非谓语动词在写作中的运用-公开课.ppt

,Welcome to our class,Non-finite Verbs in Writing非谓语动词在写作中的应用,1)It is a popular reality show(真人秀)in China.2)Five Star-dads take their young children on an overnight trip without the company of moms.3)It has won high ratings(收视)since it was broadcast on Oct 11.,Sharing&Guessing,Do you know what it is?,Watching this TV show,we had a lot of fun.,How many actors are there in the show?Who are they?,爸爸:郭涛儿子:郭子睿(石头),爸爸:田亮女儿:田雨橙(Cindy),爸爸:王岳伦女儿:王诗龄(Angela),爸爸:张亮儿子:张悦轩(天天),爸爸:林志颖儿子:小小志(Kimi),REC Do you remember some unforgettable moments?,Task 1：Making sentences according to key wordsUse non-finite to describe these pictures(连词成句)正确运用分词作状语,1)Seeing Xiao Huang taken away,Kimi felt heartbroken.,1)Kimi,see Xiao Huang taken away,feel heart-broken,2)Given more chances,children can perform better.,2)If they are given more chances children can perform better,1)Being such a brave girl,Cindy is my favorite kid among them five.,1)Cindy,is such a brave girl,is my favorite kid among them five.,3.doing 和done作原因状语,2)Cindy,encourage,by her father,decide to slide on sand herself.,2)Encouraged by her father,Cindy decided to slide on sand herself.,1)Standing in front of the bed,Angela was having lunch.,1)Angela,stand in front of the bed,have lunch.,4.doing 和done 作伴随状语,2)Angela,comfort,by her father,stop crying.,2)Comforted by her father,Angela stopped crying.,1)Tian Tian showed his love for his mother,sending her a flower.,2)Guided by his father,Tian Tian slided on sand.,1)Tian Tian,show his love for his mom,send her a flower,2)Tian Tian,guide,by his father,slide on sand,5.doing 和done作方式状语,1)Shi Tou broke his arm,causing him to use only one hand.,2)Shi Tou hurried to the kitchen,only to find there is no water for cooking.,1)Shi Tou,break his arm,cause him to use only one hand.,2)Shi Tou,hurry to the kitchen,find there is no water for cooking.,6.1)doing作结果状语，表自然而然的结果。,2).to do 作结果状语，表意料之外的结果。,To build up a better relationship with their kids,five star-daddies decided to join the TV show.,five star-daddies，build up a better relationship with their kids,decide to join the TV show,7.to do作目的状语。,Yishang mingtian shang ke yong,Task 2：Sentence Pattern Transformation(句型转换)Use non-finite to describe these picturesOral Practice 掌握使用非谓语动词简化句子的用法,When they had a birthday part for Kimi,kids are happy and excited.,_,kids are happy and excited.,Having a birthday part for Kimi,As long as she saw a camel,Angela would touch it immediately.,_,Angela would touch it immediately.,Seeing a camel,Tian Tian was criticized by his father.So he looked unhappy.,_,Tian Tian looked unhappy.,Criticized by his father,Kimi held chopsticks and a plate in the hands.He was running.,_,Kimi was running.,Holding chopsticks and a plate in the hands,They got some food for dinner by catching fish in the lake.,_,they got some food for dinner.,Catching fish in the lake,Lin Zhiying broke the egg,_.,Lin Zhiying broke the egg and made Cindy cry.,making Cindy cry,_,Kimi asked Angela to help him take care of his sheep.,_,Kimi asked Angela to help him take care of his sheep.,Kimi hoped to play with Cindy,so Kimi asked Angela to help him take care of his sheep.,Hoping to play with Cindy,To play with Cindy,Group work and Sharing:,Share what you have learned with others,and try to make a summary.1)When can we use non-finite verbs?2)What kind of non-finite verbs can we use to make sentences?,Simple：写作时，需要表示时间关系，可以用v-ing(主动)和done(被动)作时间状语。,Task 3：The use of non-finite in writing task非谓语动词在写作中的应用分析题目，写句子,Writing task:爸爸去哪儿（Dad，Where Are We Going)这个电视节目广受欢迎。这个节目走红有以下几个原因：1.因为五个孩子很可爱，所以招人喜爱。2.为了让孩子成长、发展，节目组为他们提供了许多探索的机会。3.通过沟通，父亲和孩子们建立了亲密关系，值得大家学习。4.与唱歌类的选秀比赛相比，这种亲情类节目反而更受关注和喜爱。,写作要求：非谓语doing，done，to do 至少各一个。,要点1.因为五个孩子很可爱，所以他们招人喜爱。,_,the five kids are admired by many people.,要点 2.为了让孩子成长、发展，节目组为他们提供了许多探索的机会。,_,the show provided them many chances to explore.,Being lovely,In order to let the kids grow and develop,要点3.父亲和孩子们通过沟通，建立了亲密关系，值得大家学习。,_,fathers and kids set up a close relationship.,要点4.与唱歌类的选秀比赛相比，这种亲情类节目反而更受关注和喜爱。,_like singing competitions,this kind of show about family is more popular.,Communicating with each other,Compared with other shows,Task 4：The use of non-finite in writing task非谓语动词在写作中的应用分析题目，写文章,Write a composition and share it with others.写作内容：高考临近，为了让自己放松，我们班决定今天去春游。一大早我们就出发了，由一个有经验的爬山者带领着。我们说着笑着爬上山。当我们到达时，我们就开始烧烤了。我们吃着大餐欣赏美景。虽然累但是我们很开心。写作要求：根据以上内容，用5个句子写一篇日记。题目、开头和结尾已经给出。要根据实际情况多使用非谓语动词。,Our Spring Outing National College Entrance Examination is coming.To relax ourselves,our class decided to have a spring outing.We set off early in the morning,guided by an experienced climber.We climbed the mountain,talking and laughing.When we arrived,we began to barbecue.Having a big dinner,we enjoyed the beautiful view.We were tired but happy.,One possible version,Homework:Write a composition after class and share it with others next time.(2008年广东省高考基础写作题)请根据以下中文提纲，编写射击项目的英语介绍：背景：射击最初只是生存工具，19世纪末才发展成为一项体育运动。1896：第一次成为奥运项目1904：中断1928：中断1932：重回奥运会1968：第一次允许妇女参加奥运射击比赛现状：稳步发展，1896奥运会只有三项射击项目，现今有17项。写作要求：1)使用5个句子（含至少一个非谓语动词）2)结构准确，内容完整，结构连贯。,Practice makes perfect!,写作中复合句常见的错误,1.只有从句，没有主句,The keeper who had lived in the light tower for a long time,so he could keep calm in the storm.,Part2.写作中定语从句的主要作用：,1.增加词数,Last Saturday I watched a concert.The concert was wonderful.Last Saturday I watched a concert which was wonderful.,People can enjoy the moon while eating moon cakes,which are the special food for this festival.,2.可连接两个包含同一事物的句子，避免单词重复和句式单一,3.补充细节，以丰富文章内容,This is my uncle,a doctor.This is my uncle,who is a doctor.,Fill in the blanks:,去年暑假，我去乡村做志愿者。在那我看到了辛勤工作的农民和他们快乐的生活，给我留下了深刻的印象。,Last summer vacation,I did voluntary work in the countryside _ I saw hard-working peasants and their happy life _made a deep impression on me.,正如上面所提到的，定语从句用处很大。,_,the Attributive Clause is of great use.,where,that,As is mentioned above,As is known to all=As we all know众所周知,As is often the case 就跟经常的情况一样,As is reported 正如所报道的那样,（As引导非限制性定语从句，可放在主句前中后，“正如”）,Part3.如何写出定语从句:,1.题干中出现两句涉及同一事物的简单句,Solution:,1找出这两个简单句中都出现了的同一个事物2将其中一个简单句改成从句,去修饰另外一个句子中那个相同的事物（注意关系词的选用）,For example:,在204班，我有45个朋友。,其中有31个女孩和14个男孩。,In Class 4，Grade 2，I have 45 friends.,There are 30 girls and 15 boys.,In Class 4，Grade 2，I have 45 friends,of whom there are 30 girls and 15 boys.,_,_,Practice:,我最好的朋友是Mr.Cai。他出生于1996年12月1日。,My best friend is Mr.Cai.,He was born on December 1st,1996.,My best friend is Mr.Cai who was born on December 1st,1996.,_,他也在黄岐高级中学上学。黄岐高级中学是一个美丽的地方。,He also studies in Huangqi Senior High School.,Huangqi Senior High School is a beautiful place.,He also studies in Huangqi Senior High School which is a beautiful place.,_,我们常常一起跑步。我不会忘记这段日子。,We always run together.,I will never forget the days.,I will never forget the days when we always run together.,_,In Class 4，Grade 2，I have 45 friends,of whom there are 30 girls and 15 boys.My best friend is Mr.Cai who was born on December 1st,1996.He also studies in Huangqi Senior High School which is a beautiful place.I will never forget the days when we always run together.,Two Attributive Clauses are enough in one composition!,Part4.思辨,Part1.高考满分作文中的定语从句欣赏：,1.（2013年全国高考新课标I）,Ive asked my uncle to bring you the Chinese painting youve asked for before.,你知道，我的叔叔李明要去你居住的城市参加一个会议。,You know,my uncle Li Ming is going to the city where you live to attend an international meeting.,_,_,我让叔叔带去你想要的那幅中国画。,2.（2013年广东高考）那些做普通简单工作的人也在推动着社会的发展。,Those who do simple and ordinary jobs are also promoting the development of the society.,正如我们都知道的那样，扫大街是最为困难的工作之一。,As we all know,cleaning streets is one of the hardest work.,_,_,当今，父母为他们的独生子女做所有的事情，这使得这些独生子女非常依赖于父母。,Nowadays parents have done everything for their single children,which makes the children rely on their parents badly.,_,_,A sailor who has experienced no storm will never become an excellent sailor.,_,3.（2013年福建高考）没经历过暴风雨的水手永远不会成为一名优秀的水手。,2.以逗号代替句号,把两个简单句当成一个句子,The old man thought of his son,tears came down from his face.,The hall is different from all other buildings,it is made of glass.,漂亮的书写是写作得分的亮点,影响给分的因素之一：作文的卷面,影响给分的因素之三：行文的流畅,上下贯通、一气呵成正确而巧妙地使用好连接词,and,then,also,besides,morever,whats more furthermore,in addition,more than that.,1.表递进.表转折.表因果.表目的.表归纳,but,however,although,though,in spite of,despite after all,on the contrary,on the other hand.,because,since,therefore,so,hence,thus,consequently as a result/consequence,on account of.,in order that,so that,for the purpose of.,in general,in brief,in short,in conclusion,in a word,on the whole.,如何将这几个讲述汶川地震的句子更好地连接起来，显得更有文采，得到高分呢？,Many houses and schools were destroyed.More than five million people are living a hard life now.The students there need help and schools should be built.Students can return to classes soon.,Ex:按要求改写下列句子。1)English is widely used in the world.Most business letters are written in English.(合并为并列句)English is widely used in the world and most business letters are written in English.2)People thought of some ways to solve the problem.These solutions didnt work.(合并为并列句)People thought of some ways to solve the problem but these solutions didnt work.,四、如何使文章连贯？(过渡词的使用)1)时间：soon,then,suddenly,meanwhile,before,after,earlier,in the morning,afterwards,later,immediately,next,the other day,nowadays,gradually2)空间:above,below,up,down,under,near,far from,in front of,behind,beside,beyond,on the right/left,around,inside,outside,opposite to,next to,on top of,across.,3)列举：for example,such as,first(ly),second(ly),finally,besides,apart form,for one thingfor another thing 4)比较:like,unlike,on the contrary,in contrast to,on the one handon the other hand,than,not soas,asas,while,similarly,the former,the latter,someothers,onethe other,compared with,5)逻辑关系：a.并列：and,as well as,alsob.转折：but,however,yetc.递进：besides,apart from,in addition,whats more,furthermore,moreover,to make things worsed.原因：because,because of,as,since,for that reasone.结果：so,therefore,thus,as a result f.让步：though,although,in spite of,为了增强短文的连贯性，使表达流畅自然，要巧用关联词。请熟记和用好以下的关联词语：A、表并列：besides,in addition,whats more,moreover,or,and,also,too,as well as B、表转折：however,nevertheless,yet C、表原因：because of,thanks to,owing to,due to D、表结果：thus,therefore,as a result E、表列举：namely,for example,for instance,that is to say F、表结论：to conclude,in a word,in brief G、表时间顺序：first,second,then,soon,finally,at last H、表空间顺序：here,there,in front of,at the back of,next to,on one side,on the other side I、表对称关系：for one thing,for the other thing,on one hand,on the other hand,四、如何使文章连贯？(过渡词的使用)1)时间：soon,then,suddenly,meanwhile,before,after,earlier,in the morning,afterwards,later,immediately,next,the other day,nowadays,gradually2)空间:above,below,up,down,under,near,far from,in front of,behind,beside,beyond,on the right/left,around,inside,outside,opposite to,next to,on top of,across.,3)列举：for example,such as,first(ly),second(ly),finally,besides,apart form,for one thingfor another thing 4)比较:like,unlike,on the contrary,in contrast to,on the one handon the other hand,than,not soas,asas,while,similarly,the former,the latter,someothers,onethe other,compared with,5)逻辑关系：a.并列：and,as well as,alsob.转折：but,however,yetc.递进：besides,apart from,in addition,whats more,furthermore,moreover,to make things worsed.原因：because,because of,as,since,for that reasone.结果：so,therefore,thus,as a result f.让步：though,although,in spite of,5.运用关连词语篇章结构连贯是三大评分标准之一，因此，我们在写作时，除按逻辑组合信息点外，还必须学会灵活运用连接性词语。除上述提到的并列连词和从属连词之外，特别推荐使用以下连接性词语：(1)表起始：first of all,to begin with,in my opinion,according to,as far asIm concerned,as you know等。(最常用)(2)表递进：besides,whats more,moreover,furthermore,whats worse=to make things worse=worse still,in addition to,still,even等。(最常用),(3)表并列：also,as well(as),or,eitheror,neithernor,not onlybut also,and,and then,bothand等。(4)表因果：therefore,as a result(of),thanks to,due to,owing to等。(5)表强调：above all,indeed,surely,certainly,of course,at least,obviously等。(6)表解释：that is to say（即,就是,换句话说,就是说;更确切地说），in other words,believe it or not,to tell you the truth等。(7)表比较：just as,just like,in the same way,more or less（差不多,几乎）,similarly,instead等。,(8)表空间：on the left/right,to the left/right of,on one side ofon the other side of,at the foot/top/end of,in the middle/centre of等。(9)表时间：at first,in the beginning,next,then,later,now,about two months later,after a while,soon,afterwards,since then,meanwhile,in the end,at last,finally,for the first time,after that,the next moment,up to now,before long,from then on,sooner or later等。(10)表总结：in short,in a word,in conclusion,in general,in brief,generally speaking,on the whole,to sum up,in all等。(最常用),(11)表转折或对比：yet,however,otherwise,on the other hand,on the contrary,in spite of,after all,in fact,as a mater of fact（事实上）等。(最常用)(12)表列举或举例：for one thingand for another(thing);first(ly),second(ly),third(ly),finally/last but not least(最后但同等重要的);for example/instance,takefor example,such as,that is,as follows,and so on等。(最常用)(13)常用的放在句首，修饰整个句子的连接性副词：(un)luckily,(un)fortunately,hopefully,naturally,strangely,apparently,in this way等。(最常用),before,after,when,while,as,first,later,and then,next,finally,immediately,as soon as and,or,also,too,not only.but also,as well as,both.and,neither.nor but,yet,however,or,otherwise because,because of,since,now that,as,thanks to.,due to.so,so that,therefore,thus,as a result,as(so)long as,if,unless though,although,in spite of besides,whats more,moreover,even,in addition,时间:,并列:,原因:,条件:,转折:,递进:,结果:,让步:,基础写作7大聚焦,4，巧用同位语及分词短语，让表达简洁生动，顺畅合并信息。,合并以下信息,时间：上周last week事件：采访王教授，关注中国在校儿童近 视问题 have an interview with;concern;the issue of short-sightedness;school children背景：王教授是眼科医生 eye-doctor,Last week,we had an interview with Professor Wang,an eye-doctor,concerning the issue of short-sightedness of school children in china.,同位成分，往往是中心强调的信息。He finally gave me his present,a beautiful dress.当同位成分之间存在某种语义关系是，会见到表示该语义的词语，如：同等关系：that is,in other words,namely列举关系：for example,for instance,such as,including,included.突出或强调关系：especially,particularly,mainly,mostly,in particular,同位语的应用,Here are 3 ways to make sentences:,I.巧妙运用短语，写出规范的简单句：,1)借助名词短语做同位语,如：李立，男，19岁，1986年生；籍贯：广东。,Li Li,a boy of 19,was born in Guangdong in 1986.,1、五年的基础写作范文中都使用了非谓语形式。1）Born on March7,1915,Allan Stewart(2012)2）A book entitled Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mother（2011）3)Around 540million people are affected,causing 100,000 deaths.(2010)4)half of the school children in our country are shortsighted,ranking the first in the world.(2009)5)Shooting,originated as a means of survival,(2008),范文解读,2、五年的基础写作范文中都使用了定语从句。1）Amy Chua,a Chinese American and professor at Yale,who tells stories in her book about.（2011 年）2）There are 350 million people smoking recently,in which the male hold 75 percent.（2010 年）3）It is said that slightly more than 50%students,which ranks the first in the world,are short-sighted.（2009 年）4）In his eighties,he decided to study law,after which he obtainedin 2006.(2012),3、五年的基础写作范文中常使用了同位语。1）Amy Chua,a Chinese American and professor at Yale.（2011 年）2）I had an interview with ProfessorWang,an eye-doctor,concerning（2009 年）3）Allan Stewart,an Australian,becomes.（2012 年）,不是人人都能学好英语，小学生同时学汉语和英语反而会影响汉语学习。,学会运用复合句和非谓语