《书面表达示范》PPT课件.ppt

English Writing英语书面表达训练,写过去的事,甘肃省静宁县第一中学 夏青锋,历年高考书面表达题,主要特点,记叙为主稍加议论旁带说明,空间顺序,时间顺序,能力要求,逻辑顺序,主要问题,要点不全,线索不清,原因：步骤不对,书面表达,六 步 法,书面表达六步法,书面表达六步法,一、审题,确定基本要素:5W1H,何 时 何 地 何 人 为何 如 何 做 了 何 事,书面表达六步法,二、抓要点,确定主要行为,What happened?,书面表达六步法,三、扩展成句,形成基本语义单位,Who did what?,书面表达六步法,四、连句成文,时间 空间 细节连贯 呼应,书面表达六步法,五、查错改错,要尽量剔除错误,书面表达六步法,六、誊写,卷面不工整扣5分,课堂练习,请用六步法写一篇短文,五个“W”一个“H”,第一步 审题,认真读题然后找出,把答案写在题中相应的位置,NMET2000书面表达,假设你是李华，在美国探亲。2000年2月8日清晨，你目击了一起交通事故。警察局让你写一份材料，报告当时所见情况。根据下列图画写出报告。1、目击者应该准确报告事实；2、词数100左右；3、结尾已为你写好。_About two minutes later I stopped a passing car and took the old man to the nearest hospital.Li Hua,附图,1,2,3,4,At 7:15 on the morning of February 8,2000,I saw a woman driving a car hit the man in the street.,第二步 抓要点,一幅图，一要点,时态直达 语态到位,介/副词紧随,抓要点，配动词,第三步 扩展成句,把要点变成完整的句子。,注意使用介/副词,第四步 连句成文,增加细节 呼应首尾,句与句相连,词与词搭配,第五步 查错改错,主谓一致吗？,时态正确吗？,时态正确吗？,有“半截话”吗？,第六步 誊写,卷面整洁不一定加分，卷面潦草一定要扣分！,作业选评,要改进吗？,为什么？,精 彩 范 文 赏 析,At 7:15 a.m.on the morning of Feb.8th,2000,I was heading east on the south side of the Park Road,taking my morning walk as usual.I saw an old man on the other side of the road outside the gate of the City Park.,精 彩 范 文 赏 析,He was just crossing the street when a car on the 3rd Street made a sudden right turn at the crossing.,精 彩 范 文 赏 析,The car was so fast that the old man even didnt have time to dodge and the car hit the elderly hard.,精 彩 范 文 赏 析,I thought the driver would have stopped to help,but she didnt.Instead,she just drove off,leaving the old man still lying on the ground in pain.,精 彩 范 文 赏 析,Fortunately,I noted down the details:it was a yellow car,the plate number of which was AC864,and the driver was a young lady.After that,I went over to check out the old man.,精 彩 范 文 赏 析,About two minutes later I stopped a passing car and took the old man to the nearest hospital.Li Hua,精 彩 范 文 赏 析,图1,图2,图3,图4,AC864,小结,审题，抓点造句，成文改错，誉写,作业,复习本课要点背诵精彩范文,Thank you！,请不吝赐教！,