基础写作指导系列调查报告类.ppt

基础写作指导系列 含百分比数据的调查报告,周六测试小作文：假如你是李华,最近你就高中生对急救知识了解在你校展开了调查,下面是调查的数据：,调查结果让你担忧，借此调查你呼吁大家要了解一些基本的急救知识和急救意义。写作内容：请根据以上数据，写一篇短文，包括以下内容：1.调查时间、调查问题以及调查对象；2.调查数据；3.调查结果令你担忧及呼吁。,Part 1：自我诊断想想为什么自己不能拿13分或以上？（1m）对照自己的作文，看有无出现下列问题：1.第一句话是否介绍调查的时间、主题及对象?2.最后一句话是否感受+呼吁？3.数据表达是否累赘或句式单一？4.语法错误？5.时态？（第一句应用一般过去式，其余一般现在时）,Part 2:小组活动 1）小组之内交换看作文，欣赏对方的优点（2m）。2）按照分配各小组完成各自任务。（5m）,P3如何点明主题：上周，我们对人进行了关于的调查。2.如何引出图表内容：从表格，我们可以看出3.如何表示数据：占比例的人占了X%呈现数据并表示原因：4.如何排序以及如何表示对比、转折、递进5.如何写结论及建议,P2:S1（调查内容）：_S2（80%不了解）：_S3(5%有培训，2%有经验)：_S4(84%不知道意义)：_S5(担忧及呼吁)：_,G1&G2,G3&G4,G5&G6,G9&G10,G7&G8,Presentation(3m),Groups 1、3、5、7、9 each write a sentence to combine them into a passage on the blackboard in the front.(P2)Groups 2、4、6、8、10 are to summarize good patterns on the small blackboards.(P3)While writing,the other students read the passages aloud.,范文:Recently I made a survey among students in our school about first aid.According to what I have got,80%of the students do not have the slightest idea what first aid is about.As for first aid training and experience,the percentages are quite low,accounting for only 5%and 2%respectively.Most of the students do not realize the importance of first aid in our daily life,let alone master the ability to perform it in an emergency.Shocked and worried by the results of the survey,I strongly urge that our school should provide students hands-on training about first aid,even making it part of our compulsory courses,so that we can make a real difference to other peoples lives in case of emergency.,总结2：常用句式如何点明主题：上周，我们对人进行了关于的调查。Last week,we made/did/conducted/carried out a survey on among.Last week,a survey concerning was carried out among.2.如何引出图表内容：从表格，我们可以看出As the data shows,as is shown in the survey,evident in the graph,According to the statistics/data proved by the survey/graph/table,it can be seen that.From the figures shown,it can be seen obviously that.Seen from the chart,it could be safely concluded that.The chart reflects/reveals.,3.如何表示数据：占比例account for,take up,make up的人占了X%the number of people/those who takes up X%呈现数据并表示原因：30%people hold a positive attitude to,holding the opinion that/sticking to the fact that/arguing that 4.如何排序以及如何表示对比、转折、递进排序：Sb./sth ranks the highest/first place,while sb/sth turn out to be the lowest;sb/sth be in the first place,next comes,next in line对比、转折、递进：On the contrary,while,in contrast to,compared to/with,however,moreover,in addition,furthermore,whats worse,worse still,to make matters worse,5.如何写结论及建议In conclusion,the findings suggest that students shoulda conclusion is safely drawn thatFrom the above statistics,we may come to the conclusion thatAccording to such a phenomenon,I would like to put forward a suggestion thatI appeal to sb to.,Task 2:归纳总结出调查报告类作文的常用句式以及格式。总结1：调查报告的格式：时态：第1句用一般过去时。第2到5句都是用一般现在时结构：开头（第1句）交代调查的时间、对象和内容/目的 中间（第2，3，4句）：数据介绍根据不同的调查内容，选择不同的方法：按调查的先后顺序逐点写；按事物发展的阶段来写；将两种事物进行对比，以显示其是非、优劣找出其差异来写；按调查对象的特点分门别类来写。注意：在做客观介绍这一部分应尽量避免过多使用同一种句式。最后（第5句）：得出结论，提出建议,假如你是李华，最近你对你所在的班60名同学（男女各半）进行了上网目的的调查。现将调查结果（如下表所示）用英语写一篇调查报告，报道此事，以引起舆论的关注.,写作要求写一篇短文，包括以下内容：1调查时间、调查问题以及调查对象；2男女生上网目的最大的差异；3其他上网目的的排名情况；4男女生利用网络学习的异同；5针对这种现象，你的建议及理由。,Part 3:反思拓展(10 min),Recently,I made a survey on the purpose of surfing the Internet among 30 boys and 30 girls in my class.Evident in the graph,the girls favourite is chatting on the Internet,while what the boys like to do most is playing games.Apart from the sharp contrast,reading news ranks the second for the boys,followed by sending e-mails and chatting in order,while reading and playing both rank the second in girls and sending e-mails the third.However,the percentage of the boys using the Internet for study is the same as that of the girls,accounting for 12%respectively in both sexes.According to such a phenomenon,I would like to put forward a suggestion that students should place more emphasis on their study when they get access to the Internet because study is always the prime task of them.,