英语作文之数据描写.ppt

,如何进行图表式作文写作,图表式作文的几种形式:一是以表格形式,将统计的数据或被说明的事物直接用表格形式体现出来,即统计表。表格:table,二是以图形形式 A 表示数据变化的曲线图;B 表示数据的大小或数量之间的差异 的柱状图;C 表示总体内部结构变化的扇形图。图表:chart,Graph,表示两组数的关系-通常为函数关系图,Pie Chart,饼状图,Bar Chart/Graph,柱状图,Table,矩形的竖行和横行进行排列的表格,图表式作文写作分三步:表格:table图表:chart第一步：开门见山地点明本图表所反映的主题,第三步：归纳总结或发表评论。,第二步：分析数据间的主要差异及趋势，描写数据间变化及总趋势特征。陈述 facts 分析 reasons,第一步：开门见山地点明本图表所反映的主题常用:recently最近interview采访survey调查questionaire问卷Recently,XX have made a survey among about 最近，XX在当中做了一份关于的调查问卷Recently,XX have interviewed about Recently,XX have an interview with about 最近，XX对进行了一次关于的采访。,第二步：分析数据间的主要差异及趋势，描写数据间变化及总趋势特征。陈述 facts 分析 reasons常用句型：1.The chart/table above shows 以上图表显示2.From the chart,it can be seen that.从图表我们可以看到.3.From the chart,we can see that 从图表我们可以看到.4.As is shown in the chart,.在图表当中显示，.5.According to the chart/table/data/survey 根据图表/表格/数据/调查，.,上升(动词)：increase,rise,go up下降(动词):decrease,fall,drop,reduce平稳(形容词):stable,steady 波动(动词):,rise and fall,(介词短语)up and down 占(动词):occupy,take up最高点(名词):the highest,the top,the peak,the most 最低点(名词):the lowest,the bottom,the least平均(名词，形容词):average,赞成不赞成6 agree withdisagree with7 approve of disapprove of8 be in favor of be opposed to 9 be for be against“有多少百分比的人支持/反对/认为”，怎么说？X%of 人/物 agree with/be in favor of 观点(名词)X%of 人/物 agree/believe/think that 观点（句子）,“的人数是多少/占多少比例”的时候，怎么说？10 the number of people who are opposed to this idea is over 5,000.反对该观点的人超过5千。11 the number of people who are opposed to this idea only takes up 10%.反对该观点的人只占了10%the number of people who is/reach(数字)的人数是(数字)the number of people who takes up X%的人占(百分比),“有多少人做什么的”时候，怎么说？There are people who 反对该观点的人超过5千。The number of people who are opposed to this ideais over 5,000.There are more than 5000 people who are opposed to this idea.,而:while,however,whereas,on the other hand,相比:by contract,on the contrary,compared with,by comparison with 趋势:tendency,trend 在*中占*:*gain the percentage of,1在地震中死亡的人数超过了2000。The number of people who died in the earthquake is/was/reaches/reached over 2,000.There are more than 2000 people who died in the earthquake.2如图2所示，体育活动只占了10%的时间From Chart 2,sports activities occupy/occupied/take/took up 10%of time.3在我们班里，有三十多个同学反对这个提议。In our class,there are more than 30 students who are opposed to the advice/suggestion/idea.The number of students in our class who are opposedto this idea is more than 30.,4 55%的同学认为他们应该每天都要进行各种各样的锻炼。55%of students think that they should do a variety of exercises every day.various kinds of5死于车祸的人数占了总人口的30%。6近年来，越来越多的人有手机。7有手机的人数是1995年的十倍之多。8与上个学期相比，学生人数达到500人。,常用句型：Facts:1.There was a great/slight increase/drop in 在方面有了明显/轻微的增长/减少。2.A is 20%lower/higher thanB A比B高了/低了20个百分比3.The number of A is times as much as that ofB.A的数量是.B的几倍。4.It increases/rises/decreases/reduces by%.增长/减少了%.5.By comparison withA,it decreased/increased fromto 与相比，它减少/增长,从多少到多少。,第三步：归纳总结或发表评论。常用词汇：1.in a word,/in short,/generally speaking 总而言之/简短来说/一般说来2.Its clear from the chart that 从图表中我们清楚知道3.In summary,it is important 总结来说，是很重要的。4.From what has been discussed above,we can draw the conclusion that 从以上我们讨论的内容看，我们得出以下结论 5.Obviously,if we want to,it is necessary 很明显，如果我们想要，我们必须,某学校对学生课外活动进行了调查，结果如下：请根据图表反映的数据，描述学生每天的课外活动，以及针对该现象发表一下你的看法。,1吸烟人数：约3.5亿2分布：男性75%女性25%3受二手烟影响人数约5.4亿4因二手烟死亡人数超过10万1年,the number of people who is(数字)的人数是(数字)the number of people who takes up X%的人占(百分比),1吸烟人数：约3.5亿The number of people who smoke is about 350,000,000.2分布：男性75%女性25%The number of men who smoke takes up 75%.The number of women who smoke takes up 25%.3受二手烟影响人数约5.4亿The number of people who are affected by second-hand smoke is about 540,000,000.4因二手烟死亡人数超过10万1年The number of people who died from second-hand smoke is over 100,000 every year.,1吸烟人数：约3.5亿，其中男性75%女性25%，The number of people who smoke is about 350,000,000，and 75%are male while 25%are female.3受二手烟影响人数约5.4亿，而因此死亡人数超过10万1年The number of people who are affected by second-handsmoke is about 540,000,000.What is the worst,the number of people who died from it is over 100,000 every year.,Smoking in public will be banned throughout the whole nation from January 1st,2011.To realize the aim that there is no smoking in all indoor places in public,we should put up some signs of smoking ban.As the related data shows,the number of people who smoke is about 350,000,000,75%of whom are male while 25%are female.The number of people who are affected by second-hand smoke reaches 540,000,000.What is worse,the number of people who died from it is more than 100000 every year.(every year more than 100000 deaths are caused by the second-hand smoke!),Smoking ban in public will be carried out throughout China from January 1st,2011,which aims that there will be no smoking in all the public places inside office across the whole country.To realize this goal effectively,we should take some measures,such as putting up signs of smoking ban where there are people who aresmoking.There are approximately 350 million smokers all over the country,and among them the number of male smokers takes up 75%,female smokers occupies about 25%and what is worse,the number of people who are affected by second-hand smoke is unbelievable,reaching about 540 million.Some 100 thousand people die from the serious illnesses caused countless smokers die from the serious illnesses caused by smoking every year.It is high time to take strong action to forbid smoking in our country for peoples health.,