英语书面表达专项训练课件（共38张PPT）.ppt

,Improve your Composition,Description of a cartoon or picture-高考作文指导,小 结,15分和20多分的作文到底差在哪里？,What makes a good composition?,Discussion,Everything needed included,Good beginning and ending,Well organized and smoothly developed,Proper linking words between sentences and paragraphs,Describing a picture,1.What does the picture say and reflect?,2.How can we express the idea(s)properly in English?,Problems：,读图与立意,参考词汇：hogwash oil 地沟油,The use of hogwash oil and poisonous rice in restaurants has already raised a wide range of social concern.,细节,寓意,细节,寓意,The students as well as their parents only focus on their academic achievements,neglecting psychological quality and moral standards.,读图与立意,细节,问题,Two snails are joking about the cars on the overcrowded roads,which reflects that heavy traffic jam has been a problem.,读图与立意,读图与立意,细节,寓意,Positive people always see an opportunity in every difficulty,while pessimistic people are always taking a negative view of opportunities,细节,寓意,Dont copy others way of solving the problem.Do everything in the right way.,读图与立意,Describing a picture,1.Tense and person,4.Ways to advance or improve words and sentences,Process:,2.Sentence patterns,3.Proper ways to describe a picture,（南京2011年二模)请你根据下面这幅漫画用英语写一篇短文。短文内容应该包括以下三个方面：1.描述这幅漫画的内容。2.是否同意他们的教育方式,并陈述理由。3.对家庭教育提出建议。注意：1.词数：150左右。2.作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。3.参考词汇：溺爱 spoil v.As can be seen in the cartoon,the young couple educate their child in different ways._,Which tense and person？,Which tense and person？,As is vividly shown in the picture,As can be seen in the picture,In the picture,there is(are)/is(are)doing,Commonly used sentence patterns,Compare different descriptions:,要求：描述图片内容，如人物、动作、表情等等,3.,a glass bottle,with only a little water in it,is trying to attach a label to its body,to announce to the world it is full.Its expression suggests that its very proud and looking down on the others.,1.In the picture we can see a bottle of less water whose label reads full.,2.From the picture we can see that there is a bottle.It has two hands and tries to put an label reading“full”on its body.A smile is on the neck of the bottle.Inside the bottle is there a little water.,思考：你能想到哪些词汇使用的原则？,？,Words,1、词组优先原则,2、地道原则,1.Through traveling,I learned a lot of knowledge.2.Through traveling,I gainedobtained a lot of knowledge.,1.Computers are very important in our life.2.Computers play a very important role in our life.,原 词 work hard happy more and more people in order to do,3、避免重复原则,1.I like reading while my brother likes watching television.2.I like reading while my brother enjoys watching television.,4、高级原则,替换词work diligentlydelightedan increasing number offor the purpose of doing,词汇使用的原则,1、词组优先原则,2、地道原则,3、避免重复原则,4、高级原则,四项原则,思考：你能想到的好句式有哪些？,Sentences,？,一、IT作形式主语或形式宾语句型 操作难度写作效果,It is convenient to keep in touch with your family by using the Internet.,To keep in touch with your family by using the Internet is convenient.,二、主动句与被动句的互换。操作难度 写作效果,The government should take immediate measures to deal with the present financial crisis.,Immediate measures should be taken to deal with the present financial crisis.,三、将陈述句改为倒装句。操作难度 写作效果,We can achieve our goal in this way.,Only in this way can we achieve our goal.,四、将几个简单句合并为复合句。操作难度写作效果,The magic of silver screen is fascinating.It cannot be replaced by other ways of watching films.,（2013镇江）The magic of silver screen is so fascinating that it cannot be replaced by other ways of watching films.,2.The intellectual property law has come into effect.Websites are forbidden to provide free music download.That is certain to benefit the whole society in the long term.,（2013南通）As the intellectual property law has come into effect,websites are forbidden to provide free music download,which is certain to benefit the whole society in the long term.,五、分词结构代替状语/定语从句 操作难度写作效果,The girl realizes her mom must be very tired after a days work.The girl helps to remove the bag from her shoulder.,（2011江苏）Realizing her mom must be very tired after a days work,the girl helps to remove the bag from her shoulder.,六、WITH 引导的短语或者复合结构 操作难度 写作效果,（2009 山东）With the Spring Festival drawing near,people will hold varieties of activities.,The Spring Festival is drawing near.And people will hold varieties of activities.,Attention:1.使用复杂的句型和结构时，要有把握能正确地表达；2.要注意分寸，应根据书面表达的内容和篇章结构而定，做到地道得体，千万不能生搬硬套，画蛇添足。,多读 多背 多模仿,书写潦草、字数不够或未能传达读者任何信息，得 分,0,卷面不整洁;涂改较多;语言 错误多;层次不清;得 分,5,Practice makes perfect!Lets have a try!,（南京2011年二模)请你根据下面这幅漫画用英语写一篇短文。短文内容应该包括以下三个方面：1.描述这幅漫画的内容。2.是否同意他们的教育方式,并陈述理由。3.对家庭教育提出建议。注意：1.词数：150左右。2.作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。3.参考词汇：溺爱 spoil v.As can be seen in the cartoon,the young couple educate their child in different ways._,（2011年江苏卷）下面这幅照片展现了女儿为回家妈妈拿包的情景。请根据你对这幅照片的理解用英语写一篇短文。你的短文应包含以下内容：描述照片内容，如情景、人物、动作等等；结合自身实际，谈谈你的感想；举例说明你能为家长减负做些什么。注意：可参照图中文字及下面文章开头所给提示，作必要的发挥想象；词数150左右。开头已经写好，不计入总词数；作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。The burden of students has been a hot topic for years,but the load of parents has received little attention,especially from their own children._,2013年盐城、南京一模,Homework,