初中英语Using an outline to write a topic composition课件.ppt

Using an outline to write a topic composition,Chengguan Middle School Ma Liyang,Free talk,What can we do on the Internet?,If you spend too much time on the Internet,what will happen?,Compare(比较),Most students think that the Internet is very useful in our life.First of all,we can learn a lot from the Internet.We can also listen to music and enjoy movies for fun.Besides,we can do some shopping.However,some other students feel differently.There are lots of unhealthy pictures or movies on the Internet.They make students lose interest in their study.,Different students have different ideas about the Internet.Most students think that the Internet is very useful in our daily life.First of all,we can learn news from all over the world.When we are free,we can also listen to music and watch movies for enjoyment.Besides,its convenient for us to do some shopping on the Internet.However,some other students feel differently.There is lots of bad information on the Internet.It will have a bad influence on us.In my opinion,we should stay away from the unhealthy websites and make good use of the Internet.Only in this way,it can help us a lot.,Topic,On the Internet,Beginning,Body正文,Ending,Most students think,Key sentence2,Key sentence1,However,feel differently,In my opinion,Only in this way,First of all,also,Besides,Outline(提纲),Different people have different ideas about.,learn from,When,listen to,enjoy,its convenient for us,bad information,have a bad influence,stay away from,make good use of,help a lot,Supporting sentences,Different students have different ideas about the Internet.Most students think that the Internet is very useful in our daily life.First of all,we can learn news from all over the world.When we are free,we can also listen to music and watch movies for enjoyment.Besides,its convenient for us to go shopping on the Internet.However,some other students feel differently.There is lots of bad information on the Internet.It will have a bad influence on us.In my opinion,we should stay away from the unhealthy websites and make good use of the Internet.Only in this way,it can help us a lot.,Linking words(连接词),Can you retell the composition according to the outline?,Outline(提纲),Retell(复述),Writing strategy:,It is helpful to make an outline before writing.写作前制定提纲对写作是有帮助的。,Topic,On the Internet,Beginning,Body正文,Ending,Most students think,Key sentence2,Key sentence1,However,feel differently,In my opinion,Only in this way,First of all,also,Besides,Different people have different ideas about.,learn from,When,listen to,enjoy,its convenient for us,bad information,have a bad influence,stat away from,make good use of,help a lot,Supporting sentences,Complete the composition with the linking words given.,Practice,Whats worse,However,also,On the other hand,Besides,Find out some good sentences in the composition.,Recently we held a discussion about whether the students should use mobile phones at school or not.Some of us think mobile phones should be used at school.First of all,we can surf the Internet for information we need.With mobile phones,we can _ play games for enjoyment in our free time._,we can call our parents easily._,some other students dont think so.Some students send messages to their friends on mobile phones in class,which is bad for their study._,we can use the school public phones instead of mobile phones._,keeping a mobile phone costs much money.In my view,its not a good idea to use mobile phones at school because it makes no differences to improving our study.,班长在主题班会课上组织大家讨论“看电视对九年级学生是否有好处？”，请你根据表格内容写一篇英文发言稿，陈述同学们的观点及理由，并附上你的观点及理由。,Write,Topic:Is it good for students in Grade Nine to watch TV?,Body,Ending,(),Beginning,we held a discussion about if.,Activity 1:Write an outline,(have a bad influence on),(open up ones eyes),Write,Tips:1.Use some linking words correctly if necessary.2.Use one or two good sentences.,In our theme class meeting,we held a discussion about if it is good for students in Grade Nine to watch TV._,Activity 2:Write a composition(about 100 words),Homework,Read your composition again and try to make it more beautiful!,【2012 黄冈】第三节书面表达(1 题，满分10 分)随着网络的发展，人们消费观念的转变，购物方式也在悄然地发生变化。“网购”成为一种时尚，越来越多的学生也正加入到网购群体当中。请你根据以下表格的提示，写一篇网上购物的文章。注意：所表述的内容必须包含表格中的所有方面；文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称及其它相关信息，否则不予评分；词数：80 词左右，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。提示词汇：网购shopping on line;避免做某事avoid doing sth;商品goods;导致cause With the development of the Internet,many people are used to shopping on line.,One possible version:With the development of the Internet,many people are used to shopping on line.It has become a fashion in our daily life.Some of us students also join the group.Shopping on line has many advantages.Just by a click of the mouse,you can buy what youre interested in without going outdoors.You can avoid getting tired and being trapped in the crowded people and cars and save time.When shopping on line,you can choose from more varieties of goods,whose prices are generally lower.Every coin has two sides.Its disadvantages are obvious,too.On one hand,its very easy for you to buy goods different from the pictures you see on the Internet.On the other hand,shopping on line may cause people to buy goods that are not badly needed.Thats a waste of money.As for shopping online,I like it,because things there are much cheaper and I dont need to walk to the shops,which helps me save time.No matter where to shop,I enjoy it because its really relaxing.,One Possible Version:Im a junior high school student from Jiangxi.In my spare time,I like shopping.There is a supermarket in my town.Lots of things are being sold there.So I often go there with my mother to buy school things,food and drinks.Of course,sometimes I want to buy something expensive.An MP4 player is what I want most,but I cant afford it now.Im going to work for an English club during this summer holiday and make some money for it.We teenagers should not always ask our parents for money.As for shopping online,I like it,because things there are much cheaper and I dont need to walk to the shops,which helps me save time.No matter where to shop,I enjoy it because its really relaxing.,In our theme class meeting,we held a discussion about if we students in Grade 9 can watch TV.Some of us think that we can watch TV at home although we are in Grade Nine.Watching TV can make us relaxed after a days hard work.Whats more,it can help me learn a lot and open up our eyes to the outside world.However,some other students disagree.They think watching TV is a waste of time and it has a bad influence on our study.They also think it is bad for our eyes if we watch TV too often.In my opinion,we can watch TV on weekends,but not on weekdays.We should spend enough time on our study.On the other hand,we also need to relax!,While you are making an outline,write down some verbs and phrasal verbs you will use in your composition.,Writing suggestions:,While you are writing the composition,use some linking words correctly to make it more fluent.,On the Internet Different students have different ideas about the Internet.Most students agree that the Internet is a useful tool in our life.First of all,we can learn a lot from the Internet,such as reading different kinds of books and learning foreign languages by ourselves.Secondly,we can listen to music and enjoy movies for fun.Finally,the Internet makes our life more convenient because we can do some shopping and chat with friends on it.However,some other students feel differently.There are lots of unhealthy pictures or movies on the Internet.They make students lose interest in their study.Besides,some students are cheated while they are surfing the Internet.In my opinion,we should make good use of it and stay away from the unhealthy websites.Only in this way,the Internet can help us students a lot.,“中学生是否可以在校使用手机？”你班就此话题进行了讨论。请你根据以下记录表写一篇短文，陈述讨论结果，并发表你的观点。,班长打算在主题班会课上组织大家讨论“九年级学生是否可以看电视？”，请你根据表格内容及自己的体验写一篇英文发言稿。(提示词：达成共识：have an agreement),Write,Topic,On watching TV,Beginning,Body正文,Ending,(),(),We have an agreement that,Its a good question to.,Key sentence2,_,_,Supporting sentences,Writing suggestion1:while you are making an outline,write down some verbs and phrasal verbs you will use in your composition.,Key sentence2,Recently we held a discussion about whether the students should use mobile phones at school or not.Some of us think mobile phones should be used at school.First of all,we can surf the Internet for information we need.With mobile phones,we can also play games for fun in our free time.Besides,we can call our parents easily.However,some other students dont think so.Some students send messages on mobile phones in class.On the other hand,we can use the school public phones instead of mobile phones.Whats worse,keeping a mobile phone costs money.In my opinion,its not a good idea to use mobile phones at school.If we do that,we will concentrate more on our mobile phones than our studies.,First of all,also,Besides,Practice2,Make an outline for the composition.,Topic,On mobile phones,Beginning,Body正文,Ending,Some of us,Key sentence2,Key sentence1,However,In my opinion,its not a good idea,If we do that,Whats worse,whether the students should use.,surf the Internet,play games,call easily,send messages,use,On the other hand,cost money,Supporting sentences,Recently we held a discussion about whether the students should use mobile phones at school or not.Some of us think mobile phones should be used at school.First of all,we can surf the Internet for information we need.With mobile phones,we can also play games for enjoyment in our free time.Besides,we can call our parents easily.However,some other students dont think so.Some students send messages on mobile phones in class,which is bad for our study.On the other hand,we can use the school public phones instead of mobile phones.Whats worse,keeping a mobile phone costs much money.In my opinion,its not a good idea to use mobile phones at school.In my view,its not a good idea to use mobile phones at school because it makes no differences to improving our study.,First of all,also,Besides,Practice2,Underline the two key sentences of the body and circle the ending.,Topic,On mobile phones,Beginning,Body正文,Ending,Some of us,Key sentence2,Key sentence1,However,In my opinion,its not a good idea,If we do that,Whats worse,whether the students should use.,surf the Internet,play games,call easily,send messages,use,On the other hand,cost money,Supporting sentences,