大学生英语竞赛作文课件.ppt
,图表作文,大学生英语竞赛作文图表作文评分标准作文评分标准、评分原则本满分为10分;工I20分,换四个档次给分。2.评分时,先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次,然后以该档次的要求来衡量、确定或调蓬本档次,最后給分。3.I词数少于100,I词数少于160,从总分中减去2分。4.如书写差,以政影响阅卷,将分数降低一档。各档次给分和要求第四档(很好):I9-10分;I16-20分完全符合写作格式的要水,盖所有内容要点,襄达思觌清楚,文字通顺,進贯性很好基本上无词汇和语法错误。第三档(好):I6-8分;II11-15分基本母合写作格式的求,有个剔地方衰达甩不够清楚,文字基本通顺、选贪,有少量谒汇和语溃错诞,第二档(一般):I3-5分;I6-10分未恰当完成写作格式的要求,漏内容点,表达思規不清楚,文多处出现诨汇和谮法错误,影响了对写作内容的理解档():I1-2分;I1-5分,求存恰走透生要内,表达素乱,有校多得红和滑的重大白卷;作文与题目毫不相美;内容太少,无浩评判;所写内容无法看清,评分标准作文评分标准、评分原则本满分为10分;工I20分,换四个档次给分。2.评分时,先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次,然后以该档次的要求来衡量、确定或调蓬本档次,最后給分。3.I词数少于100,I词数少于160,从总分中减去2分。4.如书写差,以政影响阅卷,将分数降低一档。,各档次给分和要求第四档(很好):I9-10分;I16-20分完全符合写作格式的要水,盖所有内容要点,襄达思觌清楚,文字通顺,進贯性很好基本上无词汇和语法错误。第三档(好):I6-8分;II11-15分基本母合写作格式的求,有个剔地方衰达甩不够清楚,文字基本通顺、选贪,有少量谒汇和语溃错诞,第二档(一般):I3-5分;I6-10分未恰当完成写作格式的要求,漏内容点,表达思規不清楚,文多处出现诨汇和谮法错误,影响了对写作内容的理解档():I1-2分;I1-5分,求存恰走透生要内,表达素乱,有校多得红和滑的重大白卷;作文与题目毫不相美;内容太少,无浩评判;所写内容无法看清,Pie chart(饼状图)Favorite Type of Moviestif:420%comedy:4 120%percentage比例drama:1 I5%)action:5 125)romance:6(30%),land degradation土壤退化Causes of worldwide land degradationotheri deforestationover-grazing35%28%over-cultivation,Favourite leisure activities for teenagers in the UK in 2009This pie chart shows leisureactivities British teenagers likedbest in 2009.From this graph,itcan be seen that 41%o of the41%British teenagers chose listeningto music as their fayorite leisureThe secondrtivity for teenagethe uKountingfor/constituting 23%)was playing10%130computer games.Watching sportand playing sport enjoyed equalpopularity,chosen by 13 o of theteenagers in questiliveatching sport computer games o playing sport Only one in ten of the subjectso listening to musicconsidered reading as theirfavorite leisure activity1句式要有变化。2用词要有变化3.客观描述,数据至上,避免不必要的评论,图表作文开头段常用替换1.show.describe.demonstrate.reflectindicate,reveal,present,illustrate,provide an overview(概览)of.,provide an overall view of.provide a breakdown(细分)of,2.“占据”A takes up/account for/constitute/make up X%o of totaleg在2009年,英国喜欢在休闲时间听音乐的青少年占总青少年人数的41%。In 2009,teenagers who liked listening to music in their leisure timetook up 41%o of the total in EnglandA is composed of/is made up of X%o of B,Y%o of Ceg.发电的能源由50%的煤,30%的水力发电和20%的油构成The energy source for power generation is composed of 50%o of coal,30 of hydro power and 20 of oil.The percentage/proportion of A is X%eg.2002年,食物开销占的比例为45%。The percentage of expenditure on food was 45 in 2002.,3.“倍数”翻番:double/tripleeg.M公司9月的利润比5月翻了一倍。The profit of company m doubled from May to September.A是B的X倍eg.女生的数量大约是男生的三倍信倍数+that of+n.The number of girls is about 3 times that of boys倍数+as.asThe number of girls is about 3 times as big as boys倍数+比较级+thanThe number of girls is about twice bigger than boys.,Line chart线状图US Population ChartE5号tendency趋势7219101330195019719902010,
