中考英语专题总结短文改错课件.ppt

中考新题型,短文改错,2018年中考新题型：短文改错,假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。,2018年4月九年级黄石调考题,My parents and I spent half a month in New York last year.We went to there in autumn.We think it is best season to visit America.The weather is usually cool or there arent too many tourist in October.We stayed in a hotel in the center of the city.It was conveniently as we travelled most on foot.We couldnt understand the bus routes,and my parents didnt like travelled by underground.I went to look at the places that all tourists went to see.We went shopping in Times Square and spend too much money.What we liked most were going to the theater.We dont have the chance to see so wonderful plays at home.,and,such,spent,was,We,travelling/traveling,convenient,tourists,介词,形容词,冠词,动词,代词,动词,副词,动词,连词,名词,中考短文改错命题特征及命题趋势,1.选材特点短文一般120词左右。多为第一人称记叙文，偶尔有议论文或者说明文。短文改错取材于考生自己的作文或类似考生的随笔，且话题常见。篇章结构的难易程度符合中学生的认知水平，无生僻的词语和怪、偏、难的句子结构。2.错误类型 错误类型有多词、少词和 错词三种。在文章的10个错误中，其比例一般为1：1:8。,对于英语短文改错题，学生和老师都认为难度不大，然而，学生对此题深感头痛，主要原因是：1.发现不了错处.2.找到了错处不知道怎么改.3.找不全10处错误.,学情分析及对策,第一步：快速阅览全文，把握文章的主要时态、人 称及文章的主旨大意，顺便标记自己一眼就能看出的错误。第二步：细读文章的每一句话。一般要结合文章的前后句及出题规律来做题。第三步：代入已经修改完成的答案通读全文，看其是否通顺。,短文改错题应注重以下技巧：,一、谨记答题原则(1)“四不改”原则：单词拼写不改。大小写不改。词序错误不改(应从错词或少词方面考虑)。标点符号不改。(2)“五改动”原则：忠实于原文原则(不可改变原文的原意)。错误以改动最少为原则。虚词以添加或者删除为原则。实词以改变形式为原则。客观性和唯一性原则(正确内容不能多种表达去替换),动词形，名词数 还要注意形和副 代词格,细领悟冠词连词常光顾,A Limerick（打油诗）,介词、短语要记住 非谓语，易错处句子成分弄清楚 逻辑错误须关注,1.名词,a.She said that she and my schoolmate all wished me success.,b.We stopped to rest for a while and drink some waters.,c.He collected some informations about computers.,schoolmates,water,information,名词的单复数,错误类型及解题技巧,2.代词,a.The Smiths did his best to make me feel at home.,their,b.Ill spend all the whole weekend reading.,c.He is sitting between you and I.,me,代词的种类（人称、物主、反身、指示、不定、疑问、连接、关系）注意主格宾格和前后指代一致。,1.名词,2.代词,3.冠词,a.I sat in the front of the TV at 7 oclock,when the game just began.,b.Today I visited the Smiths，a American family.,an,c.What a great progress he hasmade.,冠词的种类、习惯用法、泛指、类指和特指。,1.名词,2.代词,3.冠词,4.介词,a.My wife is also happy because of I have given up smoking.,b.In fact,they are planning to visit China in next year.,c.We must remember that we play for the team instead ourselves,of,介词的习惯用法、介宾的形式。,1.名词,2.代词,3.冠词,4.介词,5.动词,b.There will have a class meeting next Monday.,be,a.By last December,three ships had built in Wuhan.,been,c.She smiled and nodding her head.,nodded,动词的时态、语态、语气、主谓一致和固定搭配。,1.名词,2.代词,3.冠词,4.介词,5.动词,6.形容词/副词,a.Who works the most careful inyour class?,carefully,b.This book isnt as cheaper as that one.,cheap,c.The bad meat smells terribly.,terrible,1.修饰名词，作宾补及连系动词后用形容词；2.修饰动词，形容词，副词及整个句子时用副词；3.比较级和最高级的使用。,1.名词,2.代词,3.冠词,4.介词,5.动词,6.形容词/副词,7.连词,a.She is smiling at me but nodding at me.,and,b.Though he works hard,but he didnt pass the exam.,c.He came to work late,so he got up late,because,连词的种类（并列连词、从属连词）、用法、行文逻辑。,1.名词,2.代词,3.冠词,4.介词,5.动词,6.形容词/副词,7.连词,b.The boss makes them to work twelve hours a day.,8.非谓语动词,a.I want to thank you for invited me to your part last night,invitng,c.Play football makes us grow up tall and strong,Playing,动名词、分词、不定式的句法功能、位置等。,动词形，名词数 还要注意形和副 代词格,细领悟冠词连词常光顾,A Limerick（打油诗）,介词、短语要记住 非谓语，易错处句子成分弄清楚 逻辑错误须关注,At Christmas Eve,Jim went with his father to choose a Christmas tree.They choose a big one.It was almost as taller as the room!They put them in the corner of the sitting room.Kate was covered it with a lot of Christmas light.The sitting room looked really beautifully at the moment.There was a fire burning in the fire place,but the Christmas tree lights were shinning brightly.Jim and his parents singing and dancing happy.,At Christmas Eve,Jim went with hisfather to choose a Christmas tree.They choose a big one.It was almost as taller as the room!They put them in the corner of the sitting room.,On,_,chose,_,tall,_,it,动词形,介词、短语要记住,还要注意形和副,代词数词，细领悟,Kate was covered it with a lot ofChristmas light.The sitting room lookedreally beautifully at the moment.There was a fire burning in the fire place,but the Christmastree lights were shinning brightly.Jim and hisparents singing and dancing happy.,_,lights,_,beautiful,_,and,were,动词形,还要注意形和副,动词形,名词数,冠词连词常光顾,_,happily,还要注意形和副,动词形，名词数 还要注意形和副 代词格,细领悟冠词连词常光顾,A Limerick（打油诗）,介词、短语要记住 非谓语，易错处句子成分弄清楚 逻辑错误须关注,Mr and Mrs Zhang all work in our school.They live far from the school,and it takes them about a hour and a half to go to work every day.In their spare time,they are interesting in planting vegetables in their garden,that is on the rooftop of their house.They often get up earlier and water the vegetables together.They have also bought for some gardening tools.Beside,they often get some useful informations from the Internet.When summer came,they will invite their students pick the fresh vegetables!,both,an/one,interested,which,early,Besides,information,comes,Practice 2,Exercise 1,These days,students in our class were discussing the ways to celebrate graduation.Here are some idea from our group.As for Jim,he thinks we should not have a party to relax yourselves.Mike prefers to plant trees to make our school more beautiful.Beside,its a special way to express thanks for our school.In Nancys opinion,she enjoys make a video to record the school life with teachers or classmates.In my opinion,traveling with classmates is a wonderfully way to celebrate graduation.On the one hand,its a chance to get together and have fun.On the other hand,we can start new life journey through traveling.,are,ideas,ourselves,besides,to,making,and,wonderful,Exercise 2,Today I was late for work,all because of I got stuck behind a mini bus on the narrow street of mine neighborhood.As I sat there waited,I looked up and saw an old men，wearing a uniform and carrying a lunch box,come out of a house.I could tell by the slowly way he walked that he had special needs and what the bus blocking my way was for him.As he was about board the bus,he turned,smiled or waved at me.My anger left as I smiled and waved back.That event makes me late for work but I had a best day ever.,my,waiting,man,slow,that,and,the,made,Dont make the same mistake twice.不要重复犯同样的错误。,A Proverb,Thanks!,