高一英语(外研版) 必修三 Unit 1 Knowing meknowing you(5) 2课件.pptx

必修三 Unit 1 Knowing me knowing you(5)高一年级 英语,Writing an essay,Read a fable and interpret the message that the fable conveys.Write an essay and use examples to argue about the message.,Learning objectives,What can youpredict?,“A dilemma”means a difficult situation in which you have to choose between two or among more alternatives.,Read the fable with questions in mind.What is a fable?What is the“Dilemma”mentioned in the story?What is the result of the story?,The Porcupine DilemmaAdapted from a work by SchopenhauerOne cold winter night,a group of porcupines gathered together to keep warm.As soon as they started to get closer,they hurt each other with their quills,so they had to move apart.After a short time,they started to feel cold again,so they moved closer together.,But again they had to move away because of the pain caused by the other porcupines quills.After repeating this process a few times,they eventually found the ideal distance where they could feel warm while managing not to hurt each other.,What is a fable?A fable is a story which teaches a moral lesson.Fables sometimes have animals as the main characters.,porcupine,quills,What is the“Dilemma”mentioned in the story?In this story,the“Dilemma”is about a group of porcupines gathering together to keep warm.If they get too close,their quills hurt each other.While if they move apart,they feel cold.,What is the result of the story?After trying several times,they find the ideal distance.“Ideal distance”shows that there should be boundaries between porcupines.,Choose the message you think the fable conveys.1.Porcupines are not social animals.2.The more independent you are,the better your life will be.3.There should be boundaries in interpersonal relationships.,Choose the message you think the fable conveys.1.Porcupines are not social animals.2.The more independent you are,the better your life will be.3.There should be boudaries in interpersonal relationships.,Summary,a fable,main character,the result,getting close or moving apart,ideal distance,the“Dilemma”,a group of porcupines,boundaries in interpersonal relationships,message conveyed,The fable is about a group of porcupines gathering together to keep warm.If they get too close,their quills hurt each other,while if they move apart,they feel cold.After trying several times,they find the ideal distance.The fable tells us that there should be boundaries in interpersonal relationships.,The author Arthur Schopenhauer（叔本华）(1788-1860)was a German philosopher.Schopenhauer developed an atheistic metaphysical and ethical system.His idea had a great impact across various disciplines,including philosophy,literature,and science.His writing on aesthetics,morality,and psychology would exert important influence on thinkers and artists throughout the 19th and 20th centuries.,What would you say first when sharing opinions about the story?Do you hold the same idea with the author?How could we get people to accept our ideas?,Writing an essay,Opinions,Supportings,Inspiration,Writing an essay,The summary of the fable(its main message),Viewpoint and supporting examples in your real life,What we can learn from it.,What would you say first when sharing opinions about the story?First,introduce the story,including the original author and the summary of the story.,Do you agree with the authors idea that the fable conveys?I agree with the authors idea.We need boundaries with our friends.How could we get people to accept our ideas?Use examples in our real life to support our opinions.,IntroductionOriginal author:Schopenhauer(叔本华)Summary of the fable:The fable is about a group of porcupines gathering together to keep warm.If they get too close,their quills hurt each other,while if they move apart,they feel cold.After trying several times,they find the ideal distance.The fable tells us that there should be boundaries ininterpersonal relationships.,Notes and opinions,Main body Viewpoint:We need boundaries with our friends.Supporting examples in your real life:It was a little friction with my good friend.What I did to keep closer to her turn out to be annoying.Then I realised my fault and kept the ideal distance with my friend.Our friendship was repaired.,Notes and opinions,ConclusionWe have to find the proper distance between us and our friends.,Notes and opinions,Write the essay with the notes you have made and use the expressions below to help you.This fable describesThe fable teaches us thatOne example of this from real life isIn conclusion,Assessing an essayAfter completing this essay,can you grade your writing?A(excellent),B(good)or C(in need of improvement),Assessing an essayAfter completing this essay,can you grade your writing?A(excellent),B(good)or C(in need of improvement),A perfect introduction of the fable,including the author and the message that the fable conveys.A well-founded passage structure,including real life examples that can convince others.Clear and concise sentences and expressions,including various forms of clauses.No erro in grammar,spelling and punctuation.,Self-assessment,Effective connectionsThe fable describesThe fable teaches us thatOne example from real life is WhileOnce,At first.since.SoonThen/Since then In conclusion,Good expressionsis written by cast a light on share the same ideas astry to persuadeI realised/I have realised that,leave no room forfind our friendship repairedrespect each othermake our friendship last long,The Porcupine Dilemma is written by German philosopher Schopenhauer.The fable describes a group of porcupines gathering together to keep warm.If they get too close,their quills hurt each other.While if they move apart,they feel cold.After trying several times,they find the ideal distance.The fable teaches us that there should be boundaries in interpersonal relationships.,Though it is an old fable,it casts a light on us even today.We all value friendship,but have you considered that we need boundaries with our friends?One example from real life is like this.Once I thought friends should get close to each other,the closer the better.Ma Jing is the first friend that I made at senior high.At first,I thought since we were friends,she had to share the same ideas as mine.,So I always followed her,wanted to know her opinion on everything and tried to persuade her when she had a different idea.Soon,we started quarrelling.“Youre so annoying!”she shouted angrily after a quarrel.How could I become annoying?I felt hurt and discussed it with another friend.,Then I realised it was my problem.l had been getting too close to her and leaving her no room for herself.Since then,I stopped following her so much and I found our friendship repaired.Now I have realised that friends need to have boundaries and respect each other,no matter how close we are.,In conclusion,in order to make our friendship last long,we have to find the proper distance between us and our friends,close enough to understand each other,far enough to respect each other.,Learn to reviseRevision is the process of editing,analyzing and proofreading to improve the quality of a writing.Learning how to revise writing is pretty important.By revising,you can improve the organization,clarity and accuracy of a written piece to produce high-quality content.,Content,Structure and ClarityEnsure the central point is clear.Ensure topic sentences are strong.Ensure your paragraph should be about the same length.Ensure supporting sentences actually support your topic sentences and dont introduce a different subject.,Accuracy1.Ensure the subject and verb match and the tenses are correct.2.Use a mix of simple,compound,and complex sentences.3.Double check the spelling and punctuation marks.,Read the quotations and discuss their meanings.,己所不欲，勿施于人。（孔子）,In our life there are too many things that we cant control and unavoidably we will conflict with others in some aspects.If we can think more about others,there will be more harmony instead of conflict.,好篱笆造就好邻居。（谚语）,This means that it is better for people to mind their own business and to respect the privacy of others.Keep an ideal distance and respect each other.,人类最基本的需要就是理解和被理解。（拉尔夫尼科尔斯）,It emphasizes the importance of understanding and being understood.Being understood is taking a look at a situation from another point of view.,Present your ideas basing on“I-MB-C”structure,Explanation of the quotation(its main message),Examples of application in everyday life,What we can learn from it.,Useful expressionsWe have chosen to talk about the quotationThe main message of this quotation isIn daily life,Another example isIn conclusion,this quotation teaches us that,Homework,Option 1 Revise your essay after class;Option 2 Choose one from the three quotations on page 12.Write an essay to interpret the quotation and present your ideas.,End,