微课程月考作文讲解--李丹.ppt
如何写好作文？,两点（形式）：卷面、词数80-90词两条（内容）：正确的句子+完整内容,如何写出正确的句子？,常用基本句式,Five Basic Sentence Patterns,主语-系动词-表语（SVC）主语-动词（SV）主语-动词-宾语（SVO）主语-动词-宾语-宾语（SVOO）主语-动词-宾语-宾语补足语（SVOC）,1.主语 do sth.(介词+时间)(介词+地点)（in a different way 用不同的方式）（by doing sth.通过做）,作文常用句式,2.主语 be sth./adj.(介词+时间)(介词+地点)（better than A）,3.There be sth./sb.(介词+地点)(介词+时间)(在)某地有 或 某时间有,写作文步骤：,一、审题目：人称、时态二、组句子：断句-连句（主要句型、关键词）三、列提纲：开头-衔接-结尾四、检 查：字数、名词单复数、时态（三单、过去时、完成时）,写作要点如下：1.李老师是位英文教师，于1992年开始在我们学校工作。在这里教学已经21年了。2.总是辛勤地工作并乐于助人，是学校最受欢迎的老师之一。3.在假期非常喜欢和家人去旅游，有很多美妙的经历。曾去过很多城市。4.今年寒假打算去Hainan Island，希望在那儿能玩得开心。,Mr Li is an English teacher.,写作要求：1、语言通顺，书写规范，标点正确。2、写齐所给的要点，可以适当发挥。3、字数在80-90字左右。,月测作文精讲,1.审题目：,1.李老师是位英文教师，于1992年开始在我们学校工作。在这里教学已经21年了。2.总是辛勤地工作并乐于助人，是学校最受欢迎的老师之一。3.在假期非常喜欢和家人去旅游，有很多美妙的经历。曾去过很多城市。4.今年寒假打算去Hainan Island，希望在那儿能玩得开心。,2.组句子：断句连句（句型、关键词）,Mr Li is an English teacher.,时态：,人称：he him,一般现在时,现在完成时,一般过去时,组句子：,He began to work in our school in 1992.He has already taught here for 21 years.He always works hard and likes to help others.He is one of the most popular teachers in our school.He likes to travel very much,and he often goes to travel with his family on holidays.He has many wonderful experiences.He has ever been to many cities.Hainan Island is a beautiful place,so he is going to visit there this winter holiday.He hopes he can have a good time there.,3.列提纲：开头（已给出）-按顺序写即可 结尾（表达希望）,1.李老师是位英文教师，于1992年开始在我们学校工作。在这里教学已经21年了。2.总是辛勤地工作并乐于助人，是学校最受欢迎的老师之一。3.在假期非常喜欢和家人去旅游，有很多美妙的经历。曾去过很多城市。4.今年寒假打算去Hainan Island，希望在那儿能玩得开心。,Mr Li is an English teacher.,书面表达：Mr Li is an English teacher.He began to work in our school in 1992.He has already taught here for 21 years.He always works hard and likes to help others.He is one of the most popular teachers in our school.He likes to travel very much,and he often goes to travel with his family on holidays.He has many wonderful experiences.He has ever been to many cities.Hainan Island is a beautiful place,so he is going to visit there this winter holiday.He hopes he can have a good time there.(91words),参考范文,4.检 查：字数、名词单复数、时态（三单、过去时、完成时）,
