2017考试说明读后续写.ppt
二、读后续写,【高分秘诀】1.词数不应少于130词。2.写作内容要与所给短文及段落开头语要衔接紧密。3.内容要丰富,对所标出的关键词语要至少用到5处。4.语言结构和词汇要丰富和准确。5.上下文要连贯。【写作素材】阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。,A funny thing happened to Arthur when he was on the way to work one day.As he walked along Park Avenue near the First National Bank,he heard the sound of someone trying to start a car.He tried again and again but couldnt get the car moving.Arthur turned and looked inside at the face of a young man who looked worried.Arthur stopped and asked,“It looks like youve got a problem,”Arthur said.“Im afraid so.Im in a big hurry and I cant start my car.”“Is there something I can do to help?”Arthur asked.The_young_man looked at the two suitcases in_the_back_seat and then said,“Thanks.If youre sure it wouldnt be too much trouble,you could help me get these suitcases into a taxi.”,“No trouble at all.Id be glad to help.”The young man got out and took one of the suitcases from the back seat.After placing it on the ground,he turned to get the other one.Just as Arthur picked up the first suitcase and started walking,he heard the long loud_noise_of_an_alarm.It was from the_bank.There had been a robbery(抢劫)!Park Avenue had been quiet a moment before.Now the air was filled with the sound of the alarm and the_shouts of people running from all directions.Cars stopped and the passengers joined the crowd in front of the bank.People asked each other,“What happened?”But everyone had a different answer.,Arthur,still carrying the suitcase,turned to look at the bank and walked right into the young woman in front of him.She looked at the suitcase and then at him.Arthur was surprised.“Why is she looking at me like that?”He thought.“The suitcase!She thinks Im the_bank_thief!”Arthur looked around at the crowd of people.He became frightened,and without another thought,he started to run.,注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150 左右;2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1:As he was running,Arthur heard the young man shouting behind,“Stop,stop!”_,Paragraph 2:The taxi stopped in front of the Police Station and Arthur._,Reading and writing,What is the type of writing?A.narrative(记叙文)B.exposition(说明文)C.argumentation(议论文),when,where,who,what,why,how,Reading for brief information,Park Avenue,the bank,The young man,Arthur,people,the bank thief,Suitcases,in the back seat,loud noise of an alarm,robbery,the shouts,注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右。2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语。Park Avenue,the bank The young man,people,the bank thief Suitcases,in the back seat,loud noise of an alarm,robbery,the shouts3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好。4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1:As he was running,Arthur heard the young man shouting behind,“Stop,stop!_.Paragraph 2:The taxi stopped in front of the Police Station and Arthur._.,Why did the young man look worried?What happened?Why did Arthur decide to run?Where was he running?,【参考范文1】As he was running,Arthur heard the young man shouting behind,“Stop,stop!”Arthur immediately realized that the_young_man was the bank robber.So Arthur didnt stop,but continued to run until he saw and caught a taxi in front of him.He quickly put the suitcase in the car and said to the driver,“Please hurry to the Police Station.I have a case to report to the police;the man shouting behind,is the_bank_thief!”The taxi raced away to the Police Station like an arrow.The taxi stopped in front of the Police Station and Arthur said to the police who had been waiting and who had already received the robbery report,“This suitcase is that of the bank robber.It may be filled with the money stolen from the_bank.I hand it to you.Please get ready to arrest the man.”,Tip:A coherent paragraph is based on logical facts referred from related clues in the context.(条理清楚的段落是建立在合逻辑的事实基础上的,而这些事实应根据上下文的相关线索来推断。)衔接自然 上下连贯 紧扣主题 语言丰富,