写作点拨系列(七).ppt
写作点拨系列（七）短文写作之应用文(书信、电子邮件),(2011全国卷)假定你是李华，你所喜爱的Global Mirror周报创刊五周年之际征集读者意见。请你依据以下内容给主编写封信，内容主要包括：1.说明你是该报的忠实读者 2.赞赏该报优点：1)兼顾国内外新闻 2)介绍名人成功故事 3.提出建议：刊登指导英语学习的文章,注意：1.词数100个左右，开头语已为你写好；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Editor-in-Chief,Congratulations on the 5th anniversary of Global Mirror!_Sincerely yours,Li Hua,【审题抓准信息快速推断】,应用文书信,编辑征求读者意见的答复,一般现在时为主,第一人称,【定点把握要点，遣词造句】第1段：直入话题对该报创刊五周年表示祝贺【运用】(1)祝贺Global Mirror周报创刊五周年。_the 5th anniversary of Global Mirror!,Congratulations on,第2段：赞赏该报优点【信息】说明你是该报的忠实读者【点拨】转化为第一人称并适当扩充内容【运用】(2)我是你们报刊的忠实读者。Im _.,a regular reader of your newspaper,【信息】1)兼顾国内外新闻；2)介绍名人成功故事【点拨】打造亮句，增色文章；增加细节，以使行文连贯【运用】(3)首先，它兼顾国内外新闻，因此，我随便翻几页就可以了解到本周发生的重要事件。一般表达：Firstly,there are both national and international news on it.So when I turn the pages simply,I can learn all the important things that have happened during the week.,高级表达：(用合适的词或句式简化以上句子)First,_,I can learn all the important things that have happened during the week.,it covers both national and international news so that,by,simply turning the pages,(4)同时，吸引我的是许多著名人物的成功故事，这些有助于我理解为了让世界变得更美好人们应如何努力工作。一般表达：Equally attractive are the success stories of world-famous people.It helps me understand how a person can work hard to make the world a better place.高级表达：(用非限制性定语从句合并句子)Equally attractive are the success stories of world-famous people,_how a person can work hard to make the world a better place.,which help me understand,第3段：提出建议【信息】刊登指导英语学习的文章【运用】(5)我建议Global Mirror刊登一些指导英语学习的文章。一般表达：I make a suggestion that Global Mirror publish some articles that can guide us in our English learning.高级表达：(用不定式来简化以上复合句)I suggest that Global Mirror publish some articles _.,to guide us,in our English learning,【注意事项】1.本文是一篇书信体应用文，与电子邮件格式相同。写作时要注意：第一步谋篇布局，先引出话题。第二步润色句子，用恰当的句式进行高级表达；第三步注意适度增加细节，以使文章过渡自然，浑然一体。2.常用表达：(1)表示祝贺：congratulations on；(2)介绍自己：Im a regular reader of.；(3)两个理由：first,equally；(4)提出的建议和希望：I suggest.,I hope.。,【成篇衔接过渡，连句成篇】Dear Editor-in-Chief,Congratulations on the 5th anniversary of Global Mirror!Im a regular reader of your newspaper.I like it very much mainly for the following two reasons.First,it covers both national and international news so that,by simply turning the pages,I can learn all the important things that have happened during the week.Equally attractive are the success stories of world-famous people,which help me understand how a person can work hard to make the world a better place.,As a young student,I suggest that Global Mirror publish some articles to guide us in our English learning,and I hope that it will become even more popular.Sincerely yours,Li Hua,
