书面表达1.ppt
,高中英语书面表达,English Composition Writing,ChenMei,Longchang NO.7 Middle School,【写作指导】半开放式作文是近年高考英语学科书面表达的一个趋势。所谓“半开放”是指试题给出部分要点，考生自己再增加一些要点。考生不仅要精确地表达所给信息，更加重要的是在自由发挥部分，不可以随意发挥，要有自己独到的见解，要言之有物，言之有理，充分体现出思维的广度和深度。,半开放式书面表达,Whats the character(特点）of the composition in the past few years?,2010.四川卷 假定你校将举行一个成人仪式，你将作为代表在仪式上发言。请你按以下内容要点准备一篇英文发言稿。1.过去对成年的向往；2.现在的感受和认识；3.将来的目标及措施。参考词汇：责任 responsibility注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯；3.发言稿的开头与结束语已为你写好（不计入总词数）Good morning,everyone!The topic of my speech today is“Thoughts on becoming a grown-up.”_Thank you for your listening.,Main ideas,向往 感受和认识 目标和措施,Tense（时态）,past now future,Details?,We should add up some details to make up this composition.,According to the following questions,think out some useful words and phrases which can be used.,1、Hope for the future:Do you hope to be an adult?Do you have any ideas about your future?What are they?What do you hope to do?What do you think about your future?,2、Feeling and understanding at present:What are your feeling?What can you enjoy?What can you face?,3、Goal and action in the future:What do you want to do for your parents?What do you want to do for your country?How can you realize your goal?,proper expressions which can be used in each point,过去对成年的向往,in my mind,grow up,whatever-clause,现在的感受和认识,as it turns out,enjoy freedom,responsibility,将来的目标和措施,look after,make contributions to,do all I can to get through,be admitted to,Please make sentences using the following expressions,Combine the words or phrases above to make sentences,1、As a child,I have an idea in my mind.,2、I could grow up as soon as possible.,3、I could have whatever I wanted.,4、I could do whatever I liked.,5、As it turns out,many things have changed.,in my mind.,grow up,whatever,as it turns out,6、I can enjoy more freedom.,7、I have more responsibilities.,8、I hope to look after my parents.,9、I hope to make contributions to society.,10、I must do all I can to get through the college entrance examination.,11、I can be admitted to a good university.,enjoy more freedom,responsibilities,look after,make contributions to,do all I can to get through,be admitted to,combine the sentences above into a composition,Good morning,everyone!The topic of my speech today is“Thoughts on becoming a grown-up.”As a child,I have an idea in my mind.I could grow up as soon as possible.I could have whatever I wanted.I could do whatever I liked.As it turns out,many things have changed.I can enjoy more freedom.I have more responsibilities.I hope to look after my parents.I hope to make contributions to society.I must do all I can to get through the college entrance examination.I can be admitted to a good university.Thank you for your listening.,A,Is this composition a good one?,Conclusion:This composition is lack of linking words.,Good morning,everyone!The topic of my speech today is“Thoughts on becoming a grown-up.”As a child,theres an idea in my mind that I could grow up as soon as possible so that I could have whatever I wanted and do whatever I liked.Now Im a grown-up,however,as it turns out,many things have changed.For one thing,I can enjoy more freedom;for another,I realize being a grown up not only means this,but also more responsibilities.In the future I hope to look after my parents and make contributions to society to make my life more meaningful.To reach the goal,I must do all I can to get through the college entrance examination and be admitted to a good university.(114words)Thank you for your listening.,Conclusion:Words are enough.It contains all points.Its full of advanced expressions and linking words.,B,Good writing is necessary,Compare two passages and tell which is better,四川高考书面表达评分原则,1总分35分，按5个档次给分。2根据内容和语言确定档次。3词数100左右。4要点、词汇和语法已及连贯性。5拼写与标点的准确性。6书写较差，分数降低一个档次。,How to write a composition？,Five steps,1、审题,题材(记叙文，说明文、议论文、应用文）、人称、时态、要点。,2、以词及点：用单词或短语写出每句话的细节要点。,3、联词成句：将上述要点的词语扩展成句子。,4 联句成文：,注意：,主语和谓语（语态、时态、主谓一致）,高级表达（从句、非谓语、常见句型短语等）,语篇衔接开头与结尾,5、规范书写,Homework：2011四川高考书面表达（满分35分）最近，某中学生英文报开设了“After-class Activities”的栏目，请你根据以下提示，为该栏目写一篇英文稿件，并鼓励同学们积极参加课外活动。1.你校开展课外活动的情况；2.你参加过的课外活动及给你带来的益处3.为同学选择课外活动提出建议4.为学校开展课外活动提出建议注意：1.词数100左右；2.文中不得提及人名、校名及地名3.稿件的开头以为你写好（不计入总词数）After-class Activities Nowadays,after-class activities are becoming more and more popular in high schools,Thanks for your attention,
