中考英语复习如何写英语作文教学ppt课件.ppt

,作文辅导课,麻城华英学校,高中英语评分标准,优秀(2225/13-15)：紧扣主题，覆盖所有要点，内容充实;语法结构多样，词汇丰富，行文流畅，显示出较强的语言运用能力，允许有个别语言错误，但不影响意思表达。良好(1821/11-12)：紧扣主题，覆盖所有要点，内容较充实，行文较流畅，语言有少量错误，但基本不影响意思表达。一般(1517/9-10)：紧扣主题，基本覆盖所有要点，语言错误已影响了部分意思的表达，但多数句子基本正确;基本达到预期写作目的。较差(1114/7-8)：要点不全，内容不完整，行文不够连贯;语言错误较多，半数句子基本正确。差(610/5-6)：内容混乱，或主要内容偏离主题，尚能够写出少数与内容相关的可读句。极差(0-5)：只能写出与内容相关的词语，没有有效信息;抄写其他文章，或只是写出与作文无关的内容。,中考英语（满分）评分标准,1.覆盖所有知识点，无人称、时态错误2.准确使用过渡语言，上下文连贯3.分段明确4.词汇、语法、句型结构的数量和准确性5.好的开头和结尾,写作技巧一 分析材料,先审人称和时态,1.观点(开头)主题句,2.要点（中间）辅助句,3.总结（结尾）结尾句,（观点）主题句+支撑句,Writing structure（写作结构）,引语(现象)/开场白+观点,即论据，摆事实，讲道理证明观点,总结概括,写作技巧 二 怎样开头,1.描述现象+抽离观点2.陈述观点+支撑理由 陈述事实时尽可能拉近和读者关系引语常用句 When we talk about From your letter,we know I am happy/sorry/sad to hear that Its normal to have at your age Nowadays,more and more students As you know/As everyone knows,试练习开头语,1.how to learn English（怎样学好英语）2.talk about the future（谈论未来）3.how to protect the environment（怎样保护环境）4.烦恼家规的回复信5.if to do chores or not6.旅游类7.Express your opinions on after-school classes for children(Book 8 下 Unit4 p32)（课外补习）,How to learn English（九年级）,As everyone knows,English is one of the most important subjects,English becomes more and more important,（现象）but do you know how to improve it?Let me share it with you.（观点）,How to protect the environment（九年级）,With the development of society,peoples life becomes better and better,however,the environment around us becomes worse and worse.（现象）How to protect the environment seems very important.（观点）,talk about your future（八下）No one knows what the future will be like,neither do I.However,I know my future will be better than now,do you want to know what my future will be like?Let me tell you.,八年级（下）月考作文（if to do chores or not）,Nowadays,more and more students dont do chores because of too much homework,they say they are too busy to do that,they think its their parents duty（现象）,I dont think so/I dont agree with them.(观点),Write back about sbs bad feelings of rules（七年级）,From your letter,I know how you feel,its normal to have too many rules for students,（现象）they are terrible,but parents and teachers make them to help you.（观点）,traveling（清明假做什么）（八年级）,During this holiday,instead of staying at home and doing homework,I went to visit my grandparents with my parents.（现象）Everything that we do makes us unforgetable.（观点）,If to have after-classes or not,1.These days,it seems that students are busier on weekends than on weekdays because they have to take so many after-school classes（引语）I dont think its useful/good/necessary(观点disagree)2.1.These days,students have after-school classes in common.（引语）I think its necessary/important/useful/helpful to(观点agree)3.To get good grades,more and more students go to different classes,so do I.(观点agree),写作技巧二 中间段,列提纲(what/how/why)突出2-3点（挑选最擅长、最有话可说）eg.1.how to learn English 2.if to take after-school classes,How to learn English,1.remember English words2.watch English movies3.take notes4.speak English more,If to have after-classes or not（列提纲）,Agree1.help them get into a good high school2.make them be successful3.be good for childrens future,写作技巧三 充实提纲（有话可说，句子优美）,1.扩充、拉长原则基本方法 观点+补充、观点+延续、观点+原因、观点+感受 2.学会用复合句,If,though,as long as,so that,because,while,after引导各种从句，主语从句，各种表语从句，定语从句，宾语从句,3.高档句式 及短语 Its adj+to do sth/动名词短语作主语 定语从句 It seems that The+比较级，the+比较级 反意疑问句/反问句 无论 No matter what/who/when/where/为了 To study English better，在之中 Of all the boys，too to so that,你会吗，试试看（Show time）,How to learn English,First,I think its important for us to remember English words.（形式主语）Sometimes,watching English movies may help you learn a lot if you have time.（动名词短语）Of course,dont forget to take notes when listening.（动词不定式）Another thing you should do is to find a partner to speak English more and more,its very useful to improve your English.（定语从句）,Agree,1.As everyone knows,taking after-school classes can help us study better.（动名词短语）2.If we take after-school classes,we can study better,if we study better,we can get into.3.Although taking after-school classes makes children tired,its good for their future.4.As long as they have better grades,they will be successful,as long as they are successful,they will have a better future,as long as they have a better future,they will be happier.,（课外补习课是否要上）,写作技巧四 上下文过渡（条理清楚）(短句是最好的选择),1，表并列/递进 first,second,Its+adj.to do sth,动名词短语作主语，定语从句一个，whats more,whats worse,2，表时间先后 first,second,finally,after that,when/before/after+从句3，表转折 anyway，however，instead4，表对比 on one hand,on the other hand5，表总结，归纳 all in all,in a word,after all，in my opinion，as a result6，其他 how time flies,for us,as we know,of course,why,listen,look,思考：中间段各种论据间是什么关系？（并列、转折、对比、递进）1.常见过渡法 表并列first,second,after that，finally，2.better过渡法 whats more,whats worse,3.句子 过渡法 a.一个动名词短语 b.一个形式主语 c.一个疑问句 d.一个定语从句 Another way you can do is to,写作技巧五 怎样结尾,注意事项 一 要首尾呼应 二 归纳总结三 要求语言简洁常用句式1.总之，简而言之 all in all,in a word 2.反问句 Dont you think so?Dont you know?3.反意疑问句 Its interesting,isnt it?4.越来越好 The more,the better 5.无论 No matterwhat/who/when/where/how6.时间过得快 How time flies!Time flies quickly!,7.Of course,Everything has two sides,If to have after-classes or not,All in all,its crazy for parents to send their children to all kinds of classes.Dont you think so?(agree)All in all,the better they study,the more successful they will be,the more successful,the happier.Do you agree with me?(disagree),个人感悟和反思,1.作文语言的来源2.和阅读的练习3.作文的模式4.作文的书法5.作文最难的部分在哪里,Thank you for listening,