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年级英语作文专题八年级英语作文讲座 如何写好英语作文 英文写作三阶段 英语作文写作就是通过语言表达自己的思想。这里面包括两个要素：语言和思想，这两点缺一不可。在运用母语写作时，我们基本上不用花很多时间和精力去考虑语言表达方面的问题，我们的重点是放在内容的表达上。但是在英语作文写作时，既要考虑内容方面的问题，又要考虑语言表达方面的问题。如果处理不好这两者之间的关系，就可能永远也学不好英语写作。 一般说来，英语作文写作分为三个阶段，这三个阶段是不可截然分开的。 第一阶段，学习英语的基本词汇和语法。 在这个阶段，学习者对英语的基本用法还未掌握，尚处于语言学习的基础阶段。这时一般没有英语作文写作训练，即使有也只是为练习词汇和语法服务，例如造句和语法单项练习等。这种练习一般说来内容都非常简单，重点在强调学习者所使用的词汇和语法必须正确。 第二阶段，语言和内容并举。 此时的学习者已经掌握了英语的一些基础词汇和基本语法知识，可以用英语简单表达自己的思想。这一阶段英语作文练习可以达到两个目的： 继续增强对词汇的掌握和语法知识的运用； 用英语表达一定的思想。 在具体的英语写作实践中，这两者是不可分的。这时候，有些学生开始用英语记日记，就正处于英语写作这一阶段。 第三阶段，重点强调内容。 当学习者对英语的词汇和语法有了一定的掌握，可以用它来表达相对复杂的思想的时候，就基本上进入了这一阶段。此时的词汇已经不是最大的障碍，如何写出优秀的英语作文成了重点。这一阶段，学习者所注重的是如何选材、如何构思文章等方面的问题。有人说只有这一阶段的英语作文才是真正的写作。虽然这种说法可能有点偏激，但只有进入第三阶段，才能写出理想的英语作文。 如果发觉还无法顺利地写出完整的句子，这说明还处于英语作文写作的第一阶段。此时即使有些可能非常深刻的想法，也不要急于写出长篇大论。而应该依然注重语言的积累，如常用词汇、句型以及基本语法知识的掌握与运用等。除此之外，适当地做一些翻译练习也可以帮助你提高运用语言的能力，从而为提高写作能力做好准备。还可以多做一些阅读，培养对语言的感觉，也能为提高写作能力做一些准备。 因此，第二阶段的英语作文写作可以从下面三方面进行准备： 1、积累语言素材 2、多做翻译练习 3、多做阅读练习。 随着语言能力的提高，会逐步进入第二阶段，那时候就不愁写不出句子了。 如何写好中学英语作文 中学生英语作文基本上属于英文写作第二阶段的作文。在这一阶段，学生们已经掌握了英语的一些基础词汇和基本的语法规则，可以用英语简单表达自己的思想。 所以，中考英语作文考查的标准就是1、内容是否扣题 2、用词是否准确，句子是否符合语法规则 3、语言是否连贯与通顺。 要写好一篇英语作文，必须掌握一定的写作技巧，应把握以下几个步骤： 1、认真审题立意，确定文章的灵魂。 对命题作文必须认真审题，对自由作文必须立好意。文章要有明确的主题，必须具备4个条件：准确、鲜明、深刻、集中。例如命题作文“The English Teacher I Admire Most”,文章的主题是关于记叙我最欣赏的一位英语老师,就不能泛泛谈论老师这一职业或自己的几位老师。 2、草拟提纲，打造文章之骨架。 - 1 - 八年级英语作文讲座 审好题，立好意后，就要列提纲，打造文章的骨架。文章布局要做好3件事：1）安排好层次段落，2）铺设好过渡，3）处理好开头和结尾。如果命题作文中有提示句，还要从提示句的关键词出发，围绕关键词展开思路，发挥联想，记录下联想到的内容，记录的方式可以是句子，也可以用单词或词组的方式，可以用英语也可以用汉语。仍然以“The English Teacher I Admire Most”为例，提纲可以这样写: 1) Who is the English teacher that I admire most 2) My reasons 3) What can I learn from the teacher 3、写出主题句，理清文章脉络。 一篇短文的段落一般分为引导部分、主题部分和结尾部分。每段的主题句非常重要，是作者思维的起点，切题的准绳，阐述的对象。看到段落主题句，读者大致可以了解段落要阐述的内容。什么是段落的主题句？ 段落主题句通常是一个语法结构完整、内容概括、用词简洁明了的简单句。通常将段落主题句置于段落的开头，可以使文章结构更清晰，更有说服力。 4、参照提纲，紧扣主题句，完成各段落，充实文章内容。 有了段落主题句后，还需要顺着段落主题句的方向，参照提纲中的思路，完成各个段落。引导段要能引起读者的注意和兴趣，为主题段铺路架桥。主题段应围绕文章和该段的主题来展开。展开的方式包括：顺序法、举例法、比较法、对比法、说明法、因果法、推导法、归纳法，和下定义等。可以根据需要任选一种或几种方式。还是以“The English Teacher I Admire Most”为例，主题段中就能用到举例法、说明法、因果法等。 除此之外，这一步骤还需注意三方面问题： 确保提纲中段落结构的思路与各段主题句的一致性。只有这样，才能保证所写段落不偏题，不跑题。 要综合考虑各个段落的内容安排，避免段落内容的交叉。 用好连接词，注意段落间、句子间的连贯性。要做到所写文章层次分明，思路清晰，文字连贯，就需要在句与句之间，段与段之间架起一座座桥梁，而连接词起的正是桥梁作用。 如果说第一、二步是对文章的构思，那么第三、四步就是真正地“写”了。用词是否贴切，文法是否正确，句式是否多变，文采是否有生气，关系到写作者的语言功底和水平。 以下这几点仅供参考。 1、在整篇文章中，避免只是用一两个句式，要灵活运用各种句式。如倒装句、强调句、省略句、主从复合句、对比句、分词短语等。 2、使用不同长度的句子，通过简单句和复合句，增强句子的连贯性和表现力。 3、改变句子的开头方式，不要一味以主、谓、宾、状的次序。可以把状语置于句首，或使用分词短语等动词的非谓语形式。 4、学会使用过渡词。 如：1）递进：further more, moreover, besides, in addition, then etc. 2）转折：however, but, nevertheless, after all etc. 3）总结：finally, at last, in brief, to conclude 4）强调：really, indeed, certainly, surely, above all etc. 5）对比：in the same way, just as, on the other hand, etc. 5、避免重复使用同一单词或词组。 6、注意运用固定词组、习语、谚语来代替一些词表达意思，以增加文采。 把好最后的检查关 1、是否切题分三点看：一是整篇文章内容是否切合文章标题要求；二是段落主题句的内容是否与各段落提示句内容相一致；三是段落内部的内容是否与段落主题句的表达相一致。如果发现任何一个层面不切题，应该尽可能弥补，删除那些多余的或不切题的地方，但切忌动“大- 2 - 八年级英语作文讲座 手术”。 2、是否连贯：检查上下文是否连贯，句子衔接是否自然流畅，检验的标准主要是句子是否通畅，该用连词的地方用了没有，所用的连词是否合适。 3、是否有语法错误：主谓是否一致，动词的时态、语态、语气的使用是否正确，词组的搭配是否合乎习惯。还是以“The English Teacher I Admire Most”为例，根据此标题，文章肯定用第一人称“I”写，一般性的描述用现在时，举过去的事例用过去时。 4、是否有大小写、拼写、标点错误，注意卷面整洁。要提高写作水平，最根本是要大量实践，必须多读多写，注意博览和精读相结合，甚至可以适当背诵一些名句名篇。另外，还可选些范文，悉心领悟，多加模仿，以逐步达到运用自如。 中考英语作文简介 中考英语作文的题材新颖、形式多样，主要侧重灵活性、实用性和多样性，主要有以下几种形式。 1、以图画提供情景的作文应以“看”为主，通过细心观察图中的人物、景物、文字、数字等，弄清写作的意图，通过分析思考把握逻辑联系，找出主题并借助所给的文字，把图中的信息转化成文章，但要注意，文章不能停留在图画的表面，而要表达出提供情景的意图和内涵，即“文在图上、意在画外”，触景生情，文章才能有灵魂。 2、以图表提供情景的作文要以“读”为主，首先要读懂图表中的数据、时间、编码以及相互间的变化关系，对所给的信息加以分析、推断、筛选、概括、去粗取精；在写作时目的要明确，要注意内容的准确性和严肃性，尤其是图表中的数据、时间等不得有误。 3、以提纲提供情景的作文。这种形式本身的要点已经很明确，重点也很突出，只要把各个提纲加以发挥，注意遣词造句的灵活性和语法规则的正确性，就不会造成审题不清而偏离主题，但要注意，文章必须覆盖所提供的各个提纲的要点。 4、以书信格式提供情景的作文。首先要了解书信的格式，英文书信格式与中文有所不同，1）、一般在信纸的右上角写上写信人的地址和日期，地址应按从小到大的顺序排列；2）、左边顶格写上收信人的姓名；3）、正文部分；4）、祝愿的话；5）、写信人签名。信的内容一定要按所给的要求写，不要漏写。如果要求你的信件用E-mail发送，请同学们务必注意，对方的网址一定要写准确，多一点或少一点都不能发送成功，可谓“差之毫厘，失之千里”。 几点注意事项 用英文写作不同于用母语那样得心应手，常常会受到生词、语法、惯用法的限制，只要同学们平时注意两种语言的异同性，抓住写作要点，也可妙笔生花。 1、为了保证文章层次分明、条理清楚，要把时间固定下来，如：记叙一件事要用过去时；写经常发生的事或对人物的描写，要用一般现在时。整个文章中的人称要一致，首尾呼应，不要随意改动，以免造成误解。 2、不要为了追求“一鸣惊人”而不愿使用熟悉的常用词，去找一些生冷的词汇，对这些一知半解的词你不会用，不知道如何搭配，结果适得其反，使文章显得生硬、不协调，甚至错误百出，所以要实事求是地把握，避免不必要的失分。 3、注意不同语言的表达习惯，也是写好英语作文的重要环节，如“我的理想是做一名建筑师”，很多同学写成“My ambition is to do/make an architect”，“to do”表示“做”或者“干”，“to make”表示“制作”，而“做一名建筑师”则表示“成为一名建筑师”应该用“be/become an architect”；又如“看书、看报”应用“read a book/newspaper”，而不是“see a book/newspaper”。因此，平时应该注意不同语言的表达习惯，望文生义或一味生搬硬套只会闹出“我的理想是制作一名建筑师”的笑话。 4、有些同学因噎废食，因怕出错而只写短句或简单句，写出的文章过于幼稚、空洞贫泛、言之无物，要使文章有血有肉就要把平时学的知识用进去，如：从句、非谓语动词和比较等句型，关键时用上一、二个，就能使文章不同凡响，更有文采，特别是对关联词的使用，如“now that”、“notbut”等，会使你的文章逻辑结构紧密、层次鲜明、条理清楚，更能显示出你的英- 3 - 八年级英语作文讲座 文功底，但要做到这些并非一日之功，要靠平时的不断训练和积累。 下面描述的是XX年x月x日你的一次经历，请根据其内容，用英语写一篇80词左右的日记。日记的开头格式已给出，不计入文章总词数。注意要点完整，语法正确，上下文连贯，并适当发挥。 要点：1、下午放学后 2、爸爸出差，妈妈生病卧床 3、照顾妈妈，送医院，买药，煮饭、洗衣服等等 4、后来受父母表扬 5、自己对该经历的感触 May,15, 2005, Wednesday Fine _ One possible version: May, 15, 2005, Wednesday Fine When I got home this afternoon, I found my mother was lying in bed sick and my father was away on business. What should I do then? Since Mother was ill, I should take care of her. I first sent her to hospital and bought some medicine. When we got home, I began to cook dinner and wash clothes. I was praised by my parents later for this. I think I have grown up now and I should help do something for my family. 一、按照相应要求完成下列句子 假如你是大连69中学的白梅，请你根据下列信息给曾在你班任教过的美国教师Mr Brown写一封信。介绍你班及你个人的情况，并希望他有时间再来你校参观访问。 去年 今年 班级 45名学生 47名学生 王哲同父母去了加拿大 情况 篮球比赛输了 上周篮球比赛赢了 个人 英语和数学不太英语和数学取得了进步 情况 好 要求：1、信中应包括所提供的信息，但可以适当发挥； 2、不少于80词； 3、开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Mr Brown, I havent seen you for a long time. _ _- 4 - 八年级英语作文讲座 _ One possible version: Dear Mr Brown: I havent seen you for a long time. I miss you very much. Here Id like to tell you something about my class and myself. As you know, there were 45 students in our class last year, but now the number has reached 47. By the way, Wang Zhe, the tallest boy, has left for Canada with his parents. Do you still remember that our basketball team was beaten last time? You can hardly imagine we won the first place last week. And you must remember I was weak in both English and maths before. Can you believe Ive made great progress in them? I often go to the English Corner on Saturday to practice my spoken English . Whats more, Ive become more and more interested in maths with the teachers help. What about you? How are you getting along with your work? I hope you can visit our school again if you have time. - 5 - 八年级英语作文讲座 八年级上册英语作文范文 Unit1. 介绍你的一个朋友，表达他的兴趣爱好，同时写清他的习惯，他怎么样才能保持健康 He thinks he isn't pretty healthy. He doesn't like exercise, so he does exercise once a week. He is very fat. He doesn't like vegetables, so he hardly ever eats vegetables. He likes eating junk food. He thinks it is very nice. He eats them about four or five times a week. He loves milk, but he doesn't drink it every day. He only drinks them two or three times a week. He eats fruit once or twice a week. But he sleeps nine hours every night. His lifestyle is not very well. But he knows healthy lifestyle helps him get good grades. He tries to eats some vegetables and eats lots of fruit. And he wants his parents to play sports with him. He wants to be the healthiest. Unit2假设李平是你的朋友，他目前的身体状况不好.他从来不锻炼，他经常感到很紧张，很疲倦，他爱吃零食，有时会胃疼.这几天，他感冒了.头很痛.请写一封信给他，并给他一些建议. Dear LiPing, I am sorry to hear that you are not feeling well.I think you should see a doctor，then you should take some medicines，and drink a lot of water. You said you are stressed out and tired.Why not listen to music and go to bed early？ You should also try to exercise.Eating less junk food.Eating more healthy food，like apple，orange and milk .I think they are good for your health. I hope you feel better soon！ Yours××× Unit3邀请好友 Dear Marry: I'm XXX(你的名字). Tomorrow is my birthday, I want to invite you to take part in my birthday, can you come tomorrow? The party will begin at half past six in the evening. My parents, friends and classmates will come, you can see them in the party. If you come to my birthday party, please make a phone call to me, I will be pleased that you can come. Yours, XXX 委婉拒绝邀请 Hi Henry, Thanks for your invitation.Im sorry I cant come to your party this week. I am really busy This evening Im going to my cousins birthday party. And tomorrow, I have to go to the dentist. On Wednesday, I have tennis training with the school team. And I have to study for my chemistry test on Thursday. On Friday evening, Im going to the movies with some friends. Can you come to the movies with us on Friday? Write soon, Sonia Unit4 根据下列育英中学八年级班学生上学方式的调查表，用英语写一篇短文.不少于70 个单词. 上学方式 Bus Walking Bike Car 学生人数 15 10 25 0 There are fifty students in Class 1, Grade 8 at Yuying Middle School. Every day they go to school in different ways. Fifteen students take buses because they live far from the school. Ten students walk. They think walking is good for their health and they live near the school. Twenty-five students ride their bikes to school because they like riding bikes very much and their homes are not - 6 - 八年级英语作文讲座 very far from the school. No one goes to school by car Unit 5 一些英国朋友要来参加你们班举行的英语晚会.作为主持人，你需要用英语准备一份60-80个词的欢迎辞. Good evening! Ladies and gentlemen, Welcome to our class and welcome to our English Evening. First of all, let me say a few words about our class. There are 60 students in our class. 32 of us are boys and the others are girls. Most of us like English and study hard at it. In our free time we often read English books, newspapers and magazines. Sometimes we learn English on the radio and sometimes on TV. This evening you'll enjoy some short plays, songs, dances and so on by our classmates. I hope you'll like these programs and have a good time. Thank you! 根据中文提示写一60字以上的E_mail.提示：Tom邀请LiPing参加他生日的聚会，但是LiPing的父母出差(be out on business)要到下个月才回来(come back home)，奶奶又生病在床，需要人照顾，而且他得为了即将到来的英语考试而学习.因此无法来参加这一生日聚会.他感到很抱歉. Thank you very much for inviting me to your birthday party.Id love togo,but I cant. My parents are both out on business. They are coming back next month. And now I have to look after my grandma because she is ill in bed. And I also need to study for my coming English exam. I am very sorry,but I cant go to your party. Thank you for asking me.I hope you will have a good time. Unit6 Unit7 请你写一篇制作玉米花(popcorn)的小短文.注意使用first, next, then, finally等表示过程的词.不少于50个词. How to make popcorn I like popcorn very much. I learned from my mother how to make popcorn. Now let me show you the ways. First you put the popcorn into the popper. Next, turn on the popper. Wait for several minutes. Then you pour the popcorn into the bowl. And put salt on the popcorn. Finally you can eat the popcorn. 制作牛肉三明治: First,put the cheese on a slice of bread. Then cut up a green pepper and an onion. Add these to the sandwich. Next, put some mushrooms and the beef slices on the sandwich. Put the relish on the beef. Finally, put the other slice of bread on the top. Unit8. My Last Day Off On my last day off, I went to Shanghai with my whole family.Shanhhai is a beautiful and modern city with many tall buildings.First,I went to Shanghai Sea World to see some big fish and some big octopus and so on.Then we took a walk along the wide and busy street.When we passed a restaurant,I felt hungry,so we ate some delicious Shanghai food.After lunch,we took some photos of Shanghai Beach,and saw some beautiful boats.Finally,tired but happy,we took the subway back to the hotel. What a great vacation I had! Unit9.My good friend Mike I have a good friend. His name is Mike. He was born in September, 1988 in a small town near London. He is a middle school student. He came to China with his parents two years ago. His parents are teaching English in China now. He and his parents like China and Chinese food very much. - 7 - 八年级英语作文讲座 根据信息完成下列短文，50词左右. Name: Yao Ming Date of Birth:09/12/1980 1988：starts to play basketball 1996: joins Shanghai basketball team 1997: joins the national basketball team 2002: joins NBA My favorite basketball player is Yao Ming. He was born on September 12, 1980. He started playing basketball at the age of 8. He joined Shanghai basketball team in 1996. A year later, he joined the national basketball team. He joined NBA in 2002 and is becoming more and more famous now. 介绍自己Im very glad to introduce myself to all of you. My name is Li Wei. Im 14 years old. I live in Nanjing, a very beautiful city. My favourite subjects are English and biology. In my free time, I often go camping, draw pictures of plants and enjoy the birds in nature. I want to be a biologist when I grow up. I feel lucky to join you. I hope that we can be good friends. Thats all. Thank you. Grandpa Li is over seventy years old, and he has no sons or daughters. He wanted to invite some old men to his house for supper. However, he needed some help. After Mingming knew it, he asked his classmates to Grandpa Li's house. And then they helped him to make his bed, do the dishes, sweep the floor, take out the trash and so on. In a word, they helped him with chores. Grandpa Li was very thankful and asked them to have supper with them. They didn't agree with him, but thanked him. Then they left. 谈论学习英语 Dear Bill, How are you? Today I want to tell you about my English study. I'm interested in English because it's my favorite subject. I'm working hard at it now. You know, I practise listening, speaking, reading and writing everyday. But my spoken English is not so good. So I keep on practising all the time. I remembered over 1,000 English words. In the evening, I watch English videos. I try to talk in English with my classmates or my English teacher. I still have some problems. I can't make sentences with new words. Would you please g