基础写作合并句子.ppt
,Basic writing,林启恩纪念中学 陈俊杏,How to write a good composition?1.Correct tenses!(时态正确)2.Singular or plural nouns!(名词单复数)3.Agreement with the subject!(主谓一致)4.Active or passive voices!(主被动语态)5.Effective conjunctions!(连贯性)6.Different forms of words!(词形变化）7.Correct meaning!(汉英意义一致）8.Correct spellings&punctuation!(拼写 和标点正确),考点：侧重考查学生最基本的写作技能：组词造句和连句成篇。句子：5个（多/少写一句都扣1分）。内容：全部已给出（用文字、表格或图画 的形式），不必再发挥，只需整理 后如实描述或说明。评分标准：15分=语言8分（句子结构准确）+内容5分（信息内容完整）+连贯2分,注意：能写几句就写几句，不留空白,遣词和造句的原则：原则一：尽量使用自己熟悉的词、词组、和句型（如五种基本句型）。原则二：有意识地使用高级词汇、短语及较复杂的结构,充分显示自己的实力（如非谓语动词，宾/状/定从句等）。,谋篇的原则：高分或满分作文的共性：有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。常见的句子之间的连接手段有：使用代词指代上一句中的名词 使用连接词,基础写作的基本策略 仔细审题。注意背景说明，确定文体和时态。如果是看图写文，看懂每幅图之间的联系至关重要。列出要点。根据说明或图画写出要点，并将所有信息要点分配或组合到5个句子里。连句成文。每句话写好后，用适当的连词连接起来，使之上下连贯，呼应，通顺，简洁。检查错漏。复查的项目包括：标题（大写首字母）、格式、内容（有无漏写）、人称、时态、语态、主谓一致、名词单复数、小词等、大小写、标点等 注意：保持卷面整洁。卷面整洁干净在某种程度上甚至可能比准确、通顺更重要。因为整洁干净给阅卷人精神上带来愉悦，相对而言，分数自然要给得高一些。,写好句子的方法一：合并句子1.用连词合并成-并列句 请用合适的并列连词把每组句子合并 为一个并列句。1).He was tired.2).He went to bed.,He was tired,so he went to bed.,3).I bought her a present.4).She didnt like it.,I bought her a present,but she didnt like it.,2.把句子合并成:主句+从句 或者 从句+主句 的结构,1).He has found out.She was late.(why),He has found out why she was late.,2).I still remember the day.I first came to Beijing on that day.(when),I still remember the day when I first came to Beijing.,3.按意义合并成简单句 1).It was early in the morning.Mr.Smith was in his garden.He was watering flowers.2).A girl was crossing a road.The girl was pretty.The road was wide.,Early in the morning,Mr.Smith was watering flowers in his garden.,A pretty girl was crossing a wide road.,写好句子的方法二：改写句子 1)Mr.Green is a tall man,who wears a pair of thick glasses.(改成with 短语）2)The ice on the lake is too thin for us to skate on.(用sothat结构改写句子),Mr.Green is a tall man with a pair of thick glasses.,The ice on the lake is so thin that we cant skate on it.,写好句子方法三：一句多译 1.一到家，我就把所见到的一切都记了下来。,1.As soon as I arrived home,I wrote/set down everything I had seen.2.On/Upon arriving home,I wrote/set down everything I had seen.3.The moment I arrived home,I wrote/set down everything I had seen.4.No sooner had I arrived home than I wrote/set down everything I had seen.,写好句子方法三：一句多译,a.After he finished his homework,he took a rest.b.After finishing his homework,he took a rest.c.Having finished his homework,he took a rest.,2.完成作业以后，他就休息了。,写好句子方法四：尽量用分词短语、同位语结构，使文章简洁，通顺,钟南山年出生在广州，他是中国最伟大的医生之一。1)Born in Guangzhou in 1941,Zhong Nanshan is one of the greatest doctors in China.2)Zhong Nanshan,one of the greatest doctors in China,was born in Guangzhou in 1941.,1、近年来,电视已经很普及,去看电影的人越来 越少,而宁愿呆在家看电视的人则越来越多。,2、出现这种现象的原因有好几个。,3、原因一是有很多的电视频道和各种各样的 节目可供人们选择。,4、原因二是如今能够吸引观众的好影片较少。,5、原因三是电影票价越来越高。,分配信息要点，重组句子：,1.表达一：In recent years,TV has become very common/popular,and fewer and fewer people go to the cinema while more and more people prefer to watch TV at home.表达二：In recent years,with the popularity of TV,the number of people who go to the cinema is/keeps decreasing while that of TV-watchers is/keeps increasing.,1、近年来,电视已经很普及,去电影院的人越来 越少,而宁愿呆在家看电视的人则越来越多。,2.There are several reasons for this.,2、出现这种现象的原因有好几个。,3、原因一是有很多的电视频道和各种 各样的节目可供人们选择。,3 表达一：One reason is that people have many TV channels and a variety of programmes to choose.表达二：One reason is that there are many TV channels and a variety of programmes for people to choose.,4、原因二是如今能够吸引观众的 影片较少。,4 表达一:Another reason is that now there are fewer films/movies that can attract people/audience.表达二:Another reason is that fewer films/movies can attract people/audience now.表达三：Another reason is that people find that now fewer films/movies are worth watching.,5、原因三是电影票价越来越高。,5 表达一：The price of film/movie tickets is much higher than before.表达二：The price of film/movie tickets is（getting）higher and higher.,连句成篇：,In recent years,with the popularity of TV,the number of people who go to the cinema is/keeps decreasing while that of TV-watchers is/keeps increasing.There are several reasons for this.One reason is that people have many TV channels and a variety of programmes to choose.Another reason is that now fewer films/movies can attract people/audience now.Besides,the price of film/movie tickets is（getting）higher and higher.,连句成篇：,1.Write down the sentences we have learnt in your exercise book.2.Recite the passage.,Homework,
