初中英语《书面表达讲评》教学设计.doc

教学设计书面表达讲评 课题名称 学情分析 写作讲评课 Teaching objectives1）Students will come to understand what a good composition is like.2）Students will learn how to polish their writing.Teaching difficult and important points 1) How to assist students to use language from correct ones to beautiful . 2) How to help students write down their own composition according to methods neatly.Teaching methods and aids1) The communicative teaching approach2) Task-based teaching approach. 3) Multi-media Teaching ProceduresTeaching ProceduresTeaching ProceduresStep1: Lead in Have a free talk with students.Show Writing material to Ss，and then give them a composition written by student A.Request them correct the mistakes in the composition. Summarize the basic rules for getting a good mark in their composition.Step2:Polish words and expressions by some principles 四项基本原则：1. 地道原则 2. 词组优先原则 3. 同义多样原则 4. 弃旧取新原则1. 地道原则原文Driving cars takes some problems such as air pollution and traffic jams. improve however, driving cars have caused many problems such as air pollution and traffic jams.2. 词组优先原则原文Riding bicycle can help us protect environment.improve Bicycles are environmentally friendly because they dont produce harmful gases3. 同义多样原则原文 Riding bicycle is good for our health.improve1. We can benefit from riding bicycle. 2 .Riding bicycles can be of great benefits to people.3. Riding bicycles is beneficial to our health4. 弃旧取新原则原文 With the quick development of economy,improve With economy progressing in a flash,When teaching students the principles, teacher also gives some similar sentences for students to practise. Step3:Polish sentences patterns by some principles1.肯定不如双否好 2.陈述不如倒装巧3.单句不如复句妙 4.从句不如短语傲1.肯定不如双否好原文It is a good choice for us to ride bicycle. improve There is no denying that riding bicycle is a wise choice.2.陈述不如倒装巧原文 we should take actions to improve our current situationimprove Only by taking actions should we improve our current situation.3.单句不如复句妙原文 cars have become a popular way of transport. It brings us convenience to our life. improve it using attributive clauseCars have become a popular way of transport ,which brings us convenience to our life. 4.从句不如短语傲原文 Cars have become a popular way of transport, which brings us convenience in life.improve Cars have become a popular Way of transport, bringing us convenience in life.When teaching students the principles, teacher also gives some similar sentences for students to practise.Step4 : Polish Linking words and phrases by some principles有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑Show them passage structure.Good morning, everyone, Im Li Hua from Xingguang Middle School. The topic of my speech is “Lets Ride Bicycles.”Introduction: As we know,air pollution and traffic jams. Faced with the problems, Body : For one thing For anotherConclusion: Therefore, Ladies and gentlemen, Lets Thank you !Step 5 consolidation1. Read this composition again. First correct the mistakes and then polish it according to what you have learnt in the class.Good morning, everyone, I am LiHua from Xingguang Middle School. The topic of my speech is “Lets Ride Bicycles”. As is know to us, with the development of the economy, cars have become a popular way of transport, while it take some problems such as air pollution and traffic jams. Most people knew what is the low-carbon life, but why people still pollute enviroment? In my oppion, use the bike to work instead car is a good way to save energy. Besides, use the bike can make our body more stronger. I hope everyone in the earth should take actions to improve situation. why not to do it? 2.show them the model writing.Good morning, everyone, Im Li Hua from Xingguang Middle School. The topic of my speech is “Lets Ride Bicycle.” As we know, With Economy progressing in a flash, cars have become a popular means of transport, bringing us convenience in life. However, they caused some problems such as air pollution and traffic jams. Faced with the problems, how can we solve it? There is no denying that riding bicycles is a wise choice. For one thing ,bicycles are environmentally friendly because they dont produce harmful gases. For another, riding bicycles is beneficial to our health. Therefore, only by taking actions can we improve our current situationand create a low-carbon life. Ladies and gentlemen, Lets do it together right now!Step5 :Summary（1）Words and expressionsWith economy progressing in a flash, a popular means of convenience to our lifeair pollution and traffic jamsenvironmentally friendlybe beneficial tobuild up(2) Sentence patternsHowever, they have caused some problems such as.As far as Im concerned, .is a good solution.Whats more, its beneficial to Only by taking actions can we improve our current situation and create a low-carbon life. (3)Linking words and phrasesFirstly/ First/ First of all,besides, furthermoreOn one hand, on the other handfor one thing, for anotherWhats moreFinally/ Lasttherefore词汇选择地道新颖，出奇制胜;句型结构灵活多变，错落有致;连接词运用自然巧妙，行文流畅Enjoying writing, enjoy learning English.Step6: Homework:1. Read another composition and think about what makes it a good one.2. Read your own composition again. Correct the mistakes if there are any and then polish it, using what you have learnt in this class作文讲评课教学反思 首先我很感谢有这样一次机会能参加三门县高二英语课堂教学研讨会。这是一次很好的锻炼机会。经过上课后的冷静思考和总结，下面对这堂课进行反思。亮点： 1.上课思路清楚，设计比较全面。 2.学生整体氛围不错，比较配合。出现的不足：1.给学生的思考时间不够。2.在讲相关原则的时候，举例不够多。3.对学生的要求偏高，没有完全切合他们的实际。4.没有落实分层教学目标感悟 1.多听多看多思考，充实理论基础 在备课期间，感觉自己的理论知识匮乏，没有很明确的理论指导思想。2.语音语调不够地道，有待加强 在上课时，自己感觉很清晰的表达了指令，但是部分学生茫然，让自己意识到语音语调出了问题。3.课堂的操控能力欠缺 从教几年公开课屈指可数，所以缺少了这样的磨练，何以长进。上课时教态不自然，拘谨，说话底气不足。 这次的上课对于我不仅仅是一次县公开课，更是加强对自我的认识，为今后有个更明确的方向进步的过程。