《写作常见错误》PPT课件.ppt

*This may effect our mood.-This may affect our mood.*Reading will benefit from us.-Reading will benefit us.-We will benefit from reading.,*People cant understand why.-People cannot*She married to Tom.-She married Tom,*The government lacks of money.-The government lacks money.*In the morden society,-In the modern society,*We learned many knowledges in this experience.-We obtained(acquired/gained)much knowledge in this experience.*He collected many datas.-He collected many data.,*People are very concerned with this issue.-People are very concerned about this issue.*There are many people think this is wrong.-Many people think this is wrong.,*On the one hand,this makes us healthy;on the other hand,it can save us money.-For one thing for another*I wish they are happy forever.-I hope they will be happy for ever.,*People should rise their awareness of enviromental protection.-People should raise their awareness of environmental protection.*I wish they are happy forever.-I hope they will be happy for ever.,*When one have money,he can do what he want to.-Once one has money,he can do what he wants(to do).*I very like you.-I like you very much.,*There are many ways we can learn English well.-There are many ways for us to learn English well.*Money is just the thing to be used to buy the thing they need.-They spend money on what they need.,Bird can fly.A bird can fly.Birds can fly.The bird can fly.The birds can fly.,*Work hard is very important for us to succeed.Working hard is very important for us to succeed.,*Children who are raise in impoverished families can generally deal with this situation.Children who are raised in impoverished families can generally deal with this situation.,*They are treated different.They are treated differently.*Internet will not instead of teachers in the future.Internet will not replace teachers in the future.,*Some people think it is justified,others think it is unfair.Some people think it is justified,while others think it is unfair.,*There are a lot of people in the world suffer from poverty.A lot of people in the world suffer from poverty.,like,