非谓语动词在写作中的应用.doc

“Reading makes a full man; conference a ready man; and writing an _ man.” -Francis Bacon 非谓语动词在写作中的运用（By Du Yan）Learning aims: Ss learn to write a better basic writing by learning to use nonfinite verbsLearning difficulties: How to use nonfinite verbs in a basic writing.Step I. Lead-inu Task1. Questions: 1. How to write well / a wonderful essay?2. What sentence patterns do you know?u Task2. Enjoy a writing (2012年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试(湖南卷)作文范文)l Getting back what you have lost would be an unforgettable experience. Last Monday, I lost my expensive cell-phone, on which my name was inscribed. Fortunately, it was returned. l That morning, I rushed out of my house and jumped into a taxi, for I would be late for the final examination. On arriving at school, I headed to my classroom quickly, not noticing that I had left my cell-phone on the back seat.l When the exam ended, to my great surprise, I found the driver waiting at the school gate. He handed the phone over to me, wearing a smile on his face. So touched was I that tears rolled down my cheeks. l From this story, I am firmly convinced of the significance of honesty, which will contribute to building a warm and harmonious society. Step II. ReviewA. 找出非谓语动词，并判断成分 1. Making our city greener is everyones duty. 2. The government is determined to continue the green program. 3. I find my hometown changed so much. 4. Having fresh air, trees can reduce air pollution. 5. Every effort to make the program makes a difference.B. 高考链接 2012年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试(湖南卷)21. Weve had a good start, but next, more work needs _ to achieve the final success. A. being done B. do C. to be done D. to do23. Time, _ correctly, is money in the bank. A. to use B. used C. using D. use 31. The lecture, _ at 7:00 pm last night, was followed by an observation of the moon with telescopes. A. starting B. being started C. to start D. to be startedStep III. PresentationTask1.纠正下列句子错误并归纳出写作中非谓语动词常见的错误1、 状语动作行为者与主句 不一致Ø Seeing from the top of mountain, the city is beautiful. 2、 用动词短语充当 、表语和宾语Ø In my opinion, climb mountain is an enjoyable thing. 3、 、 含义混淆Ø Which team is good at cooking? A team called itself the supper cook. Task2. 看图写句Picture1: Picture2:_ by the reporter from CCTV, the man said he was very happy. (interview) Picture3: Task3. 用非谓语结构改写和美化句子1. 因为在这国家又没有朋友，她觉得要想找到工作是不可能的。 用连词because: , she found it impossible to find a job. 用非谓语结构: , she found it impossible to find a job. 2. 这本用简易英语写成的书很容易读懂 用定语从句: The book, , is easy to understand. 用非谓语结构: The book, , is easy to understand. 3. Moyan stood there and was surrounded by many reporters. 4. It is high time we took part in some activities. We want to make ourselves more healthy. Task4. 用非谓语结构美化文章Nowadays, some students often cheat in exams. It is popular among students who are lazy and dont work hard at their lessons. They cheat for they want to get higher marks so that they can be praised or even admired. Also, some students who work hard at their lessons will cheat in exams because they are afraid of failing in exams. Step IV. Having a try (学写句段)Task1. (学写句子) 高考临近，保持良好的心态有助于减轻焦虑，还能增强克服困难的勇气。第一步：拆分成几个简单句(中文) 第二步：分别翻译这几个简单句 (National College Entrance Examination) ( have a right attitude) （relax and overcome difficulties bravely） 第三步：合并句子Sentence1: Sentence2: Task2. (学写段落)建议有足够的睡眠是必要的。原因1.它能有效的改善我们的课堂学习。2.保持健康的身体是进一步学习及工作的基础。要求： 1. 用2- 3句话表达表格内容 2. 2- 3句话要有连贯性 Passage： Step V. Homework1. WritingTitle: Our Spring Outing高考临近，为了放松放松我们紧张的情绪，我们班经过讨论决定去春游。请就此事（用十句话）谈谈你这次春游的主要活动和感受。 2. Exercises:2011年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试(湖南卷)21. The ability _ an idea is as important as the idea itself.A. expressing B. expressed C. to express D. to be expressed23. The players _from the whole country are expected to bring us honor in this summer game.A. selecting B. to select C. selected D. having selected29. Do you wake up every morning _ energetic and ready to start a new day? A. feel B. to feel C. feeling D. felt 2010年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试(湖南卷)21. Listen! Do you hear someone for help? A. calling B. call C. to call D. called26. Dina, for months to find a job as a waitress, finally took a position at a local advertising agency. A. struggling B. struggled C. having struggled D. to struggle30. So far nobody has claimed the money in the library.A. discovered B. to be discovered C. discovering D. having discoveredMore attention1. Remember: 阅卷老师喜欢的句子 使用分词短语(非谓语动词）、同位语结构、with复合结构，使文章简洁、 通顺；尽量使用动词短语和词组、定语从句等复合句，修辞润色文章。2. Master: 润色修正方式一. 使用较高级词汇使文章增加吸引力二. 使用非谓语动词使句子简洁高档三. 巧用倒装增强句子表现力 强调句With短语复合结构定语从句四. 尝试多样化表达方式 名词性从句(主宾表同从句)各种状语从句被动语态