写作点拨系列(十一).ppt
写作点拨系列（十一）短文写作之图表作文,(2013温州模拟)据一项调查显示，有85.8%的中学生说自己的字不好看，而他们又不想改善，其理由有很大差别。请根据下图内容用英语写一篇短文，说明该现象并发表看法。,注意：词数100120个(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。Nowadays,with the growing popularity of computers,more and more people are paying less and less attention to their handwriting._,【审题抓准信息 快速推断】,图表作文,书写的重要性,一般现在时,第三人称为主,【定点把握要点，遣词造句】第1段:提出问题：书写不好看第2段：调查内容及结论【信息】据一项调查显示，有85.8%的中学生说自己的字不好看，而他们又不想改善，其理由有很大差别【点拨】转化为第三人称，并适当调整顺序使其合乎逻辑【运用】(1)据一项调查显示，有85.8%的中学生说自己的字不好看。_a recent survey,about 85.8 percent of middle school students think that _.,According to,their handwriting is poor,(2)然而他们又不想改善，其理由有很大差别。_,many students dont want to improve their handwriting.(3)51.5%的学生认为他们可以用电脑打字，所以不需要浪费时间来改善书写状况，并且32.3%的学生认为他们忙于功课，没有时间练字。一般表达：51.5 percent of them think that they can just use a computer.There is no need to waste time improving their handwriting.32.3 percent believe that they are so busy with the study that they do not have time to practice.,Yet for various reasons,高级表达：(用连词合并句子)51.5 percent of them think that they can just use a computer,_that they are so busy with the study that they do not have time to practice.(4)其余的人有一些其他的理由。_have other reasons.,so there is no need to waste time improving their handwriting,and 32.3 percent believe,The rest,第3段：结束：发表看法【信息】发表积极向上的观点，指出书写的重要性【点拨】看法有许多，但要积极向上，对学生起到教育的作用【运用】(5)漂亮和整洁的书法是有益的，尤其对中学生而言。Beautiful and neat handwriting is beneficial,_.(6)因此，依我之见，今后应该更多地在这方面进行强调。Therefore,_.,especially for,middle school students,in my opinion,more emphasis should be placed on,this aspect in future,【注意事项】图表作文形式一般有：统计表、条形表、线形图以及圆形图等。写作时注意：首先依据提示结合图表看懂展示的内容，然后准确清晰地进行分析、描述和概括，最后得出合乎情理的结论。写图表作文的一般步骤如下：1.开头部分：图表作文的首段必须描写图表，这里应该包括趋势描写和数据支持。2.主题段落：在这一部分，考生应该根据图表所提供的信息进行分析，阐述自己的观点和理由。3.结尾部分：考生可以总结全文，也可以发出号召，还可以表示作者的信念，有时，也可以提出问题，启发读者思考。,【成篇衔接过渡，连句成篇】Nowadays,with the growing popularity of computers,more and more people are paying less and less attention to their handwriting.According to a recent survey,about 85.8 percent of middle school students think that their handwriting is poor.Yet for various reasons,many students dont want to improve their handwriting.51.5 percent of them think that they can just use a computer,so there is no need to waste time,improving their handwriting,and 32.3 percent believe that they are so busy with the study that they do not have time to practice.10.9 percent think that practicing handwriting is useless.The rest have other reasons.As the saying goes,writing style shows the man.Beautiful and neat handwriting is beneficial,especially for middle school students.Therefore,in my opinion,more emphasis should be placed on this aspect in future.,
