”Because our car was overheating,it came as no surprise that it broke down just as it began to rain.Because our car was overheating,it came with no surprise that it broke down just as it began to run.,2023/9/15,英语写作常见语法错误,17,句子改错（7）,The moon,along with Venus,are visible in the night sky.The moon,along with Venus,is visible in the night sky.Three hundred dollars are what we must pay.Three hundred dollars is what we must pay.The candidate felt unusual energetic.The candidate felt unusually energetic.,2023/9/15,英语写作常见语法错误,18,句子改错（8）,The physicist Marie Curie discovered radium,(?)she won two Nobel Prizes.The physicist Marie Curie discovered radium,so she won two Nobel Prizes.People feared that they would no longer be able to happily live in peace.People feared that they would no longer be able to live in peace happily.,