八年级英语上期末期末专项复习写作训练 教学课件.pptx
期末专项复习写作训练,A.常见题型：talk in your group 1、根据汉语提示完成作文。2、根据表格提示完成作文。3、根据图片提示完成作文。要求：写一篇60-80字左右的英语作文。,书面表达常见题型及写作技巧,B.写作策略:please,remember!,审 列 整 连 美草稿纸,抄试卷,Introduce your friend,假如Lily是你最好的朋友，请你从以下几个方面向大家介绍她：（1）和你一样高；大眼睛黑头发。（2）与你爱好相同，都喜欢运动；每周锻炼三次；有时上网；喜欢看英文电影。（3）乐于助人，帮你学数学。（4）聪明，在校学习努力，成绩好。应向她学习。,写作示例,认真审题，分析背景,找出文章要表达的中心。,写作第一步,审,英语书面表达写作技巧,Introduce your friend,假如Lily是你最好的朋友，请你从以下几个方面向大家介绍她：（1）和你一样高；大眼睛黑头发。（2）与你爱好相同，都喜欢运动；每周锻炼三次；有时上网；喜欢看英文电影。（3）乐于助人，帮你学数学。（4）聪明，在校学习努力，成绩好。应向她学习。,英语书面表达写作技巧,审,文章背景,用核心词汇或短语列出文章要点。,列,写作第二步,英语书面表达写作技巧,Introduce your friend,假如Lily是你最好的朋友，请你从以下几个方面向大家介绍她：（1）和你一样高；大眼睛黑头发。（2）与你爱好相同，都喜欢运动；每周锻炼三次；有时上网；喜欢看英文电影。,英语书面表达写作技巧,列,best friend,as tall as me,big eyes,black hair,have the same hobby as me,both like doing sports,exercise three times a week,use the Internet,enjoy/like watching English movies,Introduce your friend,假如Lily是你最好的朋友，请你从以下几个方面向大家介绍她：（1）和你一样高；大眼睛黑头发。（2）与你爱好相同，都喜欢运动；每周锻炼三次；有时上网；喜欢看英文电影。（3）乐于助人，帮你学数学。（4）聪明，在校学习努力，成绩好。应向她学习。,英语书面表达写作技巧,列,be ready to help others,help me with math,clever/smart,get/have good grades,work/study hard at school,learn from her,将列出的核心词汇或短语整理成句子,使结构完整，符合表达习惯。,写作第三步,整,英语书面表达写作技巧,她,她有,Lily is my best friend.,She is as tall as me.She has big eyes and black hair.,整,她,我们,并且我们,我们,一起,我们都,She has the same hobby as me,we both like doing,and we exercise three times a week.,sports,We sometimes use the internet together.,We both like watching English movies.,(0)Lily是我最好的朋友。(1)和我一样高，大眼睛黑头发。(2)与我爱好相同，都喜欢运动，每周锻炼三次。有时 上网，喜欢看英文电影。,整,她,She is ready to help others.,she often helps me with math.,she always gets good grades.,She is very smart and she studies hard at school.,I should learn from her.,她经常,她很,并且她,她,我,(3)乐于助人，帮我学数学。(4)聪明，在校学习努力，成绩好。应向她学习。,连,恰当运用关联词句，使得文章层次清晰，各个部分衔接自然。,写作第四步：,英语书面表达写作技巧,1.表示并列或递进:and,bothand;not onlybut also,neithernor;2.表示条件:if3.表示顺序:first,next，then,finally;4.表示因果:because,so;5.表示选择:or,eitheror;6.表示解释:for example,such as;7.表示转折:but,however,关联词,Lily is my best friend.She is as tall as me.She has big eyes and black hair.She has the same hobby as me.we both like doing sports.and we exercise three times a week.We sometimes use the internet together.we both like watching English movies.She is ready to help others.she often helps me with math.She is very smart and she studies hard at school.she always gets good grades.I should learn from her.,连,Whats more,美,修改词句，美化文章。在有把握的情况下改变句式或添加语句，展示自己的语言功底。,写作第五步：,英语书面表达写作技巧,Lily is my best friend.She is as tall as me.She has big eyes and black hair.She has the same hobby as me.we both like doing sports.and we exercise three times a week.We sometimes use the internet together.Whats more,we both like watching English movies.She is ready to help others.she often helps me with math.She is very smart and she studies hard at school.Though she sometimes goes online，she always gets good grades.I should learn from her.,美,适当发挥,She is not only friendly but also ready to help others.(转变表达方式),将草稿认真抄写到答题纸上，一定注意书写的注意事项。,写作第六步,抄,英语书面表达写作技巧,Lily is my best friend.She is as tall as me.She has big eyes and black hair.She has the same hobby as me.we both like doing sports.and we exercise three times a week.We sometimes use the internet together.Whats more,we both like watching English movies.She is not only friendly but also ready to help others.she often helps me with math.She is very smart and she studies hard at school.Though she sometimes goes online，she always gets good grades.I should learn from her.,抄,注意书写,Summary书面表达写作技巧,审,列,整,连,美,草稿纸,答题纸,抄 pay attention to your handwriting!,
