短文改错专题讲练解析课件.ppt

,短文改错专题讲练,设错方式:,正确,多词,少词,错词.且改错方式多符合1126或1225这2种错误类型比例原则.,1126:正确1处,多词1处,缺词2处,错词6处.1225:正确1处,多词2处,缺词2处,错词5处,设错方式及错误类型:,一.多词,1.多用了冠词或不定冠词.,2.多助动词3.多不定式符号 to多用介词平行结构中多词多连词多表程度或频率的副词词义重复形容词，副词的比较级形式中多词定语从句中多用代词或副词,例题分析：,Having fun with their friends makes them happy,many people enjoy sports by watching the others play.2.Although we have been members for a short period of time,we have made a great progress.3.My mother was asked me,“have you already taken your medicine?”3.Children may not be develop the habit of reading and the ability to enjoy themselves.4.When I first learn to write in English,I ran into many difficulties.5.You will probably want to join in the Stamp Collecting Club.6.I have neither brothers nor sisters-in any other words,I am a only child.7.Many students may also to smoke in the school.8.There are many more happy memories of the country life in my mind.9.The main problem was in that I always thought in Chinese.10.I had to look up the same word many times,for which was quite troublesome.11.Can you tell me about what we should do?,二缺词,及物动词后缺宾语两个动词连用，中间缺少不定式符号to不及物动词接宾语时中间缺介词被动语态缺助动词缺系动词固定结构中缺少介词或其他小品词,例题分析：,I decide walk around a little before having class.2.Please excuse me for not able to say goodbye to you.3.You can find all kinds information on the Internet.4.I am very pleased to say that all of us greatly improved our spoken English So far.5.I have spent most my money,so I cant even go out of town.6.Because so much homework,I cant play with you.7.luckily,the teacher did not punish for cheating but instead gave me a second Chance.,三错词,错词主要体现在以下方面：一致关系方面的错误（主谓不一致，时态不一致，代词指代不一致）,e.g.1.the most wonderful thing about Jack were his musical ability.2.One evening she told me that something happened when her parents was out.3.Starting your collection of stamps are easy because they are everywhere.4.Their word were a great encouragement to me.5.During the World Cup in 2002,my dad stays up late to watch his favourite sports.6.The problem was that I can still taste the medicine.7.I realized I do need a way to remember all this words.8.Whats more,you have to be friendly to your students and take good care of him.9.I wrote down new words and added it to my collection.,2.非谓语形式的错误,e.g.1.when you are on a diet you have to stop eat too much even though you are always hungry.2.Many children call their friends together to spend hours,even days play games.3.We are busy prepare for our trips.4.I have some cards giving to me as birthday gifts.5.Ads make children to want things that they dont really need.6.A game of tennis making him very busy.7.Remembering not to shout at them.8.After lean these words,you are asked to make sentences.,3.连接手段方面的错误,e.g.1.Not all people like to work and everyone likes to play.2.Thats how sports are good activities for their health.3.What I learned from the job was much more important as what I learned.4.The teacher wasnt looking at me,but I copied something.5.The food is expensive and the service is good.6.It looks as if my parents treat me as a visitor and a guest.,4.平行结构方面的错误,平行结构经常借助并列连词and,but,or,或连词词组not onlybut also not but,eitheror,neithernor,as well as,e.g.1.In other words,they help to keep people strong and feel good.2.I still remember going there early and felt anxious about the new world.3.We named him Jack and keep him about three years.4.I would describe myself as shy and quietly.5.I am thinking of making a trip to London,and visit some parks.6.She liked it very much and reads it to the class.,5.名词数或格的错误,e.g.1.we have spent several precious weekend in Learning in the English club.2.There are advantage for students to work while Studying at school.3.were leaving for our hometown to spend the winter vacations.4.She was doing her homeworks on Sunday.5.I used to love science class-all of them-chemistry,physics,6.冠词使用的错误,词语搭配的错误,e.g.1.thank you very much for your party at Christmas Eve.2.I am writing to thank you with your kind help.3.At night,I am always very tired to do my homework.4.You can find such information like how to learn English.5.Im sure theyll play tricks at me.,8.词性的错误,e.g.1.It is real a good chance to meet all of you here.2.Football is not too badly as long as I watch it with my dad.3.She looked at me serious and said,“its bad to tell lies.”4.Wed throw a coin as far as possibly.5.But he is difference now.6.No one worries much about the radio programs,although radios can be very noise.,9.行文逻辑的错误,要想在短文改错上取得理想的成绩，除了平时打好基础外，在应考时还要做到以下几点；一、先通读全文。认真阅读短文，在做题之前确保已经弄清原文大意。根据短文大意和上下文逻辑关系，对文章进行逐字逐句的分析，检查句子的结构是否完整，语气是否连贯，启承转合是否 符合文意等。二综合运用所学语言知识，根据各行不同的错误情况分别进行答题（即改词、加词或减词）。三：验证答案。改完后，要回过头来重读一遍全文，查看改过后是否能使语气通顺，时态一致，合乎逻辑。再次通读可以在初改时感觉不顺的地方集中精力，仔细推敲，使答案更加准确。因为有时就一个句子来看可能在两个地方修改都说地过去，但在上下文中可能只能在一处修改才正确。,On Saturday,July 22nd,there will have a few visits to 1_different places.Everybody is welcomed.All the visitors 2_ will be divided into four groups,Each groups of visitors 3_can visit one of the place such as a factory,a farm,a 4_school or hospital,Please sign your name at the Service 5_desk by 9:00 pm and say which place you wish to visit it.6_Well set out after the breakfast at eight in the morning 7_and came back in the afternoon.Well have lunch at the 8_place of visit.We hope you a pleasant journey.9_Do tell me your choice by 9:00.Thats all,thank you.10_,Nowadays,almost every family has TV set,and almost 1_everyone likes watching TV.TV has become part of our lives 2_TV has many advantages,for example,it informs us the 3_latest news which is happening in the world;it can open our 4_eyes,enlarge our knowledge and also help us to see more 5_about the world.But,it also has some disadvantages.People 6_.waste too much time in watching TV and his normal life 7_and work are affected.To the children who they spend too 8_.much time in watching TV,it can do harmful to their sight 9_and healthy.So we should control the time of watching TV.10_.,