写作点拨系列(九).ppt
写作点拨系列（九）短文写作之提纲作文,(2012山东高考)假设你是新华中学的学生李华，不久前在学校举办的英语竞赛中获得一等奖。校报请你写一篇稿件刊登在英文版面上，介绍你课外学习英语的经验。请根据以下提示用英语写一篇短文：1.参加英语角的益处；2.坚持写英语日记的作用；3.英文阅读网站(EnjoyReading)对你的帮助。注意：1.词数120150个；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。,【审题抓准信息快速推断】,提纲作文,介绍你课外学习英语的经验,一般现在时为主,第一人称为主,【定点把握要点，遣词造句】第1段：点明话题参加英语角【信息】假设你是新华中学的学生李华，不久前在学校举办的英语竞赛中获得一等奖【点拨】转化人称，注意文章的逻辑性【运用】(1)我是新华中学的一名学生，名字叫李华。在不久前学校举办的英语竞赛中获得一等奖。My name is Li Hua,a student from Xinhua Middle School.I _ in the English contest _ not long ago.,got the first place,held by our school,第2段：列举学习英语的经验【信息】参加英语角的益处；坚持写日记的作用，英文阅读网站对你的帮助【点拨】增加细节，使文章条理【运用】(2)首先，参加英语角有助于提高英语口语，所以无论什么时候有机会我都会把握它。一般表达：First of all,attending English Corner is helpful to improve my oral English.Whenever there is an opportunity,Ill grasp it.,高级表达：(用连词so合并句子)First of all,attending English Corner is of great help to improvemy oral English,_.,so whenever there is an opportunity,Ill grasp,it,(3)其次，我坚持写英语日记，这使我把发生在日常生活中的事情表达出来，通过这种方式能训练我的英语写作能力。一般表达：Secondly,I keep writing English diaries.It enables me to express what happens in daily life and in this way I can practice my written English.高级表达：(用非限制性定语从句连接成一个句子)Secondly,I keep writing English diaries,_ and in this way I can practice my written English.,which enables me to,express what happens in daily life,(4)再次，我也浏览英文阅读网站。Thirdly,_.(5)众所周知，我们需要泛读来开阔我们的视野，所以我们最好养成每天阅读的好习惯。_,we need extensive reading to enlarge our vision,_ reading English materials every day.,I also surf EnjoyReading on the Internet,As we all know,so wed better develop a good habit of,第3段：学习英语的体会【信息】对课外学习英语的经验的总结【点拨】适度发挥，以使文章符合逻辑【运用】(6)只有坚持我们已经决定要做的，我们才会达到目标。_we achieve a goal.,Only when we stick to what we have decided to do will,【注意事项】这是一篇提纲作文。在写作时要注意以下几点：1.认真审题和分析所给出的提纲，认清题目和提纲之间的关系，然后确定文章的主题、大致内容以及文体。2.每一个要点可以作为文章的一个段落层次。段落的展开应围绕提纲的中心和内容。3.提纲只是对文章的提示和概括，不是主题句。考生需要根据提纲的性质，写出完整的、体现提纲主旨的句子，使之成为主题句，然后围绕主题句进行扩展。4.收集材料支持主题句。,【成篇衔接过渡，连句成篇】My name is Li Hua,a student from Xinhua Middle School.I got the first place in the English contest held by our school not long ago.Here Id like to share my experience in learning English with you.,First of all,attending English Corner is of great help to improve my oral English,so whenever there is an opportunity,Ill grasp it.Secondly,I keep writing English diaries,which enables me to express what happens in daily life and in this way I can practice my written English.Thirdly,I also surf EnjoyReading on the Internet.As we all know,we need extensive reading to enlarge our vision,so wed better develop a good habit of reading English materials every day.Of course,Rome was not built in a day.Only when we stick to what we have decided to do will we achieve a goal.,
