初中英语写作技巧指导.ppt
初中英语书面表达写作技巧指导,书面表达六步法,小结,审题,抓点造句,成文改错,誉写,brainstorm,Teenagerscolorful life,We study.,We like listening to music.,We play computer games for long.,We like reading books.,We often playSports.,We go to KFC.,Sometimes we travel.,Sometimes we stay up studying.,Teenagershealthy life,We study all day.,We like listening to music.,We play computer games for long.,We like reading books.,We often playSports.,We go to KFC.,Sometimes we travel.,Sometimes we stay up studying.,colorful,healthy,认真审题,找出文章要表达的中心。,写作第一步,审,用简单的句子或短语列出文章要点。,列,写作第二步,加,加首尾,使结构完整。可以采取总分总结构或者总分结构,开头或结尾的句子应注意简洁,漂亮。,写作第三步:,第二步 抓要点,一幅图,一要点,时态直达 语态到位,介/副词紧随,抓要点,配动词,第三步 扩展成句,把要点变成完整的句子。,注意使用介/副词,第四步 连句成文,增加细节 呼应首尾,句与句相连,词与词搭配,第五步 查错改错,主谓一致吗?,时态正确吗?,时态正确吗?,有“半截话”吗?,Skill One Make your sentences correct,Good good study,day day up.We should do sports a week once.Save the environment is our duty.There is going to have a meeting today.I hope I can come true my dream.,once a week,Saving,be,achieve,中考作文评分标准,第一档(13-15分)信息完整,表达流畅,无语言错误或基本无语言错误。第二档(10-12分)信息基本完整,表达较流畅,有少量语言错误,但不影响意思表达。第三档(7-9分)能传达部分信息,表达不够流畅,语言错误较多,但句子基本可读。第四档(4-6分)只能传达少量信息,表达不流畅,语言错误多,只有少量句子可读。第五档(1-3分)只能传达个别信息,表达不清楚,只有个别句子可读。,说明某件事情利弊的英语作文,比如某一件事情有很多优点同时也有很多问题。下面为养宠物利弊的英语作文模板,描述此现象的现状,举例出优点,阐明缺点。Directions:For this part,you ate allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic Keeping a Pet.You should write at least 120 words,and base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below:1养宠物有很多优点。2宠物也会引发一些问题。3我的态度。Nowadays,it is common to see _描述养宠物的现状_ There are many advantages of keeping a pet.For one thing,_ 优点之一For another,_ 优点之二_.However,keeping a pet,just like anything Else,has its negative side as well.It may also give rise to some problems.For example,_ 举例说明缺点之一 _ _.Worst of all,_ _for the reason that _ _.指出缺点之二,并说明其中原因disadvantages to keeping a pet,_ 强调养宠物的重要性_.,初中英语作文高分秘诀1.动笔之前,认真审题中考考试说明指出,书面表达要切中题意。怎样才能切中题意?就是要认真审题,看到考题后,先不要急于动笔,要仔细看清题目要求的内容。在自己的头脑中构思出一个框架或画面,确定短文的中心思想,不要匆匆下笔,看懂题意,根据图画、图表、提纲或短文提供的资料和信息来审题。审题要审格式、体裁、人物关系、故事情节、主体时态、活动时间、地点等。,2.围绕中心,拟定提纲书面表达评分原则有四条:(1)内容要点;(2)运用词汇和结构的数量;(3)运用语法结构和词汇的准确性;(4)上下文的连贯性。由此可见,要点是给分的一个重要因素。为了防止写作过程中遗漏要点,同学们要充分发挥自己的观察力,把情景中给出的各个要点逐条列出。根据短文的中心思想考虑如何开头、展开和结尾,设想几个承上启下的连词,将主要句型、关键词语草草记下,形成提纲,写时切忌结构分散,废话连篇,严重跑题。书面表达,内容广泛,题材多样,要弄清考题的要求是写人、叙事、介绍、评论、图表、书信、日记、通知、便条还是看图作文或改写缩写。如果是日记,要写清年、月、日和天气情况;如果是书信,则要注意书信的格式,注意短文字数不要低于或超过规定的字数太多。,3.语言通顺,表达准确(1)避免使用汉语式英语,尽量使用自己熟悉的句型。几种句型可交替使用,以避免重复和呆板。(2)多用简单句型,记事、写人一般都不需要复杂的句型。可适当多使用陈述句、一般疑问句、祈使句和感叹句。不用或少用非谓语或情态动词等较复杂的句型。(3)注意语法、句法知识的灵活运用。1)语态、时态要准确无误。2)主谓语要一致,主语的人称和数要和谓语一致。3)注意人称代词的宾格形式。4)注意冠词用法,例如:He is an honest student.中的an不能写成a。5)注意拼写、标点符号和大小写,例如:receive,believe,fourteen,forty,ninth,restaurant等。,1.有很多人喜欢养宠物2.养宠物的利与弊3.你的建议TheAdvantagesandDisadvantagesofKeepingPets写作指南:这篇作文属于说明性作文,考生只需要将提纲中要求的内容组织起来便可。第1段提出很多人喜欢养宠物这种现象。第2段分析利弊,根据作文的标题可知此段是重点内容。养宠物的益处可以从很多方面说(比如消除孤独感、丰富日常生活、获得快乐等),弊端可以从养宠物减少了人与人之间的交流机会、可能使人被传染疾病、可能导致空气异味等方面来说。第3段总结全文,并针对上文提到的弊端,简要提出自己的建议。,养宠物的利与弊 Nowadays,alomost every family has a dog or a cat as a pet.Because the can bring us happinese.When we have something uahappy and dont want to tell anyone else,we can always talk with our pets,though perhaps they dont understand at all.But if we do so,we will fell much better,especially when were alone.When adults are busy and have no time to look after their parents.A pet will always a best present to the olds.But,keeping a pet will also bring us quite a lot trouble.For example,most pets are very dirty and they have a lot of diseases with them which will make us ill.Sometimes a dog will bite someone who may just want to touch it to express his friendship.In this way pets will also make people unhappy!,这种题型往往要求先说明一下现状,再对比事物本身的利弊,有时也会单从一个角度(利或弊)出发,最后往往要求考生表明自己的态度(或对事物前景提出预测)说明事物现状事物本身的优缺点(或一方面)你对现状(或前景)的看法,Homework,自教育部提倡初中生每天长跑1500米后,校园里课间可以看到很多学生跑步的身影。对于这样的倡议,你在学校做了一个调查,有些学生觉的好,有些学生觉的不好。请你把调查的结果用英语写成短文,并谈谈自己的看法,发表在学校的刊物上,开头已经写好。I did a survey about whether middle school students should run 1500 meters every day.Here are the results.,IsItWisetoMakeFriendsOnline?1、越来越多的年轻人开始通过网络交朋友2、产生这种现象的原因是什么,并简述其利与弊审题:这是一篇议论文,关于网上交友的利弊抉择。可以分成三部分:第一部分,网上交友的好处,比如说很方便和远方、甚至国外的朋友联系等;第二部分,网上交友的一些弊端,如需要提防犯罪分子、网上诈骗等;第三部分提出观点,利用网络,但要注意保护自己。Nowadays,moreandmorepeoplebegintomakefriendsthroughInternet.Asanewwaytocommunicatewithothers,Internethasitsuniqueadvantageswhichappealtoyoungmen.Forexample,itcanhelpyoumeetpeoplefarawayfromyouwithoutalongjourneyandmuchmoney.Youcansitdownathome,clickingthemouse.Internethelpspeoplemaketheworldalittleonewhichwecallthe“earthvillage”,andmakingfriendsonlineiseasy.ButInternetgivespeoplechancestocovertheirtrueidentitybecauseyoucantactuallyknowwhoyouaretalkingwith.Maybeyouaretalkingwithacriminalwhowantstoknowyourprivateinformation,oryoumayencounteramanwhowantstocheatyouofmoneyordosomethingevenmoreterribletoyou.Itisdangeroustomakefriendswithpeoplelikethatonline,ofwhichweshouldbecareful.Somakingfriendsonlineisinterestingbutwemustbecriticalandlearntoprotectourselves.语言点:uniqueadvantages独特的优势;clickthemouse点击鼠标coveronestrueidentity掩盖真实身份,隐藏身份cheatsb.ofsth.骗走某人的某东西,Thank you!,