八年级英语上册写作教程ppt课件.ppt

写作话题：,School activities,(,学校活动,),1.,掌握邀请函的写作方法,2.,学习提纲性作文的写作策略。,3.,学习组织协调，积极参与活动策,划。,Pre-writing,Writing guidelines,(,写作方法指导,),1.,邀请信的写作线索,邀请信可以通过,E-mail,或书信等形,式，格式和书信的格式相同。邀请信的内容,包括：,（,1,）说明邀请对方参加活动的名称及活动,的目的；,(2),说明活动安排的时间、地点以及相关,的注意事项等；,（,3,）如有必要，请对方确认是否能应邀。,Language box,（语言工具箱）,1,Unit topic languages,（单元话题语言）,以连线、标序号等形式列举本单元与本话题写作相关,的词块、句子。,(1)Chunks,（词块）,名词,/,动名词词块,:,English Culture Festival,interesting activities,free lunch,English Singing Competition,event,(1)Chunks,（词块）,动词词块：,would like to,provide.with,there will be,hope to do,reply to sb,hear from,look forward to doing sth,join sb,invite,(1)Chunks,（词块）,介词,/,连词词块：,from.to,such as,whats more,and so on,Quiz:Read aloud the chunks above and try to,match the meaning by numbering.,名词,/,动名词词块,:,）英语文化节,（,（,）事件,（,）有趣的活动,（,）英语演讲比赛,（,）免费午餐,动词词块：,（,）提供,（,）将会有,（,）想做某事,（,）希望做某事，,（,）加入,（,）回复某人,（,）期待做某事,（,）收到某人来信,邀请,（,）,介词词块：,（,）例如,（,）等等,（,）而且,到,（,）从,（,2,）,Patterns,（句型）,I would like to.;,I want to;,There will be;,Im sure that;,Because;,Please relay to.if,so that;,I hope if,Please reply me by.,2.Extensive languages,（拓展性语言）,Famous saying,，,proverbs,aphorisms and Classical sample,sentences,（名言、谚语、警句与经典,例句）,1.Long time no see!,2.How is it going?,3.It seems quite a long time since I saw you last,time.,4.There will be a party held in my school on May,th,10,at 7:30.,5.If you are free this Saturday,please come to,party and have a good time with me.,6.Im sure you will enjoy it.,7.I think it would be a good idea if you can join us.,8.I am looking forward to meeting you,9.I do hope that you can make it.,10.I am glad to invite you to come to the party.,假设你是,John Smith,，下周，你校将举行英语文化节，请,根据以下表格，向你的笔友,Tom,写一封邀请函，邀请他参加该,活动。,事件,时间,地点,活动,英语文化节,1,月,10,日星期五早上,9,点至下午,5,点,第一中学,1,英语歌咏比赛；英语演讲比赛；英语话剧；英语海报,展等,2.,中午,12,点在学校餐厅有免费午餐,回复日期,回复方式,1,月,3,日星期五前,发电子邮件到,hellosmith,Step1 Think and Fill,（想一想，填一填）,审题,应用文,体裁：,_,第一人称,人称：,_,一般将来时,时态：,_,Step2 Structurize,（列一列,）,以“,Invitation,”为题,1.,发出邀请,2.,介绍活动各要点,3.,确认回复,beginning,Body,Ending,Step3 Write,（写一写）,Step 4-Check,（查一查）,篇章方面,:,内容完整；要点齐全；布局合理,句子方面,:,句子完整；主谓一致；动词时态；,连词使用,用词方面,:,代词主格,宾格；,名词单复数；,动词搭配；副词位置,细节方面,:,单词拼写；标点符号；大小写,Appreciating&Evaluating,欣赏与评价,请交换习作互相欣赏，用,红笔,划出对方,的亮点,并对,不足的地方进行适当修改。,你能给同学什么建议，使得对方的习作,更好呢？,根据,worksheet,上的评分标准，给同伴,的习作打分。,Step5,同伴互赏,我欣赏，我快乐！,请和同伴交换习作，依据以上提示和下列评价表，,相互欣赏与修改习作，然后给对方的习作打分。,修改习作时可使用这些符号：,优美句子；,漏词；,错处：；,删除；,语法错误,G,；,人称错误,P,；,时态错误,T,；,拼写错误,Sp,评分表,项目,结构,标准,段落合理,（,2,分）,自我评价,同伴评价,教师评价,（,3,分）,衔接自然,(1,分,),要点,1:,发出邀请,（,1,分）,内容,（,8,分）,要点,2:,介绍活动的时间地点内容（,3,分）,要点,3,：回复的时间方式,（,2,分）,拓展合理,(2,分,),语言,词汇丰富,(1,分,),（,3,分）,句法正确,，语言优美,(2,分,),卷面,（,1,分）,书写工整（,1,分）,本文思路清晰，结构,完整，内容简明扼要,.,Dear Tom,I would like to invite you to the English Culture Festival,at No.1 Middle School.It will be held,on,Friday,January 10th,from,9 am,to,5 pm.During the festival,you will enjoy,wonderful English dramas,English Singing Competition,恰当使用介词和连词，使句,子紧凑连贯。,English Poster Show and other interesting activities.At,12:00,we will offer a free lunch to you in the school dining,hall.I am sure you will have a great day here.Please reply to,this invitation by sending an E-mail at hellosmithhotmail.,com by Friday,Juanuary 3rd.,I am looking forword to meeting you!,yours,John Smith,掌握邀请信的格式,开门见山点题，引出,邀请信内容。,优秀作文分享：,切入日常问候语，语言,生动,Dear Tom,运用,therebe,句型，使句子衔,Long time no see!How is it going?,接连贯,I would like to tell you that,there will be,an English Culture,Festival held in No.1 Middle School from 9 a.m to 5 p.m on,January 10th.It must be a funny event.,There will be,plenty of,interesting activities such as English,Singing Competition,English Speech Contest,English dramas,English Poster Show and so on.Whats more,our school will,provide,the students,with,free lunch at the school dining hall at,12:00.You can taste lots of delicious food there.,I am sure you can,enjoy yourself,and make more new friends if,you join us.If you would like to come,please reply me by sending,an E-mail to hellosmith by Friday January 3rd.,I hope you can come to join us.I,am hearing from,you!,主体部分用分段式清晰地阐述活,动的时间、地点，介绍活动的内,Yours,容，结构紧凑，条理清晰,John Smith,Summary,1.How to write an article about,invitation.,2.Learn some of the writing,skills.,想,列,写,查,评,Rewrite your article.,