小学英语作文指导课件.ppt

小学英语作文指导,一、作文类型：,1、看图作文2、图表作文3、书信或电子邮件4、命题作文 不管是什么类型的作文都会提供一定的信息。如：文字说明、图画、图表、单词及短语等。我们都要正确处理好给出这些信息。同时还要理清用第几人称来写，按什么顺序来写，用什么时态来表达等。,二、开头句,1、Look at the picture/photo.2、天气句(主语要学会用it 来表达)（1）Its sunny today.The sun is shining.Its very hot.It will be sunny this weekend/tomorrow.（2）Its rainy today.Its raining now.（3）Its snowy today.Its snowing now.Its very cold.（4）It was sunny yesterday/last weekend.（5）It will be sunny tomorrow.（6）It will rain/snow tomorrow.3.I had a good time last weekend/yesterday.,三、结尾句：,升华主题（表达的内容：感情句、感叹句、邀请句、看法句、问句等）,1.I like/love my father and mother very much.2.What a beautiful picture!I like it very much.3.How nice she is!I like her very much.4.Do you want to go to Hainan with me?5.Lets go to Hainan together.6.I think we will have a great/good time.7.I think I will have a good time this weekend.8.I think I will be very happy this summer holiday.7、We are having a great/good time.8、Do you like me?9.What do you want to do this weekend?9.What will you do this weekend?10.What did you do last weekend?,四、正文句,1.能用简单句表达，也能用丰富句表达。2.能正确表达时态。（四种时态）3.能正确安排词序，时间放句末，地点又放时间的前面。4.能用一些句型正确表达句子。如：There be 句型介绍 This is句型介绍 I want to 动词原形句型 I like ing 动词句型等,简单句丰富句（加时间，加地点）1、He played football.He played football yesterday.He played football on the playground yesterday.2、She flew a kite.She flew a kite yesterday.She flew a kite in the park yesterday.,陈述句：主语动词（时态体现）（宾语）地点时间,3、Lingling is flying a kite.Lingling is flying a kite now.Lingling is flying a kite in the park now.4、Tom is reading a book.Tom is reading a book now.Tom is reading a book in the classroom now.,5、Lingling is going to fly a kite.Lingling is going to fly a kite tomorrow.Lingling is going to fly a kite in the park tomorrow.Lingling will fly a kite.Lingling will fly a kite tomorrow.Lingling will fly a kite in the park tomorrow.,6、We are going to have a picnic.We are going to have a picnic next Sunday.We are going to have a picnic in the park next Sunday.We will have a picnic.We will have a picnic next Sunday.We will have a picnic in the park next Sunday.,7.I want to go to Hainan this Summer holiday.Daming wants to go to Hainan this Summer holiday.8.I ride my bike every day.Tom rides his bike every day.9.I read a book every morning.She reads a book every morning.We read books every morning.,8、There be 结构表达（它有There is 和There are）,There is 单数名词或不可数名词in/on/under/behind的地点短语There are 复数名词in/on/under/behind的地点短语There is a book on the desk.There is some water in the bottle.There are some books on the desk.There is a pen,two pencil and some books on the desk.,五、内容安排（内容顺序）,遵循几个原则：看图作文（从上到下，从左到右）再就是按照时间的先后顺序和动作的先后来写。一天安排一周安排暑假安排野餐活动安排，参加生日聚会，人物介绍等,六、人称确定与时态的表达,1、每写一篇作文，首先你要根据信息确定好用第一人称来写，还是用第三人称来写。2、根据信息确定好用什么时态来表达。一般介绍性作文用一般现在时，谈论过去发生的事要用一般过去时，表达正在发生的事要用现在进行时，表达计划或打算要去做的事要用一般将来时。并且你所用的时态一定要正确体现出来。,七、信息处理,1、要正确分析所给出的信息。2、给出的信息一般有文字信息，图画信息，单词和短语信息和表格中的单词和短语信息等，对于给出的单词，要灵活处理，学会变通使用。3、根据这些信息确定好用第几人称来写，按什么顺序来写，同时确定好用什么时态来表达，并能正确写出所表达的时态结构，再就是要能用英语的表达习惯来写。如：时间、地点在句中的位置，at in on的区别及它们所组成的一系列短语等，要能正确地表达出来。,八、关于时间的表达,要掌握好一些常见的时间短语。（时间可放句首或句末）1、at时间短语:at eight oclock,at half pat eight,at 8:30,at the weekend2、in时间短语:in 2017,in spring,in May,in the morning(afternoon/evening)3、on时间短语:on Sunday,on Saturday morning,on May 1st,on Childrens Day4、yesterday时间短语:yesterday morning(afternoon/evening)5、last时间短语:last night,last month,last year,last week,last weekend6、this时间短语:this morning(afternoon/evening),this weekend,this week,this month,this year,this summer holiday,this winter holiday7、next时间短语:next week,next month,next year8、tomorrow时间短语:tomorrow morning(afternoon/evening),九、关于地点的表达,要掌握好一些常见的地点短语。(地点一般放句尾，但有时间时，则放于时间之前。)1.in地点短语:in the classroom,in the park,in the river,in the sea,in the desk,in the library 2.on地点短语:on the desk,on the wall,on the floor,on the blackboard,on the lake,on the playground,3.at地点短语:at home,at school,at the zoo,at the supermarket,at the station 4.under地点短语:under the tree5.behind地点短语:behind the door,本次英语作文信息分析：1、首先弄清你以第几人称来写，是第一人称，还是第三人称。大明就是我，还是 大明是你的朋友或同学。根据给出的标题My weekend，应该用第一人称来写。2、时间定位：是上周末，还是这个周末，这决定表达的时态。last weekend 就用一般过去时来表达，this weekend就用一般将来时来表达。3、表中信息需要仔细分析，我们应该怎样用这些信息，有些需要变通来用。如:reading books，它的原形是read books；do homework 可为do my homework;visit his grandparents可为visit my grandparents.,My weekend(一),选择用一般将来时来表达作文：Hello,My name is Daming.This weekend is coming.It will be sunny at the weekend.On Saturday morning I will read books in the library.In the afternoon I will buy food,then I will go to the zoo with my parents.On Sunday morning I will do my homework.In the afternoon I will visit my grandparents.I think I will have a good time at the weekend.,My weekend(二),选择用一般过去时来表达作文：Hello,My name is Daming.Last weekend I had a good time.It was sunny last weekend.On Saturday morning I read books in the library.In the afternoon I bought food,then I went to the zoo with my parents.On Sunday morning I did my homework.In the afternoon I visited my grandparents.What did you do last weekend?,