《英语书面表达》PPT课件.ppt

英语书面表达,1990年-2004年高考题,历年高考书面表达题,历年高考书面表达题,结论,主要特点,记叙为主稍加议论旁带说明,空间顺序,时间顺序,逻辑顺序,能力要求,书面表达,六 步 法,书面表达六步法,高考题,书面表达六步法,一、审题,确定基本要素:5W1H,何 时 何 地 何 人 为何 如 何 做 了 何 事,书面表达六步法,二、抓要点,确定主要行为,What happened?,书面表达六步法,三、扩展成句,形成基本语义单位,Who did what?,书面表达六步法,四、连句成文,时间 空间 细节连贯 呼应,书面表达六步法,五、查错改错,要尽量剔除错误,书面表达六步法,六、誊写,卷面不工整扣5分,说明：我国某山区张各庄为对外开放单位。请用英语为来宾写一篇简单介绍。内容要点如下：1 背景：张各庄（Zhanggezhuang）远离其他村庄。过去，儿童上学困难。1988年成立本村小学（primary school）。2 现状：教师：3人，均为本村人，中学毕业后回村执教。学生：48人。班级：5个。科目：6门语文、数学、自然（science）、音乐、美术、体育。3 学费：免费。注意：1 要有标题。2 介绍须包括所给要点，但不要逐条译成英语。3 字数：80120。,1990年,1990One possible version,Zhang Ge Zhuang Primary SchoolUntil 1988 Zhang Ge Zhuang had no school of its own.It was pretty hard for the children of the village who had to go to school in other villages which were all far away.Now Zhang Ge Zhuang Primary School has three teachers,teaching 48 pupils.The teachers had finished middle school education before they returned to teach here.The pupils are divided into five different classes,in which six subjects are taught.These are Chinese,Maths,Science,Music,Drawing and Physical Education.Education is free for all children in the village.,1991年,上海出版一份“学生英文报”，对象是我国的学生。请用英语为该报写一段人物介绍，介绍少年体育明星孙书伟。内容要点如下：1 简况：孙书伟（Sun Shuwei），男，14岁，广东（Guangdong）人。2 训练项目：跳水（diving）。3 取得成绩：第十一届亚运会冠军，第六届世界游泳锦标赛冠军。（亚运会：the Asian Games 冠军：champion 游泳锦标赛：swimming championships）4 其他情况：从小就喜欢游泳，8岁进广东跳水队；在学校里认真学习，在跳水队里认真训练，13岁进入国家队；一年后（1990）夺得第十一届亚运会金牌；今年年初获第六届世界游泳锦标赛冠军。注意：1 要有标题。2 介绍须包括所给要点，但不要逐条译成英语。3 字数：80120。,Sun Shuwei-A World Champion in DivingSun Shuwei,a world champion in diving,is a boy of 14 from Guangdong.He loved swimming when he was a small boy and at eight he became a member of the diving team in Guangdong Province.He studied hard at school and trained hard for five years before he came to the national team.A year later in 1990,he won a gold medal at the 11th Asian Games and became a world champion at the 6th World Swimming Championships early this year.,1991One possible version,1992年,下列六幅画描述了你5月31日那天的活动。请根据这些图画用英语写一篇日记。注意：1 日记须包括所有图画的内容，可以适当增加细节，使日记连贯。2 词数100左右。,It was Grandmas birthday.Father,Mother and I went to visit her.She lives with my uncle in a village not too far away.Early in the morning we bought some presents and took the bus to get there.Grandma and Uncle were so glad to see us.We gave the presents to Grandma and she was very happy.Then we sat down to talk,while Uncle went to prepare lunch.The meal was so nice that we all enjoyed it very much.At 4 oclock,we said goodbye and set off for home.,1992One possible version,1993年,为了配合国际爱护动物周，一家英文杂志邀请各国学生提供有关动物的故事。请根据下列六幅图画，用英语为该杂志写一篇故事。注意：bark vi,&n.吠叫1故事须包括所有图画的内容，可以适当增加细节，使故事连贯。2 词数100左右。,My parents live in the country.They keep a dog called Ah Fu.One day my parents went to work in the fields taking my little sister and Ah Fu along.While they were working,my sister walked to a river nearby.Ah Fu followed her there.She was trying to pick a flower when she fell into the river.Ah Fu barked and jumped into the water immediately.When my parents heard Ah Fu barking they ran to the river They saw Ah Fu swimming towards the bank carrying my little sister.My parents praised Ah Fu warmly.It was our brave Ah Fu who had saved my little sister.,1993One possible version,1994年,提示：你校学生会将为来访的美国朋友举办一个晚会，要在学校广播中宣布此事，并欢迎大家参加。为使美国朋友听懂，请你用英语写一篇广播通知。要点如下：宗旨：欢迎来访的美国朋友 组织者：学生会 时间：8月15日(星期六)晚7：30 地点：主楼屋顶花园 活动内容：音乐、跳舞、唱歌、游戏、交换小礼品(请包装好、签名并在包装外面写上几个祝愿词)注意：广播稿约100词。应包括以上要点，但不要逐字翻译，要组织成一篇通顺连贯的短文。开头语已为你写好。生词：交换礼品to exchange gifts 学生会the Students Union May I have your attention,please?I have an announcement to make.,May I have your attention,please?I have an announcement to make.The Student Union is going to hold a party on Saturday evening,August 15,to welcome our friends from the United States.The party will be held in the roof garden of the Main Building.It will begin at 7:30 P.m.There will be music,dancing,singing,games and exchange of gifts.Will everybody please bring along a small gift for this purpose.Remember to wrap it up,sign your name and write a few words of good wishes.Dont forget:7:30,Saturday evening,roof of garden,Main Building.Theres sure to be a lot of fun.Every is welcome.,1994One possible version,1995年,假定你是李华。你和几个朋友约定星期天在人民公园野餐（to have picnic）。你们的英国朋友Peter也应邀参加。请你根据下面的示意图，给他写封短信，告诉他进公园后如何找到你们。注意：1.词数80100。2.开头语已为你写好。,June lst,1995Dear Peter,Were so glad youre coming to join us on Sunday.Here is how you can find us.Well have our picnic in the Peoples Park.You know where that is,dont you?After you enter the park by the main gate,walk straight on till you come to a stream.Cross the stream and turn right.After walking for a while youll come to a hill.Walk around to the other side of the hill.There youll see a lake.Well have our picnic there in the small woods by the lake.Im sure youll have no trouble finding us.Do come!Li Hua,1995One possible version,1996年,你是李华，申请到一家外资企业工作。对方要求你用英语写一篇短文，介绍自己的基本情况。短文应包括下表所列全部内容。,My name is Li Hua.I was born in Dalian,Liaoning Province in February 1977.I started school in 1984 when I was seven.I studied in Guangming Primary School from 1984 to 1990.After that I went to No.62 Middle School of Dalian and graduated this summer.The main subjects I studied at school included Chinese,maths,English,physics,chemistry and computer.I like English and computer best and I am very good at them.Last year I won first prize in the school computer competition.In my spare time I enjoy listening to popular music and collecting stamps.My favourite sports are swimming in summer and skating in winter.,1996One possible version,1997年,下列图画描述的是你的一段亲身经历，请据此为一家中学生英文报的故事专栏写一篇短文。注意：1.短文必须包括图画所表现的主要内容，可以适当增加细节，使其连贯、完整。2.叙述必须用第一人称。3.词数100左右。生词：违章者offender n.十字路口crossroads n.,The other day my brother and I went to the cinema by bicycle.My brother was riding with me sitting on the seat behind.As we came to the crossroads a young man and a girl came up and stopped us.“Weve found you at long last,”they said.But we didnt know them.Pointing to a policeman not far away,the young man explained,“He stopped us about half an hour ago and made us catch the next offender.So come on,stand here.Hope you dont have to wait as long as we did.Good luck.”,1997One possible version,1998年,5月3日,你参观了一个农场.请根据下列图画用英语写一篇日记。注意：1.日记须包括所有图画的内容，可以适当增减细节，使日记连贯；2 字数100左右。,May 3,Sunday Fine Today we visited a farm.Early in the morning we met at the school gate and went there together.The farm workers gave us a warm welcome.Then the head of the farm showed us around.How glad we were to see the crops and vegetables growing well.At noon we had a picnic lunch in the sunshine.After a short rest,we had great fun singing and dancing,telling jokes or stories.Two of us even played a game of chess.The time passed quickly.Before we knew it,we had to say goodbye to the workers.,1998One possible version,1999年,假设你是李华，在一所中学读书。最近收到美国朋友Smith先生的来信。他三年前参观过学校，听说现在变化很大，希望了解有关情况。参照下图，给他写一封信，介绍你校的变化。注意：1回信须包括图画的主要内容，可以适当增减细节，使内容连贯。2 字数100左右。,July9,1999Dear Mr Smith,I was so p1eased to hear from you and am writing to tel1 you something about my school.You are right.Quite a few changes have taken place.On one side of the ground there is a new c1assroom building.On the other side,where the playground used to be now stands another new buildingour library.In it there are all kinds of books，newspapers and magazines.The play ground is now in front of the school.We have also planted a lot of trees in and a round the school.I hope you come and see for yourself some day.Best wishes.Yours,Li Hua,1999One possible version,2000年,假设你是李华，在美国探亲。2000年2月8日清晨，你目击一起交通事故。警察局让你写一份材料，报告当时所见情况。请根据下列图画写出报告。注意：目击者应该准确报告事实；词数100左右；结尾已为你写好。About two minutes later I stopped a passing car and took the old man to the nearest hospital.Li Hua,It was 7:15 on the morning of February 8,2000.I was walking along Park Road towards the east when an elderly man came out of the park on the other side of the street.Then I saw a yellow car drive up Third Street and make a right turn into Park Road.The next moment the car hit the man while he was crossing the road.He fell with a cry.The car didnt stop but drove off at great speed heading west.I noticed the driver was a young woman and the plate number was AC864.About two minutes later I stopped a passing car and took the old man to the nearest hospital.Li Hua,2000One possible version,2001年,假设你是李华，你的澳大利亚朋友Dick听说中国的中小学正在减轻学生的学习负担，来信询问有关情况。请你根据下表提供的信息，写一封回信，谈一谈减负给你的学习和生活带来的变化。注意：1、词数100左右；2、开头和结尾已为你写好。生词：减轻学生负担reduce learning load Dear Dick,How nice to hear from you againBest wishes.Li Hua,Dear Dick,How nice to hear from you again.You want to know what is going on in schools in China?In short,things have begun to improve since schools were called on to reduce learning load.I dont know about others,but I used to have to work even at weekends doing endless homework and attending classes as well.Now I have more free time.I can follow my own interests such as reading books,visiting museums,and taking computer lessons.In the evenings I can watch news on TV or read newspapers.Whats more,I can go to bed earlier.As far as I know,everyone is happy about this new arrangement of things.Best wishes.Li Hua,2001One possible version,2002年,最近，你校同学正在参加某英文报组织的一场讨论。讨论的组题是：公园要不要收门票？请你根据下表所提供的信息，给报社写一封信，客观地介绍讨论的情况。注意：1、信的开头以为你写好。2、词数：100左右。3、参考词汇：门票 entrance feeDear Editor,Im writing to tell you about the discussion weve had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks.,Dear Editor,Im writing to tell you about the discussion we ve had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks.Opinions are divided on the question.60%of the students are against the idea of entrance fees.They believe a public park should be free of charge.People need a place where they can rest and enjoy themselves.Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away.What is more,it will become necessary to build gates and walls,which will do harm to the appearance of a city.On the other hand,40%think that fees should be charged because you need money to pay gardeners and other workers,and to buy plants and young trees.They suggest,however,fees should be charged low.Yours truly,Li Hua,2002One possible version,2003年,假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Bob将于九月到你所在城市的建新华文学校学中文，来信请你在学校附近为他找一套住房。请根据图画提供的信息，写信介绍住房的情况，并告知住房面积为25平方米，月租500元。注意：1.词数：100左右。2参考词汇:房租rent(n).,Dear Bob:Im so glad to learn that youre coming in September.Ive found a place for you.Its a small flat of 25 square metres,with a bedroom,a bathroom and a kitchen.In the bedroom there is a bed,a sofa,a desk and a chair.The rent is 500 Yuan per month.The flat is in a building on Fangcao Street,which is not far from Jianxin Chinese School.Bus No.11 Can take you straight to the school.In fact,it is only one stop.Do you think youd like it?If not,I can try and find another place for you.Just let me know.Yours,Li Hua,2003One possible version,2004年(GDMET),假设你是下图的李华。请根据图画所提供的信息，写一篇英语作文，描述昨天晚上邻居看足球赛影响你学习的情况，并描写你随后与邻居交涉的过程(如：你向邻居提出要求，对方向你表示歉意等。)注意：1.词数：80120 2.可以编写对话或其它叙述方式描写你与邻居的交涉过程,About 9 oclock yesterday evening,I was busy preparing for my tomorrows test when suddenly loud noises came into my room.My neighbor was watching a football game on TV in his room.The noise was so loud that I couldnt go on studying.I covered my ears with hands,but it was no use.I became so impatient that I had to go to explain my difficulty.After hearing what I said,my neighbor apologized and turned down the TV immediately.I thanked him and went back to continue my study.,2004One possible version,Two other possible versions,1 About 9 oclock last night,I was doing my homework.Suddenly I heard my neighbor shouting and laughing loudly.He was watching a football game on TV.Icouldnt go on studying and became impatient.I covered my ears,trying to keep the noises out,but failed.So I had to go my neighbor.I knocked at his door and said,Good evening,Mr Yang!Could you please turn down your TV a bit?I am doing my homework.“Oh,Im really sorry to have disturbed you.Well do as you say.”My neighbor said politely.Thank you very much.I said and went back to continue my study.,2Last night I was preparing for the coming examination when the noise from my neighbor interrupted me.The noise went on and on.It was so loudly that I could hardly pay attention to my study any longer.So I went to my neighbours house and said to him:“Excuse me,would you please turn down the TV?Im preparing tomorrows examination.”Having heard these words,his face went red.And he said,“Ok,Ill turn it down.Li Hua,Im very sorry to have made so much noise.Just now,the football was very wonderful.I was too excited to control myself.I wont do that again.Good luck in your coming examination.”After that,I got down to my study.,结 论,审题，抓点造句，成文改错，誉写背诵精彩范文,退出,The end,