中考书面表达训练.ppt
English writing,下面是在期中考试书面表达题 My pleasant trip 中同学们写的句子，看一看错在哪里，在句子上标出来，并改正：1.I was went to the Great Wall in the last year.2.Last year,I and my parents had been to Shanghai.3.My friends and me by bike go there.4.It took our about 40 minutes to got there.5.I lied on the beach and enjoy the sunshine.6.The next day,we returned my hometown.,Answer:1.I went to the Great Wall last year.2.Last year,my parents and I went to Shanghai.3.My friends and I went there by bike.4.It took us about 40 minutes to get there.5.I lay on the beach and enjoyed the sunshine.6.The next day,we returned to my hometown.,写作题的答题步骤与技巧,1.认真审题，列出提纲：,2.联词成句，打好草稿：,3.通读改错，书写工整：,弄清写作要求：包括题目、所给材料的提示、格式、所提供的图画内容以及要求的词数等，抓住要点，注意文体。,根据规定的要求构思，可以先列出提纲，考虑要选用的人称、时态、词语等内容。,根据写作提纲和前面的思维成果，按要求分段书写，使用地道的语言。,尽量使用自己已掌握的、熟悉的词汇和句型，如果遇到不熟悉或想不起的单词，就用同义词（或近义词）代替，多使用容易的词和简单句，少用难词和复合句。,写完之后，要认真阅读全文，检查以下几个方面：看是否符合题意要求，有没有遗漏的地方，语言是否通顺、流畅；看语法是否正确，包括单词的拼写、大小写，标点，动词的时态、语态，名词的单复数，形容词和副词的比较级、最高级，主谓一致，冠词的用法，词语的搭配等，最后认真地抄写到试卷上。,记叙文的写作,记叙文：,是以“记事为主”的一种文体，就是把人物的经历和事件的发生、发展、变化的过程表述出来。,记叙文的写作要求,1.交代清楚“六要素”：,时间,地点,人物,事件,原因,结果,重笔讲述事件的起始、发展，结尾要精练。,2.围绕中心组织材料：,选择能表现中心思想的材料，材料要精练、突出、有效。,3.叙述事情要条理：,事件安排要条理分明，注意事件之间的联系、过度、照应，主次分明，详略得当，并恰当运用顺序、插叙、倒叙等叙述方法。,4.意图明确、句子简练、文字精练。,记叙文练习：记述暑假中的一次郊游活动,根据表格所提示的内容，写一篇短文，记述去年暑假中的一次郊游（outing）活动。词数：80-100。,An Outing,It was a Monday on August 16th last year.It was sunny.I went for an outing with my several friends.We went to a hill about 2 kilometers north of here.We left by bike at a quarter to nine in the morning and arrived there at half past nine.,We did all kinds of activities there.We walked to the waterfall near here.We spent the whole morning swimming and taking photos.At noon we cooked lunch and ate together.After lunch we sang and danced happily.Then we came back at five forty in the afternoon.,All of us had a good time there.,说明文的写作,说明文：,以“说明”为主要表达方式，用简明的语言来解说事物，使人们对事物的形态、性质、特点、功能、成因、结果、用途等方面有所认识，从而获得有关知识。,说明文的 写作要求,1.语言简明、准确，通俗易懂：,2.条理清楚，层次分明：,3.说明要客观，例证要有力。,4.要把握说明的中心，选择的角度要合适。,说明文练习：“低碳”意味着降低二氧化碳的数量，节约能源、重复利用是关键词。如今“低碳”生活在世界上很受欢迎，为保护环境，请你根据自己的行为谈谈日常生活中有哪些低碳行为。（80词左右）提示：low-carbon 低碳,Nowadays a new lifestyle called low-carbon life is popular in the world.In order to protect the environment,there are many ways to reduce the pollution.For example,a no-car day is set up in some cities.I think its really a good idea because cars not only cause serious air pollution but also waste energy.In our daily life,wed better use cloth bags instead fo plastic bags.As a student,we should turn off the lights when we leave,use both sides of the paper and we can go to school on foot or by bike.In a word,it is importand for us to save energy.I believe if everyone tries to protect the environment,the world will become much more beautiful.,议论文的写作,议论文：,以“议论”为主要表达方式，阐明自己某种观点的一种文体。,提出问题 分析问题-解决问题,议论文的结构：,议论文的三要素：,论点：,论证：,论据：,是作者对所论述问题的见解和主张。,是议论的过程。论证的方法有：,例证法,引证法,对比法,喻证法,是证明论点的左证。论据有事实论据和道理论据。,议论文练习：你的笔友李明在发给你的邮件中说，他的父母对他要求很严格。平时他的父母不让他看电视、不让他听音乐、不让他出去玩。他们希望他将所有的时间都花在学习上。他心里感到很烦恼。请你回复他的邮件，帮他分析问题，并想出一个解决的办法。词数80词左右。注意：不得用真实的姓名和校名。（邮件的开头已给出，不计入总词数）内容提示：1.叙述他的烦恼。2.你的观点：学生需要适当放松，玩的时候也可以 学到很多东西。3.建议：告诉他与父母沟通的方法。Dear Li Ming,Im sorry to hear that your parents are very strict with you.,Dear Li Ming,Im sorry to hear that your parents are very strict with you.They want you to study all the time.They dont allow you to watch TV,or listen to the music,or go out to play.So you often feel unhappy.In my opinion,as students,we should have some time to relax ourselves.If we are allowed to play for some time,maybe we will be able to study our lessons better.Meanwhile,there are many other things for us to learn.So you should have a talk with your parents,or you can write a letter to them.You can also ask your teacher to have a talk with your parents.Maybe your parents will change their idea.Best wishes!Yours,Danny,拓展延伸 1.我的收获：完成本节课的知识总结 2.记叙文练习：生活像一只快乐的小船，承载着无数欢声笑语。请以“A happy day”为题，写一篇短文。词数：60-80。（参照写作题的答题步骤和技巧和记叙文写作要求）3.阅读中考写作得高分的关键：,Thank you,
