高考英语书面表达写作技巧.ppt
,书面表达写作技巧,Which composition feels more attractive,why?,漂亮的书写是写作得分的亮点,影响给分的因素之一：作文的卷面(neatness),9分,6分,24分,影响给分的因素之二：文中所采用的语言材料(words,phrases and sentence patterns),人靠衣装，文靠词装,A.词汇的选择灵活新颖，,B.句型结构运用灵活多变;,Writing a composition is just like making a hamburger.,词汇,倒装句，强调句，主从复合句，with复合结构，it做形式主语或宾语,1.覆盖了所有的要点 2.应用了较多的语法结构和词汇 3.有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑 4.语言得体,要点全,连接词（递进，转折，因果，目的，归纳）,如何算是一篇好文章？,语言地道，规范,“My Way to Learn English”,As we all know,English learning is more and more important.Its a big problem to improve our English.I used to be poor at English.But after trying many useful ways,I make some progress.I was poor at reciting.To slove this problem,I write down the words list.I read it when I am waiting for the bus or waiting in line.After using this way and working hard,my English has improved a lot.What a useful way to learn English.,这篇文章中规中矩，思路较为清晰，语法也没有错误。但在考场上也拿不了高分，这篇文章要修改，主要可从以下几个问题上入手：语言平平无奇、繁琐；句式单一；缺少复合句；接下来我们一个点一个点地来修改。,As we all know,English learning is more and more important.Its a big problem to improve our English.润色语言（改换已经用烂了的短语）；As far as Im concernedIts a big problem to improve English because english learning is more and more important.添加复合句（because）,2,I used to be poor at English.But after trying many useful ways,I make some progress.I was poor at reciting.语言重复繁琐且单调。改：I used to be poor at reciting English words.But after 注：使用了方法并取得进步可以放在后文进行具体的交代。,3,To slove this problem,I write down the words list.I read it when I am waiting for the bus or waiting in line.To solve this problem,I try writing down the words list and carry it with me so as to memorize and go over them anytime.,4,After using this way and working hard,my English has improved a lot.改：With the help of this useful way and my hard work,I make big progress in my English learning.注：看似句子变长了，但是将时间状语改为介词短语，更加能突出这种学习方法对我的帮助之大。而且后半句明确点出我获益于这种方法。这句话也成了全文的中心句！,5,What a useful way to learn English.这种结尾真是太不给力了，一点都不出彩。如果放在一篇好文章的结尾显得虎头蛇尾，很有可能会影响阅卷老师的最后评分。改：Therefore,why not try the way yourself to improve you English.使用提议的句型能在总结的基础上发出呼告。,SEE YOU！,In summary：作文的修改还是要多读多感知，写完考场作文后一定要再通读几遍，检查语法。尽量还是先打好草稿，这样检查语法同时，润色语言，再誊抄到答题纸上才能发挥自己的最高水准。,Thanks for your attention!,Goodbye!,
