高三英语写作指导(共26张)课件.ppt

Writing Practice,For Senior Three,Writing PracticeFor Senior Thr,pre-writing,while-writing,post-writing,Learn the,writing,process,Practice,using,writing,strategies,1,2,3,Learn the,good,structure of,a passage,Objectives,pre-writingwhile-writingpost-w,pre-writing,while-writing,post-writing,1,2,3,4,5,6,You can give it to whomever you choose.,You can give it as often as you choose.,It is always appreciated and may do more good than,you will ever know.,It costs you nothing to give it,absolutely free.,You can give it to many people at the same time,.,It requires no special equipment.,Can you Guess?,pre-writingwhile-writingpost-w,pre-writing,while-writing,post-writing,pre-writingwhile-writingpost-w,pre-writing,while-writing,post-writing,Appreciation,A poem:Let Us Smile,Which sentence is repeated in,the poem?Why?,pre-writingwhile-writingpost-w,pre-writing,while-writing,post-writing,Let Us Smile,The thing that goes the farthest toward,making life worthwhile,That costs the least and does the most,is,just a pleasant smile.,The smile that bubbles(,冒出,)from the heart,that loves its fellow men,Will drive away the clouds of gloom(,朦胧,)and,coax(,收获,)the Sun again.,Its full of worth and goodness,too,with,manly kindness blend(,融合,);,Its worth a million dollars,and it doesnt cost,a cent.,There is no room for sadness when we see a,pre-writingwhile-writingpost-w,pre-writing,while-writing,post-writing,某英语报社拟成立“微笑俱乐部”，现向全,球,征募会员。要求申请者提交一篇题为“,I want to,Smile”,的英语短文。请你以申请者的身份，根据,以下思路图的提示用英语写一篇短文。,注意：,根据思路图适当展开，以使行文连贯；,词数：,120,左右,Writing,pre-writingwhile-writingpost-w,pre-writing,while-writing,post-writing,I want to smile,pre-writingwhile-writingpost-w,pre-writing,while-writing,post-writing,Base bread,Fillings,Top bread,Body/content,Concluding paragraph,(Conclusion),How to make the junk food healthy?,What makes a good writing?,Hamburger writing,Topic paragraph,(Introduction),pre-writingwhile-writingpost-w,pre-writing,while-writing,post-writing,Proper linking words,Advanced,vocabulary,Varied sentence,patterns,Vegetables,salad,butter,meat,Hamburger writing,pre-writingwhile-writingpost-w,pre-writing,while-writing,post-writing,Layout(Arrangement),Para.4,Conclusion,Para.1,Introduction,The advantages of smiling,I want to smile at my,(the reasons),Para.2,Body,Para.3,Body,I want to smile at myself,(the reasons),In a word,Planning,pre-writingwhile-writingpost-w,pre-writing,while-writing,post-writing,Brainstorming,Advantages,of smiling,raise confidence,relieve our,burdens,escape the,pressure,cut down,the distance,clear up,misunderstanding,kick sorrow away,pre-writingwhile-writingpost-w,pre-writing,while-writing,post-writing,Note-writing,I want to smile at my parents or,friends or,The reasons:First,Second,I want to smile at myself,The reasons:,Besides/In addition,help me out of many difficulties,comfort me when Im upset,stand by me and care about me,.,live a better life,be much more energetic,lead me to success,give me courage to get over all difficulties,pre-writingwhile-writingpost-w,pre-writing,while-writing,post-writing,Good endings,1),End with a summary,In a word,I want to smile.Only in this way can I,2),End by restating the main idea in another way,In a word,a smile is.So I want to smile.,3),End by calling for action,In a word,I want to smile.My fellow students,.,please.,4),End with wishes,If everyone smiles at,our world will be,pre-writingwhile-writingpost-w,pre-writing,while-writing,post-writing,Writing Tips,1.Try to use advanced vocabulary.,2.Try to use some varied sentence,patterns.,3.Try to use proper linking words.,Drafting,pre-writingwhile-writingpost-w,pre-writing,while-writing,post-writing,Checking and polishing,ASSESSMENT,Structure,Is the essay divided into,parts,?,Does each part have,a topic sentence,?,Content,Are,all the details,stated?,Is everything,to the point,(,切题,)?,Language,Does the writer use any,linking words,?,Are there any mistakes?,Is there any,advanced vocabulary,?,Are there any,good sentence patterns,?,pre-writingwhile-writingpost-w,pre-writing,while-writing,post-writing,What,s more,Smile,at,my,parents,or,friends,is,important.,It,can,make,you,getting,on,well,with,your,parents,and,friends,no,argues,and,no,fightings.,Smiling,is,a,make,friendss,way.,get,Smiling,Its of great importance to smile at,help you to get,with no arguments or fights,means of communication,by which I can,make more friends.,How to improve it?,pre-writingwhile-writingpost-w,pre-writing,while-writing,post-writing,Checking and polishing,ASSESSMENT,Structure,Is the essay divided into,parts,?,Does each part have,a topic sentence,?,Content,Are,all the details,stated?,Is everything,to the point,(,切题,)?,Language,Does the writer use any,linking words,?,Are there any mistakes?,Is there any,advanced vocabulary,?,Are there any,good sentence patterns,?,Displaying and evaluating,pre-writingwhile-writingpost-w,pre-writing,while-writing,post-writing,1.,The good structure of a passage,2.,Writing process,3.Practice using writing techniques:,paragraph planning;brainstorming;,note-writing;drafting;checking;,polishing,Summary,pre-writingwhile-writingpost-w,pre-writing,while-writing,post-writing,pre-writingwhile-writingpost-w,pre-writing,while-writing,post-writing,Finish writing and develop it,into a complete passage in,about 120 words.,Homework,pre-writingwhile-writingpost-w,pre-writing,while-writing,post-writing,Good beginnings,1)Begin with a saying or a proverb,As an old saying goes,a smile makes a young man.,There is an old saying goes,youll be young if,you always smile.,2)Begin with a question,Do you think a smile will make people beautiful?,Would you like to smile?As we all know,we can,benefit from smile a lot.,pre-writingwhile-writingpost-w,pre-writing,while-writing,post-writing,Good beginnings,3)Begin with a generalization,Its universally acknowledged that smiling is,of great benefit to our daily life.,4)Begin with an,example,There are many advantages of smiling.For,instance,smiling can help me to have a happy,feeling.,It is good for us to smile.For example,smiling,can release the pressure from study and life,which helps us.,pre-writingwhile-writingpost-w,pre-writing,while-writing,post-writing,As is generally acknowledged,smiling,plays a really significant part,in our life.,First,of all,it shows that you are friendly and will,bring you others,appreciation.Besides,it,can,relieve our burden,and make ourselves,more confident,thus,ensuring us high,spirits and enough enthusiasm to face,difficulties.,An excellent composition,pre-writingwhile-writingpost-w,pre-writing,while-writing,post-writing,So I want to smile,and,there at least exist,several,people at whom I will smile.Firstly,I will smile at my,parents for their,sacrificing a lot to bring me up,.,In,addition,my friends,deserve,my smile because they,are the ones who believe in me and help me out of,many problems.Last but not least,I will smile at my,teacher for their,constant encouragement,and,great,devotion to my progress,.,An excellent composition,pre-writingwhile-writingpost-w,pre-writing,while-writing,post-writing,And I will also smile at myself for it,certainly will benefit me quite a lot,.,Given a,big smile,I,ll be much more energetic to,finish my work.,In a word,I want to smile at everyone,around me to bring everyone a smiling day.,An excellent composition,pre-writingwhile-writingpost-w,