学生作文13.ppt

2013-10,1、认真完成作业2、按要求写作3、学会运用新词新短语4、语法错误,2013-10,1、没有分段(很多没有结尾）2、连贯性差，逻辑性差或者不符合逻辑3、表达不清，前言不对后语（条理不清晰）4、语法错误时态用法当(时态的呼应）从句用法不当语法知识不熟悉5、用词不当乱用短语固定搭配不熟悉6、有严重的中国式英语的味道,1.I love it and proud of it.2.Wen Minarets，located in the centerof my hometown.It has a long history.It was built in1131AD，and after a lot of repaired.It has been seven layers.3.Kong Miao，a famous building since 1209 with special style.there is no nails in it so that it is special.You will fill with books when you get into it.4.Gu Lou，lying in front of the government，which is covered an area with 186 square meters since 1548.,5.2011，Wuchuan built a museum of moon cake，it was called Kim Kou museum which is first museum of moon cake in China.6.My hometown is Shanwei，as for me，it is a warm place，because it has many thing which I am know well.It also have many symbol of culture.7.Another result is that you can make you heart have a break,which is good for you health.If you are on holiday,go to my hometown have a travel.8.Many people come to Zhaoqing will buy it as a present to send to their friends.,9.My hometown,located in Guangdong Province,named Lufeng.10.the skillfull cloth of rock peak of limestone of seven of per mountain such as the Big Dipper is in the area is up to lake surface of 6.3 sq.km.s.11.When I was born in Foshan that became my hometown Foshan is a famous city which has long history.12.Kongfu is known to everybody in Foshan，especially Yongchun.,Sample:Symbol of Culture In My Home twon2013-10,In my hometown,the most important symbol is Teochew Opera.People in Chaochou all know Teochew Opera and like it,especially the olds and kids.Once we have some important festivals,there must be a Teochew Opera.Teochew Opera is the link of the home and foreign people of Chaoshan.What is more,it has distinguishing features of our hometown.Teochew Opera is not only one of the ten kinds of Chinese Opera,but it also reflects the culture of my hometown.So we all love Teochew Opera.Teochew Opera has history of 440 years.It combines the local culture with other operas,such as Kunqu Opera.,Sample:Symbol of Culture In My Home twon2013-10,It has other names,such as Chaozhou Opera and Chaodiao and so on.The famous Teochew operas are Chilan Zhou and chaifanghui.Now,the kids of Chaozhou are learning it because they love it.I think it will help us inherit the Teochew Opera.The Teochew Opera also witnesses the history of Chaozhou.Thus we should try our best to protect it and inherit it.I think everyone likes the symbol of culture in my hometown,Teochew Opera.,