英语基础写作专题.ppt

,高考英语复习专题 基础写作 汕头市金禧中学余雪红,一、基础写作的推荐步骤：,第1步 审题,说明文,描述学校植物园,第三人称,一般现在时,5项,一、基础写作的推荐步骤：第1步 审题第2步 归纳、排列信息点（整合信息）第3步 确定短语和句型、连词成句第4步 组句成篇第5步 检查修改二、评分标准（要求）：1、句子结构准确 2、信息内容完整3、篇章结构连贯 4、书写规范、卷面整洁,2009广州一模基础写作：请根据以下构思图，写一份关于你校植物园的英语简介参考词汇植物园 botanical garden写作要求：只能使用5个句子表达全部内容。评分标准：句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。,第2步 整合信息,译成英语。1、校园西南角，面积1000平方米。at the southwest corner of our school,1000 square meters(1000)（植物园）位于我校校园西南角，面积（有)1000平方米。(1)Located at the southwest corner of our school,the botanical garden is spread an area of 1000 square meters.(2)Located at the southwest corner of our school,the botanical garden covers an area of 1000 square meters.(3)With an area of 1000 square meters,the botanical garden is located at the southwest corner of our school.(4)Covering an area of 1000 square meters,the botanical garden is located at the southwest corner of our school.(5)The botanical garden is located at the southwest corner of our school and it covers an area of 1000 square meters.,改正下列句子：1.The botanical garden which on the southwest of school with a area with 1000 square kilmetter.The botanical garden,which is located at the southwest corner of the school,covers an area of 1000 square meters.2.The botanical garden located in the southwestern on our school,covered 1000 meter.The botanical garden is located in the southwest of our school,covering 1000 square meters.The botanical garden is located in the southwest of our school and it covers 1000 square meters.,2、20年的历史，2008年重建 history,rebuild（植物园）（有）20年的历史，（在）2008年（被）重建。（1）The garden is over 20 years old and was rebuilt in 2008.（2）The garden has a history of 20 years and was rebuilt in 2008.（3）With a history of 20 years,the botanical garden was rebuilt in 2008.改正句子：1、We schools botanical garden had a history of 20 years and it was rebuilted in 2008.Our schools botanical garden has a history of 20 years and it was rebuilt in 2008.,3、各种花卉、树木、药用植物 all kinds of,various kinds of，a variety of,varieties of,beautiful flowers,trees and herbs.(你可以在植物园里看见)各种花卉、树木、药用植物。（1）As you walk through the garden,you can see various kinds of beautiful flowers,trees and herbs.（在植物园里有)各种花卉、树木、药用植物。（2）There are varieties of beautiful flowers,trees and herbs in the botanical garden.4、观赏至少需1小时 visit,at least one hour 需要花费至少1小时来观赏植物园。(1)If youre planning to explore the garden,set aside at least one hour.(2)It takes you one hour to visit the botanical garden.(3)You may spend one hour(in)visiting the botanical garden.,5、美化校园 研究植物场所 休闲之地 beautify the school/make our school more beautiful study the plants relax oneself植物园可以美化校园，它也是一个学生研究植物和休闲的地方。(1)The garden makes our school more beautiful and its a fantastic place for students to study and learn more about plants or simply to relax for a while.（2）The botanical garden can beautify our school and its a good place for students to study plants and relax themselves.(3)Not only can the botanical garden beautify our school but(also)its a good place for students to study plants and relax themselves.,第3步 连句成篇,Located at the southwest corner of our school,the botanical garden is spread over an area of 1000.The garden is over 20 years old and was rebuilt in 2008.As you walk through the garden,you can see various kinds of beautiful flowers,trees and herbs.If youre planning to explore the garden,set aside at least one hour.The garden makes our school more beautiful and its a fantastic place for students to study and learn more about plants or simply to relax for a while.第4步 检查修改,一、基础写作的推荐步骤：1、认真审题 2、归纳、排列信息点（整合信息）3、确定短语和句型、连词成句4、组句成篇5、检查修改二、评分标准（要求）：1、句子结构准确2、信息内容完整3、篇章结构连贯4、书写规范、卷面整洁,Lets try!,某报设有一个求助信箱，请根据以下表中列出的信息，以高三学生李华的名义给Mr.Helper写一封英文短信。信的开头和结尾已写好，不计入五句话。Dear Mr.Helper,Im a senior 3 student.I am now in great need of your help because I can hardly stand the great pressure._ I am looking forward to your advice.Yours sincerely,Li Hua,写作步骤：,第1步 审题,写信（应用文）,描述高三学生现状,第一人称，一般现在时,6项,第2步 整合信息,译成英语。,1)每天在校时间约10小时。每天完成作 业时间34小时。Every day we stay at school for about ten hours to have lessons.We spend at least three to four hours doing our homework.2)每天几乎没有时间娱乐、消遣。a.We hardly have any time for relaxation.b.Hardly can we find any time to do what we want.,3)每天睡眠时间不足，不利于健康。a.We dont have enough time to sleep,which does harm to our health.b.We suffer from lack of sleep,which,in the long run,is not good for our health.4)负担过重的原因是面临高考。a.The main cause of our heavy burden is the pressure from the college entrance examination.b.The reason why we are carrying such a heavy burden is that we are facing the college entrance examination.,5)父母对我们的期望很高。a.Our parents expect too much of us.b.Our parents have high expectations of us.,Dear Mr.Helper,Im a senior 3 student.I am now in great need of your help because I can hardly stand the great pressure.Every day we stay at school for about ten hours tohave lessons _ spend at least three to four hours doing our homework._,hardly can we find any time to do what we want._,We suffer from lack of sleep,which,in the long run,is not good for our health.The reason why we are carrying such a heavy burden is that we are getting the pressure from the college entrance examination._,Our parents have high expectations of us.I am looking forward to your advice.Yours sincerely,Li Hua,第3步 连句成篇,and,As a result,Whats worse,In addition,附录：如何使文章连贯？(过渡词的使用)1)时间：soon,then,suddenly,meanwhile,before,after,earlier,in the morning,afterwards,later,immediately,next,the other day,nowadays,gradually2)空间:above,below,up,down,under,near,far from,in front of,behind,beside,beyond,on the right/left,around,inside,outside,opposite to,next to,on top of,across.,3)列举：for example,such as,first(ly),second(ly),finally,besides,apart form,for one thingfor another,(the)last but not(the)least(最后但也是最重要的)4)比较:like,unlike,on the contrary,in contrast to,on one handon the other hand,than,not soas,asas,while,similarly,the former,the latter,someothers,onethe other,compared with/to,5)逻辑关系：a.并列：and,as well as,alsob.转折：but,however,yetc.递进：besides,apart from,in addition,whats more,furthermore,moreover,to make things worsed.原因：because,because of,as,since,for that reasone.结果：so,therefore,thus,as a result f.让步：though,although,in spite of,Thanks!bye-bye!,