台州市高三英语调考卷分析.ppt

2013年台州市高三英语调考卷分析,Cloze test&Writing(21,22,27),(the example part),What kind of writing is it?Argumentative writing(议论文)B.Narrative writing(记叙文)C.Explanative writing(说明文),Cloze test,Cloze test,Whats the main idea of the passage?,who,when,what,I,When I was young,After the experience of trying to be a model,I realized I should be down-to-earth.,Cloze test,When I was young I wanted to be a model,so when a national contest was nearby,I 21 my parents to take me for an audition(试演).I was told I had _22_21.A.convinced B.advised C.expected D.promised,convinced,Cloze test,convince:make sb.feel certain,cause sb.to realize,advise:give advice to sb.,recommend,convince sb.to do sth./convince sb.of sth.,advise sb.to do sth./advise doing sth.,(persuade),(牛津高阶),(牛津高阶),Cloze test,1.I _ her to take a different approach,but she refused.2.What she said _ me that I was mistaken.,convince/advise,advised,convinced,persuaded,Cloze test,2012,浙江 Oscar _28_ the manager to look in the record of advance ticket sales.Just as he thought,a name matched the seat where Oscar had found the umbrella.A.convinced B.forced C.encouraged D.advised,persuaded,convinced,Whats the difference between convince and advise?,If you use“advise”,its not certain whether you do it or not,but if you use“convince”,you must do it.,I was told I had 22 and was selected by one modeling agency.22.A.intelligence B.potential C.strength D.pressure,Cloze test,potential,qualities that can be developed,Cloze test,2012,福建25.-Why do you choose to work in an international travel agency?-Well,you know,English is my _.So its my best choice.A.strength B.talent C.ability D.skill,strength,strength and weakness,Cloze test,1.It is a kind of machine with several potential uses.,potential adj.in existence and capable of being developed or used(潜在的,有潜力的),2.She has artistic potential as an artist.,potential n.qualities that exist and can be developed(潜能,潜力),(牛津高阶),(牛津高阶),Cloze test,For months,any boredom or disappointment I faced was 27 because I knew I would soon have the 28 to be a real model.27.A.pushed aside B.left out C.turned down D.put away,Cloze test,For months,any boredom or disappointment I faced was 27 because I knew I would soon have the 28 to be a real model.27.A.pushed aside B.left out C.turned down D.put away,Cloze test,上完这节英语课后，我建议大家把英语书收好，然后回教室。,After we finish this English class,I advise you to _,and go back to your classroom.,当你有困难的时候，不要把我排挤在外，我会尽力帮助你的。,Dont _ when you have trouble.I will try my best to help you.,put away/push aside,put away your English books,push me aside,Cloze test,Find original sentences(appreciate):,At that time,the idea that I wanted to be famous and rich prevented me from judging.,At that time,my desire for fame and fortune clouded all judgment.,cloud:vt.(cause sth to)become dull,unclear or indistinct 变得不清楚,不明朗,不清晰 他年事已高，判断力减弱了。（牛津高阶）Old age has _ his judgment.,clouded,Cloze test,Find original sentences(appreciate):,2.It makes me always remember that we shouldntbuild castle in the air or be too proud.,It reminds me that we should be down-to-earth,instead of being overambitious.,down-to-earth:有个脚踏实地的学习态度对于我们是非常重要的。Its of great significance for us to have a down-to-earth attitude.,Summary of the story,When I was young,once I _ my parents totake me for an audition in order to be a model.As Iwas told that I had _,my _ for fame andfortune _ all judgment.I even _ _ theboredom and disappointment I faced,however,I didntsucceed even though I was sent _ on a few auditions,which cost me much money.What made me _was that they told me I was too short.Years later,I realize that the experiencereminds me that we should be _ insteadof being _.,convinced,potential,desire,clouded,pushed,aside,out,desperate/upset,down-to-earth,overambitious,What can we learn from the passage?,Great minds think alike.Two heads are better than one.A bird in the hand is worth two in the bush.A fall into the pit,a gain in your wit.,D.A fall into the pit,a gain in your wit.,Writing,古人云：“吃一堑，长一智”(A fall into the pit,a gain in your wit)。生活中总有一些事情给人教训，助人成长。请以“_ taught me a lesson Ill never forget”为题写一篇100-120字的短文,描述一件对你产生重大影响的事情，并略加评论。_ taught me a lesson Ill never forget As an old saying goes,a fall into the pit,a gain in your wit.I cant agree more with this view.,Common Mistakes:,1.The mistakes of the title:,(1).Spelling mistakes,Failness taught me a lesson,Failure taught me a lesson,(2).Grammatical mistakes,Cheat in the exam taught me a lesson,Cheating in the exam taught me a lesson,(3).No title,(4)Mistake,(4).Unclear objective definition(对象界定不明),2.The mistakes of the example:,(1)Mistake,(1).No example,(2)Mistake,(3)Mistake,(2).The example is not relevant to the topic.,(3).The example is not brief enough,3.The mistakes of the structure:,(1).Pear-shaped passage:,(2).Strawberry-shaped passage:,(too many comments),(too long an example),Criteria(标准),Is there any example?,Whats the example?,Does the example express the topic well?,Is the example relevant to the topic?,Is the example expressed briefly and logically?,Every time I see the saying,memories flood back.I can well remember there was a time when I had difficulty riding a bike.I tried many times with the result of falling down from it.The pain nearly made me give up.However,mom encouraged me that“Never give up.I believe you can.”The words brightened my heart.After trying again and again,eventually I could manage it.You could imagine how happy I was,which was beyond words.,example,Reference,The accident taught me a lesson Ill never forget As an old saying goes,a fall into the pit,a gain in yourwit.I cant agree more with this view.,There are many hard,lessons to be learned from life.,It reminds me of an accident,when I was in junior middle school.One day after school,I had to cross a crowded road to go home.Although the cars were speeding along the road,I tried to run across it.An old granny warned me of the danger,but I didnt take care and persisted in walking.Unfortunately,a car knocked me down after I was able to avoid several ones safely.When I came to myself,I was in hospital and my leg was badly injured.,What a lesson!Every time I look at the scar in my leg,I couldnt help telling myself it is never too careful to crossthe road.Wed better think twice before taking action.,linking sentence,the example part,the lesson,Lets practise,You cant choose what you are given,but you can choose how you make use of it.(2012 湖北)结合事例写一篇文章,Write the example of the composition,Lets share,Homework,Write the composition with a suitable example,You cant choose what you are given,but you can choose how you make use of it.(2012 湖北)结合事例写一篇文章,Thank you,At the age of 10,I had a bad illness and then I lay on the bed in hospital.I was upset because I didnt get along well with my classmates so I think they wouldnt come to see me.But surprisingly they all came.I was happy at that time.,Example,Take us students for instance,no one is perfect.So it is normal to make mistakes or meet failure.What we can do is to learn from the mistakes.,Example,Example,Grandma taught me a lesson Ill never forget,古人云：“吃一堑，长一智”(A fall into the pit,a gain in your wit)。生活中总有一些事情给人教训，助人成长。请以“_ taught me a lesson Ill never forget”为题写一篇100-120字的短文,描述一件对你产生重大影响的事情，并略加评论。,Example,I still remember that I used to play with my grandmawho was a kind lady.Shes the one I love best but I didnt say“I love you”.One day afternoon,I saw her lying on the bed and innocently asked,”why dont you get up and the sun is going to burn your ass.”She was so weak that she could even answered in a low voice,”Im ill now.And I fell that Im going to die right now.would you mind kissing me onceagain?”,An exam taught me a lesson Ill never forget As an old saying goes,a fall into the pit,a gain in your wit.I cant agree more with this view.The significance of this saying,with which most of us are familiar,proves that it is not the mistake itself but the lesson we learn from it that counts.Memories flooded into my mind when it comes to the special experience.It was a period when I buried myself into study without a rest.However,I still failed in an exam even though I had spared no efforts to study.Tears welled my eyes,and only then was I aware of the importance of the balance between study and relaxation.After that,I adjusted my approach to study,ultimately,I achieved my goal.From my angle alone,Im firmly convinced that there isno doubt that everyone will make mistakes but what countsis that we are supposed to learn something from them.,(楼斐斐),Lets practise,Mistakes are where success lies.(金华十校)结合自己生活中的例子说明,Honesty is the best policy.（杭州）谈谈你的看法并举例说明,No body can causally succeed.It comes from the thorough self-control and the will.(名校创新冲刺卷二)谈谈你的看法并举例说明,Your future depends on many things,but mostly on you.（2012浙江）谈谈你的看法并举例说明理由,You cant choose what you are given,but you can choose how you make use of it.(2012 湖北)结合事例写一篇文章,Cloze text,For months,any boredom or disappointment I faced was 27 because I knew I would soon have the 28 to be a real model.27.A.pushed aside B.left out C.turned down D.put away,D,43.6%,Cloze text,For months,any boredom or disappointment I faced was 27 because I knew I would soon have the 28 to be a real model.27.A.B.left out C.turned down D.put away,pushed aside,Common Mistakes:,1.The mistakes of the title:,(1).Spelling mistakes,(2).Grammatical mistakes,(3).No title,Failness taught me a lesson,(1)Mistake,Cheat in the exam taught me a lesson,Cheating in the exam taught me a lesson,2.The mistakes of the example:,(2).The example is not relevant to the topic.,(1).No example,3.The mistakes of the structure:,(1).Pear-shaped passage:,(2).Strawberry-shaped passage:,(too many comments),(the example is too long),(3).The example is not brief enough,(4).Unclear objective definition(对象界定不明),(4)mistake,(4)Mistake,Failure taught me a lesson,